The Otaku’s Beauty Clone

Tell me what you think The beginning is still very attractive, with alluring beauties, invincible sword demons, and those fierce-looking suitors, etc. But having many suitors does not mean getting married. Let's not talk about reality. From the perspective of the novel, the other half in Invincible is actually very difficult to describe. Otherwise, it must be the childhood sweetheart since childhood, or else They are all kinds of beauties that they meet by chance, but they don't write about them in detail at all. The ink is mostly on the protagonist, which will make the protagonist's other half very embarrassed. The personality is not obvious enough, the character description is not detailed enough, the psychological description is not detailed enough, etc. Therefore, some authors simply let Wuweiwen be single all the time, so as not to be unable to hold the pen and write the other half to death, etc. I hope this one is also single, either single or lily will only destroy the main character of the book in the end. Because in the Invincible novel, she is invincible and no one is worthy of her. Forcibly writing about the other half will only make you unable to hold the pen and lead to collapse, and may even affect the direction of the protagonist and the plot. The middle period is obviously a bit long-winded. Some of the plots and details are described so carefully that the whole story even looks like a literary youth. In this fast-paced society, online novels are not very popular among literary youth, because you write books to subscribe, rather than taking books to participate in various competitions. The author seems to have overlooked the most important point. The most important thing about invincible novels is to be happy. Why Teacher Saitama is popular is because he is happy enough. Whether it is the pinnacle of the human race or the supreme of the demon world, as long as the man (guang) comes out, readers will not worry about failure at all, because that man will not fail at all. We only need to watch the villain pretending to be cool and then be punched to death by Teacher Saitama. But the author's ink at this stage is obviously focused on the second true body. For the first true body, the second true body, which is already in the first level of heaven, has been fighting for a long time, let alone a third level peak. It took several chapters to finish. This invisibly gives the reader an illusion. This invincible article is not exciting enough and uncomfortable to read. You must be over-counting the words. Whether you admit it or deny it, this kind of plot is in In the eyes of readers, we are just fools. In fact, we are very unreasonable and very reasonable people. We know that the first real body needs to practice and go into retreat. When the second real body is suppressed by the third level peak, we still hope that the first real body can come out and hit him. Punching this sb with one punch is the plot we like to watch, instead of the second real body using up all the strength for a long time to beat the first real body to death. Just look at him and stare him to death. This is like a big boss in the technology industry coming to a very ordinary school to give a lecture, talking about the future of mankind, the current situation and other things for a long time, but in the eyes of the big boss with the same status, it seems that you are full and have nothing to do. I hope the author can refer to other series of invincible novels to figure out what invincible novels are, when they should be exciting, when they should be suppressed (even without suppressing) and when they can give readers the feeling of exhilaration that they have been holding in for a long time. I say all this so that the author can write this book better, not because I am unhappy with you and think you are not good enough. I will come to bb for half a day to show off. If it is the latter, I will not spend money to read your book. Already fully subscribed, I hope the author can improve it, write better, and get more subscriptions.

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I wonder why there are so many poisonous points in novels nowadays. In the past, only the plots that were too disgusting were called poisonous points. Now, everything you read is poisonous. The harem is a poisonous point, adopting a daughter is a poisonous point, transformation is a poisonous point, the heroine is a poisonous point, the second dimension is a poisonous point... Good guy, if you put it in the previous Internet literary circle, you can't read any book. I suggest you join traditional literature and despise the entire Internet literary circle.

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What you write, author, is quite good. However, it is better to write less about those who always grab something, and then the protagonist slaps his face and pretends to be anxious to increase his strength. Now many people are tired of aesthetics. The world is still beautiful and there are not so many bad people. It is wrong for the protagonist to want to break other people's hands and feet, unless there are special circumstances. There are always people from so many departments in the country who can help. Don't think so dark😅😅

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I've just read less than a chapter. The author's writing is very good, but the main character is a woman. Others say this is because she changed it. Then I suggest changing the title of the work, from otaku to otaku, or simply call it beauty's clone.

Things were going well in the beginning, but things started to get worse after I adopted the girl. In addition, I heard that the second part is getting more and more fantasy-like, and I feel like I have lost the desire to continue reading. . .

Dear book friends, please recommend similar books, thank you!

This is an absolute failure, the biggest poisonous point of this book. Absolutely good idea, but it was defeated by the author himself. What a pity for a good book.