Twenty Years in Business

Simply put, this is a good book and a seedling. Why are you calling it a seedling when it has hundreds of chapters? First of all, let me say that I have only seen more than a hundred chapters. After reading so much content, the most intuitive feeling is that the overall situation of Erjing is quite complete, and the outline is also very complete, and there is no random word count. The plot is also full of ups and downs, which made me sink in while watching it. Let me talk about one of the small flaws first. In the early part of the book, there are many plot points, but the writing is not full and it feels like a high-end anecdote. If we can carefully distinguish the priorities, the effect will be better. Of course, if the author's writing power is strong enough and a few words can be written clearly, then this will be a highlight! I can also understand that the author will be anxious when the data in the early stage of writing a book is not very good, which affects his mentality. In addition, it is a common problem for novices. They often want to quickly show what they want to say, and they can't help but push the plot too fast, causing the content to be less informative. But it seems to have improved when it was put on the shelves. I'll talk about it in a few days after I finish reading the rest of it. Then I would like to say a few words to the readers about some people's vicious and vicious comments. I don't want to refute it, because reality is often more bloody than literary works, and many plots cannot be made up just by you. In the opinion of many experienced people, these plots are just simplified and written out of some things in reality. ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​OUT out of mind whether they had a premonition of what was going on or not, when the final incident was revealed, their hearts were agitated. This is the charm of a good book. Then let me give you some suggestions or expectations for the author. From the subject matter and the general direction of this book, there is no doubt that there is a lot to be done, and the author is also very thoughtful in this regard and has content to write. Let me remind you, the outline must not collapse, and it is best if the outline is thinner. As long as it doesn't involve every specific plot, the outline is the most stable steering wheel. Then I hope that the author's writing style will become better and better. This is the magic weapon and artifact that determines whether he can become a god. I personally have read "Rebirth: My Second Uncle", "My 1979", and "The Great Era 1994". These books have some merits in their descriptions of characters and specific plots. I hope that the author's characters can quickly take shape and leave a deep impression on people. Finally, let's advertise. Looking at the data on recommended monthly tickets, I feel like I've been wronged by this book. If you have an author you know well, you can ask someone to recommend your book, and I'll help you place a small advertisement first.

It has been less than ten days since I came to Qidian to read. I finally found this good book among the dazzling collection of books. Why did I say yes? First, because I personally prefer realistic novels. The second reason is because the author's writing style is good! The content of the article is wonderful! It's gripping, not flashy! The most classic sentence, "Get some sleep, and you will still be awesome tomorrow!" In fact, the whole text does not only write about the protagonist who is the most awesome, every supporting character is also portrayed very well! I am also a little proud and feel that I have chosen this book very discerningly! I have read more than 800 chapters in a row and I am still not satisfied with it! Because I really like this book, I tried to catch up with the latest chapter in the early stage, but now that I am very close to the latest chapter, I feel a little reluctant to read it too fast! The days of waiting for updates are really heart-breaking! Ha ha! As a huge fan of this book, I sincerely hope this book becomes a hit! I would also recommend it to friends who love reading as much as I do! ! 😘Well God! Come on! ! ! (Compare your heart)

When reading, my heart will calm down and I will be involved in the plot. As the plot develops, I will feel the joy and sorrow of the characters. This feeling seems to be rare in this impetuous society. And I copied the content of the first chapter and analyzed it carefully. I felt that the sentences were concise but well expressed the characters and the house. At that time, I remembered one sentence and wrote down the appearance, characteristics and environment of the house. My writing skills were evident! I especially want to ask why the author's writing style is so good, but I also think that good works should be analyzed more. For example, when reading, read the thick book first, and then read the thin book. What you digest in this way will benefit you a lot!

Discouraged from the beginning! The whole village doesn't like it! No one came to the funeral? How unpopular is this?

It's very poisonous. It's good at the beginning, but it's hard to explain later. The protagonist knew that Shi Lei's brother Ishikawa Chuan was deceived from the beginning to the end. In the end, the protagonist didn't do anything. Instead, he was defrauded of his money and went to beat up the liar. He paid one million and ignored it. You said that Liu Jie was raped before and didn't call the police because of her reputation. It's understandable why she didn't call the police. She could have sent her enemy to jail for this matter. Isn't that revenge? Also, when I left Yuanda, I didn't want 2 million, saying that I would be sorry for my conscience if I took it. Damn, 20 million was considered a small amount for what the protagonist did in the book. I forced myself to pretend to be 13 points. Oh, it was too poisonous.

To be honest. I don't mean to discredit the author. I couldn't stand it until I finished the first chapter. I can honestly say that the author has good writing skills, but lacks life experience and insights. It looks like a third-rate TV series. An important point to mention is that the author has no understanding of the acquaintance society in rural areas. Don't use rural acquaintances at all. The people write in such a way that they are superstitious, ignorant and ignorant. Farmers are not callous and indifferent. In fact, it is just the opposite. City people are more ruthless and indifferent. Who builds a house in the countryside? People in the village help for free. They help at weddings and funerals. They help each other with farm work. No IOUs are required when borrowing money. This is the real countryside.

The author's writing is good, but I still gave up on the book. He wrote so many female protagonists, but ended up not having a harem, especially when he randomly assigned Du Mengni to a passerby. It was so boring. Bai Lu and Zhou Zhou will probably belong to someone else in the future! No more, never see you again!

It's really not good. A tragic character is written in a savior-like style. He has been in business for twenty years and has always been a wage earner. Let's just change the title and make him a wage earner for twenty years.

The writing is not good, it is divorced from reality, it is deliberately made miserable, and the characterization is not good. The protagonist always feels that others look down on him, and others look at him with contempt. I even wonder if the author lacks love! Do you think people all over the world are hostile? So unconfident, the writing is really equivalent to the middle school level, the social experience is almost 0, the ability to deal with interpersonal relationships is 0, it is either a slap in the face or a shock, where is the IQ and EQ? The protagonist's thoughts and actions are just like those of a child who has not experienced the world. The author who has writing skills can do whatever he wants and it is vivid, while the author who has no writing skills is full of devastation and loopholes.

After trying the beginning, I was persuaded to quit... Generally speaking, I feel that this book is suitable for people who yearn for college life. It's not that the writing is not good, but the events and logic are too ideal. Maybe the author hopes that this book can be changed into a youth TV series... Let me write down the details: 1. University presidents are very busy, and you can't meet them just because you want to see them. Even the president of the worst university is at the deputy department or bureau level. People are either presiding over meetings or working on the front line of scientific research; 2. Students' emotions and behavior in universities are too idealistic. Luocheng University should correspond to Nanjing University, and it can't be Luoyang Institute of Technology (if it is, a child with perfect scores in the math college entrance examination, go to Luoyang Institute of Technology, believe it or not) The entire admissions office of Zheng University knelt at the gate to apologize. By the way, no one who can get into Nanjing University (not Luoyang University) is a fool. No one is stupid enough to start a feud at the beginning of school, and it is impossible to fight with someone on the first day of school who may not come the next day. Are you using the school rules as a napkin? Or do we just do it together as brothers? No matter what the reason is in the university, as long as there is a gathering of people to fight, you will be expelled directly; 3. Prices are not rigorous. Please find out the prices in 1998. I will throw away 5,000. An ordinary part-time job will cost 10,000 in tuition. Tutoring is 100 an hour. Roommates have mobile phones. Do you think it is now 2021? The average monthly salary in Shanghai in 1998 was only more than 1,000. At that time, the house price in Shanghai was 2,500 per square meter. At that time, a mobile phone cost more than 5,000. , Can crack walnuts; 4. There are so many miscellaneous things in college, maybe the author wants college life to be more colorful, but in reality, college life in 1998: bragging, going downstairs to howl, opening water, chewing books and still chewing books. You know, the university only expanded enrollment in 1999. Things like what the author describes happened more after 10 years. You even went to bed, threw condoms... Do this in 1998, and your deeds are spread throughout the school. 5. Campus beauties... Maybe they have been poisoned too much by the Internet. Are there any alumni of Nanjing University? Can you tell me if there are any school beauties posted on BBS? Anyway, I went to a science and engineering university, and anyone who looks like Sister Feng can be the school beauties... So I have never heard of the ranking of school beauties...