Evil Mysterious Lord

So far, it seems that this book is quite good. I should continue to work hard and enrich myself. After all, there are too few topics on this subject.

Don't add too many Chinese elements to Western Fantasy

When will it appear? Is the owner a woman or a man? If she is a woman, does she have any dull hair?

With the addition of oriental elements, if the setting is too strong, it will dominate the scene, and if it is too weak, you will be criticized (ಡωಡ)

The Cthulhu Mythology has a very good theme, but since there is a clone of the evil god, writing it from the perspective of the evil god is more than a little better than your current way of killing monsters and upgrading.

Warning, the protagonist has no consciousness of becoming an evil god. He always wants to be a human being and has no ambition to make progress. This book is not worth reading for those who like evil gods.

I would like to make a comment. Of course it may be too late. Author, the protagonist is very confused now. . . I find that you seem to be "forcibly" correcting the protagonist's bias. Of the three rewards given by the priest of the Dark Church, it is normal not to choose the second one, but for some reason you skip the first one? Isn't the mysterious magic of Spirit Taming better than the fighting skill of Barton? If there is an evil god clone that can devour evil spirits, there is no need to worry about dangers such as backlash, right? Or are you a warrior? Wouldn't it be better to just get an Aries? Or the old routine of "double cultivation of magic and martial arts"? Or do you simply think that Gou is the king? Then you have to let the protagonist express this kind of thinking. . . There is also the appearance of spiritual numbers, which highlights a problem. Your plot is serving the protagonist, but the protagonist does not serve the plot. The spiritual numbers appear very abruptly. In my opinion, this is the content that appears to draw the protagonist into another organization. Among spells, alchemy, and fighting skills, you chose fighting skills, a route with obvious limits. Do you think spells need to be accumulated for a long time, and runes and fighting skills are not needed? This is unreasonable. Can you give me an answer?

Why is the novel not updated? Are you a eunuch?

In fact, it is very troublesome to bring this kind of book to China. The Cthulhu Mythos itself does not consider other mythological systems. Moreover, the way of thinking in the Western mythological system is different from that in the East. First of all, the combat effectiveness of this Eastern mysterious system is difficult to define. If you define China's Taozu weakly, readers will definitely be unhappy. If the definition is strong, then China will not be able to defeat even feudal European countries! And there are differences in mythological thinking between East and West China. In the West, humans and gods are separated, humans are humans, and gods are gods. There is an unbridgeable gap. In this way, even if someone transforms from a human into a god, it is still a secret for a few people. It's different in the East. Gods are mostly cultivated by humans, and those who become immortals still want to pass on the Taoism. Even if this road requires a lot of talent and luck to complete, there are so many Chinese people who can't stand it! With this accumulation of numbers, it is estimated that 10 gods from the East will beat one from the West. Compared with such exaggerated numbers, all the Western gods can't beat them together! So I feel that the author should not have set ancient China at the beginning. This setting would be too stressful and the book would easily collapse. The author could revise it and remove all Chinese references, so that the book would be much easier to read.

Is this the Great Old One? I only saw one octopus.

Can we go back to the construction of Dazhou?

The writing is obviously very good, so let's make excuses. Send the blade. Get the address

Author avatar praise (Morty)

The protagonist is so obsessed. There is a clone of the evil god who is not affected at all. He is forced to correct his three views and be a good boy. It's great.

I feel like this evil god's clone is of no use. I'm disappointed.

Is this the rhythm of the protagonist's participation in the revolution? A hundred years later, in an oil painting, Rock holds an umbrella under his arm and holds his head high, with mountains and rivers at his feet. The name of the oil painting is "Comrade Rock Goes to Rock Hill"

Ready for tj? Why should I write when the update is so unstable? I'm depressed.

Among the recent books written by Mr. Ke, this one is considered to be the best among the books of Secret Style 🌹🌹🌹🌹

First of all, the creativity is very good. The evil god adds the background of the steam era and virtual real history. This novel can actually be written, but if you really want to write it. Then it will most likely be very long. And it is a very big test for the author's writing ability. What is the author's problem? It's because he whitewashed the protagonist. This question has been raised by book friends. It was also weird when I was reading it. It was clear that he was a symbol of an evil god (so to speak), but he forcibly cleared himself and even "deleted" his "church". Isn't this strange? ? Don't you feel weird when you read it? The author may not have thought about this when he wrote it. It is precisely this that foreshadows the author's "unable to write". Another point: the author arranged for the protagonist to receive a large amount of money. The author didn't write a plot about using this money to invest and make money, and there wasn't even a single explanation in the book? ? ? 10,000 Gold pounds was not a small amount in Victorian England? Where's the money left after you go out and buy that haunted house? There is no complete explanation. Isn't this remaining capital the first step in the primitive accumulation of capital? Why not use this capital to create additional capital? ? What's more, the protagonist traveled from 2018, which is at least 150 years behind his contemporaries. Why not use the knowledge you have learned to make money? With a time difference of 150 years, isn't this an incredibly serious information asymmetry? Can I use this time difference to make money? How is it possible to go it alone after destroying your own "church"? Why not reveal your true existence, take control of this church, and use the church to develop your own power? Advice to authors: Writing a book does not mean I will stop writing if I can't continue. This book can be completely restarted, revise the previous plot, slowly revise it, listen to the opinions of book friends, listen to the good ones, and ignore the bad ones. It would be bad for you to write a book like this, write a little bit and say I can't write anymore and then throw it away. Your writing ability will not improve at all. I wonder if the author writes novels on the side. But when writing a novel, you either don't write it or you finish it. I can accept bad endings, but I don't like an author eunuch anymore. The ending of the chapter about mortals cultivating immortality and passing on to the human world was unfinished, but it was still finished. Finishing the book is the most important thing.

It's okay, but there's no one else who calls his own church a cult...

Let me ask, the Cthulhu Mythos shouldn't require much faith, right?

Could it be that the protagonist is the soul of the tentacle monster? After the body of the tentacle monster was awakened, the soul reincarnated in other worlds was sucked back into the body of this world. However, the body did not completely remove the seal, so it randomly found the body of a believer to possess it.

A new book for newcomers is updated every day, and it is better to keep updating, and then save the manuscript and advertise... There is no need to update twice, otherwise it will be ugly.

Why did you surrender? You shouldn't have exposed it secretly and then silenced the cult.

Good job. Go vote.

Appropriately reduce the intellectual aura of the supporting characters, or omit the psychological activities of the main and supporting characters, otherwise the main character will feel too unreliable.

Recommended by book friends on the forum. Although the subject matter is borrowed from the Lord of Best Friends, I think the author's description is more brilliant. Please support it with a recommendation vote.