Konoha Ichiban

The author just gave me a small role, the requirements are not high. I just want to be the father of Six Paths and survive until the finale 😌

Avoiding the sensitive blood inheritance and the vulgar war, the entry point is very unique. Accepting Kai as his disciple was a stroke of genius. The episode with Tsunade on the wild trip was also great. I hope the author will use his imagination to continue to explore the details in the original work and bring a different Naruto.

The writing is very good, but when it comes to the Hyōryō Pills, improvement is actually not a difficult matter. When preparing a wedding gift for Naruto in the later stages of the Naruto animation, Sakura and Ino competed in cooking. They made Hyōryō Pills, with chocolate powder and so on... And Choji served as the judge. This is a cooking competition, a cooking competition. It can be compared. Obviously, the Bingliang Pills themselves can be made very delicious. Otherwise, why would Choji ask for this competition if they all taste like herbs and have to be eaten?

Collect it first, then read it after you have fattened up. Three recommendation votes will be sent to you 😃

First of all, not everyone in the ninja world knows ninjutsu. For this point, you can refer to the Yahiko Nagato trio. The second shadow clone is a unique high-level clone technique created by the second generation Hokage Senju Tobirama. It should be unique to Konoha Village. And what is recorded on the seal scroll can be said to be a very important ninjutsu. The last one I hit was an outsider. If he was a ninja who knew ninjutsu, he would be put on alert.

Seedlings, I have collected them. I hope it has more elements of Naruto and its own characteristics. As far as I can see, the plot feels very familiar. I seem to have read it in other daddy stories. I hope the author will not disappoint me.

If comrades traveled back to Naruto, could they develop technology trees and weapons, or spread red ideas, engage in revolution, abolish ninjas, and establish a socialist country?

The protagonist just needs to help with construction and reform. If you expand your own business, you feel that fighting is meaningless. After all, you are tired of watching it. The protagonist should be a rear guard and specialize in cultivating talents and large-scale construction. After all, it is not a pity if you have such advanced ideas and subject knowledge. Anyway, you will be the protagonist when the time comes. It's enough to give an invincible force when fighting the big head, except for the two troublesome ones in the later stage, Banye and Big Eyes, but the combat power in the early stage is actually not very impressive, and I feel that the Hokage army is actually very unprofessional. I feel that it is not fully utilized. It can fight and can be built and dispatched like a full-time army.

It's best not to write about politics, systems, conspiracies or anything like that. First, you are writing a happy article, and it is not right to bring such an atmosphere; second, once you write something modern, you are asking the party to find fault. Everyone is in a different position on the implementation of a policy, has different benefits and losses, and has different views. The author is careful to be criticized. For example, I want to criticize. Third, the author has little experience. He just copied the book and then associated himself with the ideal state. He could not think of or write the details of the process, which seemed redundant when inserted in the middle of the text. Fourth, if the author had written these things well, then this book would no longer be this book.

Why not use points to upgrade Bamen Dunjia first and then use the free upgrade times? I feel like this is more cost-effective.

Also, the author, you probably update every few days.

Isn't it called hand beating? ? ? ?

Why are my book reviews gone...

The main character's name looks awkward!

This is a good book by the author. I hope it will continue. I will give it a recommendation vote.

I send you eight recommendation votes. The number of words is too small. I will keep it for now and recommend it to you every day. Stop being a eunuch...

Some book friends said that Otsutsuki Ichiraku is called hand-playing and feels awkward in the hands. In fact, hand fighting is also called hand. Ba Jian felt that the name was better, so he used hand. Everyone is welcome to vote. If the majority of people support hand beating, I will change it as soon as possible. If it is okay, then I will not change it.

This cultivationarrived in 8012

The plot is very good and looks very interesting. Good luck to the author! ! ! The only pity is... I am allergic to chili peppers, so I dare not and cannot eat Mapo tofu... Sigh... What does it taste like... 😍

Can the classification of ninjutsu be more detailed? For example, for Eight Door Dunjia, it would be a bit monotonous to only write about one physical technique, right? Change it to: Forbidden Technique: Isn't the Eight Gate Dunjia more interesting? There is also the Shadow Clone Technique. This kind of ninjutsu has no attributes (specifically, it does not have the properties of escape techniques such as wind, fire, water, earth, and thunder). Wouldn't it be more impressive to be called a ninjutsu? For example: Ninja Technique: Shadow Clone Technique, Ninpo Technique: Multiple Shadow Clone Technique, Ninpo Technique: Multiple Shadow Clone Technique, Ninpo Technique: Multiple Shadow Clone Technique, it feels more subtle, doesn't it? There are also differences between spiritualism and occult techniques, and don't forget about other blood stain escape techniques! Psychic: Ninja Dog, Psychic: Miaomu Mountain Contract (although it looks like a channeling item, but it can probably be understood, right?), Secret Technique: Insect Jade, Secret Technique: Heart Turning Technique, Ice Release: Ice Crystal Mirror, Dust Release: Original Realm Peeling, and physical skills can also be divided by genre: Rou Fist: Kaitian, Rou Fist: Guardian Bagua Sixty-Four Palms, Konoha Style Swordsmanship: Dance of the Three Suns and Moons, but the physical arts do not need to be so detailed. Except for "well-known brands" such as Rou Fist and Forbidden Techniques and some swordsmanship that require extra attention, the others can be classified into the general category of physical arts. . . Details are also a part that need to be paid attention to~ Sir author~