Brave Man's Holiday

Praise! The characterization of the characters is very good, not too facial, and more vivid.

After finishing the update, Chapter 16 is my favorite, but there is a typo. The death of Iskar did not shock or move me. It should be because there was not enough preparation for her before. The death of such a character is best in the middle and late stages of the work, but you may have some arrangements later, such as resurrection. But in this section of the death of the great sage, except for the surprise brought by the two sighs, there is no special feeling. In Chapter 26, the portrayal of Ma Ruili is much more exciting than that of the war, and I feel that your writing of the war is a bit like Beacon Fire. You like to use various third persons and side portraits to highlight the overall situation. I don't know if you intend to learn from it, but it feels like that. Then there are some small details. You need to change the names of your moves. Shakalaka, Xiu Xiu Xiu, they are really awesome; Lu Ziye, I really want her name to sound better, or written as a homophone like Lu Ziye; joj I did get the o-meme. It's a little awkward, just like goosebumps. Please use it with caution. However, when I was reading the book, I had forgotten that there was a mobile game hanging in the background. Maybe the charm of this book has just begun to be revealed!

I didn't expect that even a work like mine, which has no edge at all, would have chapters blocked, that's amazing.

It was originally a reply to the post downstairs that the protagonist was eating and waiting to die. There was a lot written about it, so I wanted to post it alone to share my experience. Downstairs, it was said that the protagonist lost the battle, and he didn't feel guilty or nervous, so he just wanted to take a vacation. It feels like a loser just hanging around and waiting to die. I think this actually makes some sense, but it's too much. Judging from the description, when protected, the protagonist is at the world-destroying level, and the teacher is stronger than the protagonist. Under this power system, it is very difficult for the protagonist to defeat the undead after losing power. On the battlefield where his teacher will die, there is really nothing he can do for a while. I think it still depends on the author's follow-up arrangements to trace why the power is gone. But the protagonist really needs to hurry up and start getting back to the top. In terms of teaching, I think it's pretty good. The protagonist's current strength is average, and teaching the newbies can be considered as a contribution to the best of his ability. It is not as serious as what LZ said (such as useless people waiting to die). As for him not being nervous, that's not the case. Several details still reveal the protagonist's mental state of worry about the Eastern Front. He said he wanted to take a vacation, but when he encountered something he couldn't tolerate (such as the undead desecrating the body of the dead), he still stepped forward without saying a word. I think this is quite qualified for a protagonist. At present, I can still accept this rhythm. Of course, it would be better if it was more compact and more exciting.

The usual protagonists are all unique, but this book has many characters, all of whom are interesting.

Most people, even with some extraordinary powers, cannot blow away the battlefield on their own.

The author should practice more. Temporary results do not mean permanent results. Poor results in the first book do not mean poor results in the future.

I feel that the subject matter is quite good, the characters are well described, and the NPCs and players are on different lines, and the world is seen from the NPC perspective.

I have been reading novels for 15 years. I can tell at a glance whether a book has potential or not. This book will be a hit within 2 months!

I just discovered this book. I really like the story. Although it was a bit depressing in the middle. I read the book for free before, so I came back and ordered it all. I hope there will be a few extra chapters to supplement the plot, the relationship between Shasha who wants to take a big knife and the president, and the players.

I discovered this book by accident, and I really think it's pretty good.

Try to find a way to gain popularity~

There are no absolute bad people in this world. What else can we do in order to survive?

For Lao Bai, this book is very interesting.

There are a few book friends who are chasing books. Do you want to show your face? You can reply downstairs. Format: Character name: Basic settings (race, age, gender, etc.): General personality:

Start a new book! That's it for this book, it's time to level up!

I fell into this trap during the book shortage period. Although the writing style is still very immature, the subject matter is novel, so I think it is a slow start. I hope the author can work hard. Many people have dreams of novels, but few put them into practice. We can only offer a trivial support without knowing the author's hardships.

There's nothing wrong with the author's writing style, but it's just not very interesting or exciting to read, but the update is awesome!

Many of the aristocratic children and guards who appeared were not educated at all, which is very strange.

I feel like with this theme and the beginning, those who don't eat fast food have generally seen similar ones, and those who eat fast food will naturally not be able to stand it (just like most fantasy novels).

It's finished. It has more than 60 chapters. The author needs to work hard. I look forward to your next work. It's great to finish it well.

The ending is okay, come on author, I hope you can move forward in the future

It's a pity that I didn't write it anymore.

A very interesting novel Although the results are very poor, I still hope the author will continue to work hard

Why are there so many good books? Is it because they can't retain people?

Is there a QQ group? When I meet a writer I like, I can't help but want to know more about it.

When does the author plan to publish a new book?

I have read a lot of novels, and I think the quality of this one is actually quite good. I just don't know why it hasn't become famous. Although I haven't finished it yet, please give it a try (ง •̀_•́)ง

In fact, the writing is still good. It took me a long time to find this book at the starting point. It's a pity that I found it too late.

In recent years, this type of fantasy novel seems to have not been very popular. There are many books with good writing styles and plots that are not very popular, such as "The Sage and the Maiden". The author had been autistic for a while when I last read it. . . One of the more popular magical fantasy books is The Witch with Two Eyes, but that book is from a farming genre, and traditional books of this type are really not popular. This is a game alien world, I guess. One of the authors who is good at game alien worlds, Scarlet Flame's Pillar of Ita, has a barely adequate score. I just want to say that it is really a pity that novels with this theme are not popular...