Pirate's Unparalleled Spear Soul

Newcomer? I won't complain anymore and say goodbye 🙏

Because the following plot requires some original supporting actors, and I haven't come up with a few after thinking about them for a long time, so I wanted to brainstorm some ideas😁. Dragon set name: Fruit ability: (It can also be a person without fruit abilities, pure swordsmanship or pure physical skills. Other weapons are also acceptable.) Affiliated strength: (If you have something that needs to be expressed in detail, you can join the QQ group and tell me more about your thoughts!)

The reason why you are fighting is because you wrote about ship-style. Nowadays, it is popular for navy or people to work alone. It is not good to write about ship-style. It is easy to write a story. Each of the core members of the Straw Hats has its own position. It is basically a sound whole. Adding the protagonist is really superfluous.

It's so embarrassing to watch, and the whole plot has no beginning or end. The protagonist activated the butterfly effect, but the subsequent result was too uncomfortable to see that there was no change at all from the original One Piece.

What the hell are you writing about? A man who can kill a man with the combat power of a major general actually fainted after hitting a railing. Are you sure you are writing about pirates? This physique is not even suitable for a naval soldier. What the hell are you writing about? In the world of pirates, physical strength is everything. Don't talk about devil fruits, devils. The basis of the fruit is physical strength. If you don't have physical strength, it will be used up once you use it. The damage is not high and it is useless. There is also an armed color. The constitution is rubbish and even the armed color cannot be awakened. So how can a person with such a weak constitution who can kill a major general kill those pirates? Also, the fighting scenes were poorly written. Those big pirates didn't have their own move names, but you don't. It's so funny

To be honest, it has the smallest number of readers among the Fushimi Pirates books, and it is also difficult to write. On the one hand, the original plot must be modified to make it more perfect. On the one hand, the butterfly effect must be maintained. If the effect is too small to modify the original plot, it will result in no drama and no attraction. Readers will feel that the whole process is simply a waste. If the effect is too great, it will change the direction of the original plot and cause the subsequent plot to collapse. Once the plot collapses, it becomes impossible to write. If you forcefully write it back, readers will find it too stiff and unreadable. If you don't write it back, you can only write original plots, but this breaks away from the so-called following the flow of others. The core of follow the boat flow is to let the protagonist do as much trouble as possible without deviating from the original plot direction. The things you do must make readers interested in reading and not feel unreasonable! Come on, author bacteria

Isn't a spear a gun? Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was about using a weapon such as a pistol. Sorry, goodbye.

It's so messy and incoherentthrough

One Piece fans shouldn't be associated with the protagonist of One Piece. Don't you know that it's embarrassing to be with a ship?

Are you planning a single heroine or a harem?

This face-saving fruit looks embarrassing. Is it changed to disguise or looks bad? Originally, the fruit of face was just a joke

When I was searching for novels, I typed "Hey, hey, hey," and you were recommended to me.

The writing is a bit poor, the description of the fighting is too rough, and there is no accurate description of the strength.

I thought it was a rifle, but after reading a few chapters I realized it was a long gun.

As soon as I saw the introduction and the flow of the boat, I left.

The first few chapters were very confusing, and I gave up when I saw the risqué words, which was too embarrassing.

I finally found the protagonist who used a gun, but after reading a few chapters, I was poisoned to death. In the world of One Piece, I got aura and fainted at every turn. When faced with someone like Aaron who was stronger than me, I didn't do a sneak attack. Instead, I acted like a fool. I first yelled and said something harsh, and then boasted about it. The gun that can travel through time couldn't break people's defenses. Then someone took away the control of the body. And there was a man in the body. You let a group of murlocs come to burn, kill, and loot.

You cannot learn wind skills and need a devil fruit to use the Wind Goose~~~Sorry, I, the Pirate King, may not be able to see clearly. It turns out that Zoro's troublesome winds and tornadoes are not caused by wind.

I don't even know when Aaron came to Cocosia Village, but I can tell he's not a pirate fan at first glance.

Didn't the author say that updates will be resumed in July? Why isn't it updated?

In fact, the guns below can also be used, but at night

I've read almost half of it, and I personally think it's a good novel, but I feel like there are some holes left unfilled.

After reading dozens of chapters... It made me really uncomfortable. The plot has almost not changed at all, and I feel like you are useless...

I still haven't figured out whether he used a musket or a cold weapon like a spear? 🤔🤔😵