The Ninth Wonderful Skill of One Person

The protagonist's abilities are too mixed and messy. And they are all miscellaneous but not refined, and no one can take advantage of them. The author should either limit the protagonist's skills to less than five, or stop writing fighting scenes, because your writing style can't handle it. "The protagonist has telekinesis and can fly, so why doesn't he fly?" "The protagonist can teleport, so why was he caught?" "The protagonist can control his spirit and dispatch his generals, why not use it if he has a spirit?" All kinds of ideas are emerging one after another, making me feel sick to my stomach. 🙂

Sister Baoer, she is so beautiful, don't forget to like it

The protagonist's skills are not magic skills. Why are the eight magic skills the eight magic skills? For example, the source of Qi Ti's flow of magic, Tong Tianyu can draw talismans with a single thought, Fenghou Qimen can flip four disks at will, the eight magic skills are called magic skills because each magic skill represents the pinnacle of that line of work, and the protagonist's ability is to copy other people's abilities, which is not a magic skill at all.

Kingpin must die

Sir, please insist on finishing the novel! Consider it carefully, don't be anxious, One update a day is acceptable, as long as there is no supervision, Everything must be ordered when it is put on the shelf, there are too few novels written by one person, I love Sister Baoer so much, I feel so sorry for Sister Baoer, I want someone to protect her, after watching the anime, I thought about it, if I could time travel under a person, how can I protect her from harm all over again, without delaying her search for the mystery of her life experience, how difficult it is! I can't think of a way, So this question has been echoing in my mind, and I am entangled, I don't know where to say this question, and going to Tieba seems to be a second-rate problem. I feel panicked if I don't say it out. It feels much better to say it. Recommended votes every day, Thank you for writing a version of the novel Under One Person.

Innate superpowers are not considered miraculous skills... There are many miraculous innate superpowers for one person. If we were to count them, it would not be the eight miraculous skills. It might be the 108 miraculous skills or the 360 ​​miraculous skills.

Isn't it common knowledge that there are nine of the Eight Wonders? 1 Origin of Qi Ti Zhang Huaiyi 2 Tongtian Lu Zheng Zibu 3 Ju Lingqian Jiang Feng Tianyang 4 Fenghou Qimen Zhou Sheng 5 Pairs of Full Hands Duan Muying 6 Liuku Immortal Thief Ruan Feng 7 Daluo Cave Temple Gu Jiuting 8 Divine Machine Bailian Ma Benzai 9 Shen Ming Ling No Roots

The author wanted to write an all-powerful protagonist, but he ended up being nothing. He was very powerful in the book, but in the eyes of the readers, he was just a greedy character, too many but not good, and without any characteristics. None of the Eight Magical Skills had their own unique characteristics. If you don't have the writing skills of a master, it's all rubbish if you play copy games.

Even if the gods are so awesome, no one is called the Ninth Wonder Skill. Why do you think so?

The Eight Magic Skills just refer to the eight abilities created by 36 thieves for the sake of immortality. The finished product is Sister Baoer. The concept of the Ninth Magic Skill was not established from the beginning. Unless your setting is to work with Wu Gensheng and others on the art of immortality, it can only be regarded as a powerful ability and has nothing to do with magical skills. It's either powerful or magical. If you look at Master Tianshi's Five Thunder Zhengfa, it's no better than most of the Eight Magic Skills.

The Five Skills of the Flying Squirrel, I forget where it comes from, but it should be an old book. This means that the flying squirrel has five abilities but is not proficient in any of them. I can swim, but I can't swim too deep. I can climb trees, but I can't climb too high. Can fly, but not too high. I can walk, but I can't walk very fast. I can dig holes, but the holes I dig are too small to hide myself. To put it simply, everyone knows a lot, but none of them is specialized. If this is an ability, it means that the upper limit of other people's abilities is level ten. The upper limit of the ability of a person with the five flying squirrel skills is only level five. Under normal circumstances, it can be said to be invincible, but when faced with an opponent who specializes in one ability and has practiced a skill to its peak, it is very difficult. However, with so many abilities, he should be able to deal with it, right. Perhaps.

Alas, the subject matter and the protagonist's abilities are quite novel. It's a pity that the plot is too slow and the protagonist's personality is not well developed. It's a pity.

It cannot become the ninth wonder skill. Others can learn the other 8 types. The protagonist's ability is just a golden finger, and others can't learn it. He doesn't have the qualifications to become the ninth...

After I read the comics, do you think there might be someone in the government who is stronger than the Heavenly Master or someone who can compete with him? There seem to be too many Black Mumu inside. They live in Majia Village. The government has only revealed a little bit of power in this matter. In the end, it can take care of most of the people in the alien world.

I won't talk about the messy skills, but the main character doesn't know how to use them, so what's the use of writing them out?

How to say it? I don't feel that this is a magic skill at all. Tongtianlu directly draws hundreds of talismans, Julingshuang restrains all spirits, and the peak of Qimen Qimen after the wind... These are dozens or even hundreds of times far superior to other spells in the same field. This is a magic skill, and the protagonist feels like he has a talent. Although he seems to know everything, he cannot exert 100% of his ability and cannot surpass his original ability. This is far from being called a magic skill.

The plot of sealing skills has not appeared for hundreds of years, but it has appeared again 🤭

Today I saw the protagonist's father appear, and I immediately felt that he was so vicious that I gave up.

After reading eighty or ninety chapters, I feel that the author's writing is really good, and it feels like being under one person. Anyway, I have never seen a one-person fanfic written better than this at the starting point, but why not 🔥?

It's been a mess since the Luotian Dajiao was over.

Didn't he travel through time? Interior? ! How awesome must his grandfather be to create such a world, where there is an entire plot under one person. . .

The writing is too messy, and some of it is just messed up. If you write fan fiction, just stick to the timeline. If you don't write it, don't mess around with it. Just piece it all together. You can't hold back the words. It's messed up, right?

If you have finished reading this book, you can read my novel "One Man's Martial Arts". Everyone is welcome to give your opinions.

Couldn't the person who wrote this write about Quanzhen Sect and Wudang? Self-created and Longhu Mountain all day long

The writing is good, but the problem is that every chapter seems to be killing people.

It feels like the protagonist is like a headless fly and doesn't even know what he is doing 😒

After reading seven chapters, to be honest, the writing in the first few chapters was so messy, let alone the rest, so I decided to give up.

Luo Tian's Dajiao was in a mess

I don't quite understand. The protagonist has just become an alien, and although Quan Xing is not a good person, as soon as the protagonist debuts, he challenges others and kills them. Is it just to prove his strength?

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