I'm Just a Superman

It's okay to write at the beginning, but with your poor level, it's enough to write a Marvel. You don't have to add so many worlds and have gun fighting skills. Superman needs this thing? You can't write a thousand chapters at your level, but you'll collapse after writing one or two hundred chapters at your level.

Well, apart from the bad parts, this book is quite good. Sometimes, with power, trouble will always follow. Therefore, strong power requires an equally strong heart to drive it. Otherwise, no matter how powerful you are, you will always drift with the crowd and be pushed around by certain things. So even if he acts like he wants to do whatever he wants and is happy with his grudges, in fact he can't do anything well and he just wanders around like a fool.

Is the occupation that spends the most time in the sun a day on a fixed, land-based building rooftop? No, except for the spaceships that follow the sun, they are the global ocean ships on the sea. Either the North and South Pole alternate, or the sea follows the sun. Although the speed of the ship is not enough to operate 24 hours a day, it is much better than being stationary on the ground.

It is well known that Superman is a very powerful, very comprehensive character with unlimited potential. I believe that many people watch Superman beating others, rather than becoming Superman and being defeated everywhere. Writing Superman means writing invincible stories, unless you force the hell mode to start. Just put Superman in a world where all kinds of big guys appear at the beginning. Otherwise Superman can basically use Wushuang and can keep up with the follow-up and become stronger. However, many people are forcibly weakened and suppressed.

Let me summarize it for the author. In fact, the protagonist only has abilities similar to Superman. The protagonist does not have Kryptonian blood. He can only extract energy from other latitudes (spaces) from the sun to strengthen himself (10% of the total increase every day, which is equivalent to the starting 10. Then the strengthening becomes 11 on the first day, and increases by 10% of 11 on the second day) So the protagonist has nothing to do with Kryptonians, but has abilities like Superman. The title of the book and the Superman in the book refer to super humans. So what many people say about Superman (the IQ of a Kryptonian, etc.) Has nothing to do with the protagonist Can it be refined😁

Let me give you an official spoiler about the protagonist's abilities. Look carefully. Don't make blind guesses if you don't understand. The first is the protagonist's enhancement mechanism: using the sunlight of the solar system as a guide to extract energy from other dimensions. The other dimensions here refer to the dark dimension of Dormammu, the hell dimension, etc., But the protagonist's dimension is much stronger. After the protagonist establishes a close connection with the dimension, he can continue to grow stronger without the need for the sun, but I cannot guarantee how long it will take to reach this point. Superman means a person beyond human beings, not a Kryptonian. Because the protagonist is a dimensional superman, he does not have all the flaws of the Kryptonians, except that he does not have a super brain. As for why there is no super brain, the author is a fool and cannot write about people with super high IQs. Are you satisfied with this reason? Then there is the protagonist's enhancement formula, 1.1∧X, X is the number of days. After one year, the protagonist will be enhanced 1.28*10∧15 Times, and the speed of light is 3*10∧8 meters per second.

I still like to watch people who are behind the scenes. After all, being a good guy in the West always feels weird to me. What about you?

I don't know anything about the plot, and I feel like a novice. I don't have a sense of involvement, because I know the plot after reading American comics. You have to force the reader's perspective and treat the reader as if he doesn't know anything. Do you know how uncomfortable it is for the reader?

The question is, if you traveled through time and became a character in DC Marvel, would you protect the American people? I don't know how. Although I have traveled through time, I am still a Chinese. Whether they die or not, they have nothing to do with me.

Suddenly I thought of the saying in American comics that with greater power comes greater responsibility. It feels like those officials specialize in deceiving superheroes. Shouldn't it be that with great power comes greater responsibility? It's a pity that superheroes have never learned Chinese political lessons, rights and obligations.

After reading Chapter 30, I saw a homeless man suddenly acquire superhuman attributes, and then bump around aimlessly like a headless fly. The details are handled well, but overall it looks clueless. I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. He has no sense of identity in society, is indifferent to feelings, and has contempt for the law. He even has the identity of a homeless man without even a home. Whenever I play a game, I will invest in it and find ways to become stronger, get more equipment, and get more money. But I have no idea what the protagonist wants. What it boils down to is that the protagonist has no roots. Clark in the original comic of Superman is an alien baby who lives on the earth, is raised by humans, and slowly accepts human values. This is a hidden line, and the plot of the mother planet can be slowly exhaled later. The bright line is that he is upright and optimistic, relying on his super powers to fight criminals and maintain peace. Focus on fighting criminals, and then deliver the villains one by one. This is the main line. You can also interact with other superheroes and form the Justice League, which is a branch. Your setting is quite interesting, a Marvel hodgepodge. But you need to give it a root first, set a main line for it, and then slowly develop these hodgepodges around this core.

As a superman, what's the use of learning "gun-shaking skills" in the early stage? Bullets can't run faster than you! The inexplicable plot does not promote the development of the story at all. It is just boring.

The protagonists are all super-universe-level, and there are only a few who can play the role of protagonists. Whether it is the earth or the universe, isn't destruction and restoration just a matter of thought? Dimensions, universes, and time are completely meaningless to the protagonist. As a result, there are still various restrictions. You can't go here and you can't go there. You just stay on the earth and play house. Otherwise, don't raise the protagonist's strength to such a high level, it would be very inconsistent.

After reading two chapters, it was so poisonous that a superman learned how to shoot a gun. Rubbish

I saw it at the Continental Hotel. To sum up, the protagonist is looking for trouble everywhere and then says he is afraid of retaliation. Then he finds the enemy behind him and kills him. Then there is an organization behind the enemy and he sets a small target. Where are you putting this matryoshka doll? If you can bask in the sun every day without eating or drinking and yet gain strength and have so many accidents, are you writing about the coming of Death? And the Vampire Clan, they opened a bar to entertain themselves and didn't offend you, but you went to take over other people's lairs. The people watching were confused. Afterwards, they felt that I can't beat the Vampire Duke and Prince now, so scared. I was dumbfounded. It would be fine if you wrote the protagonist as someone with a strong sense of justice at the beginning, but you wrote it as a salty fish type. Which of the things he does later are in line with the protagonist's personality?

After reading Chapter 14, it is generally suitable for newcomers who are just getting started. There is no clear main line and it does not promote the plot. It has always been very passive. The fighting plot is forcibly inserted and the protagonist is pushed forward by a fly. . . An ordinary person who doesn't know about the superhuman abilities of the plot keeps basking in the sun. He is really just basking in the sun. He is obviously a novice, but he does not describe the process of understanding the world by himself without adding the protagonist. He is like an idiot. He still doesn't understand anything after two months, and he is just waiting for the enemy to knock on the door and chase you away.

It was really frustrating to watch. I was surrounded by conspiracies all the time. I had to pretend that I didn't know the plot of a question that was obviously very simple. If you don't know the plot, what kind of Marvel would you wear? Just create your own one...

Change the name, Killer of the Heavens, to use some Marvel or Superman gimmick.

Old-fashioned plot, the beginning is poisonous

After reading more than 10 chapters, your physical fitness is more than 70 times higher and you still need to use a gun? Even if your punch weighs 100 kilograms and is 70 times stronger, your head will be blown off with just one slap. Using a gun as a weapon with inhuman strength is ridiculous.

How should I put it, when I read fan fiction now, what I want to see more is the subjective actions of the protagonist, gaining knowledge, money, and power, rather than relying on others to advance the plot every time, and relying on others to annoy the protagonist. That makes no sense. Does a book just focus on the protagonist fighting monsters? The setting of this book is quite good, but the protagonist is chaotic and evil, has a childish mentality, and has no main plot.

Just one robbery?

To be honest, I don't think the author has the ability to deal with such a chaotic world. I feel that this book will collapse! ! !

Alas, this book was well written at the beginning, but since I met Gu Yi, it has been a rubbish book, crazy and poisonous!

Brother, before you became Dr. Manhattan, you started to become divine. It's inexplicable.

Although the ending is a bit bad, I have to admit that except for the finale of the last chapter, everything else written by this author is good.

Before the main task was completed, one branch after another was created, and it was endless. I was looking for trouble everywhere and couldn't solve it.

So what the hell was going on when he was as fierce as a tiger, slinging guns, massacring, and forcing people to rob, but ended up burning the money they robbed? I really don't understand the author's manipulation of reducing intelligence.

The main character, a superman, has to fight ordinary people and kill them. I'm convinced. Self-degradation.

Another nanny-as-dog novel!