
Pirates of Evil Captain
海贼之恶灵船长
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 627k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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254Chapters
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Get rid of the system and focus on writing about the combination of Ghost Rider and Haki. If the writing is good, it will be enough for you to be on the boutique channel.
Is this Ghost Rider from a comic or a movie? There are more than just these abilities in the comics. The comics can summon slaves of ghosts and gods and lightning storms. In the movie, the Approval Eye not only punishes sinners, but can also devour the souls of sinners and strengthen itself by eating human souls. Both comics and movies have immortality, so the system It's free. I don't like the system at first, and I don't like digitization. I just rely on the ability of the Ghost Rider. I feel that the system just gives a contract from the beginning. There is no need to appear again. There is also soap, I don't know if it is a dog or a horse. Author, you feel relaxed and happy when writing soap. Quick, after all, it has been a funny character since it first appeared, but readers can't feel it. Instead, it feels like it's superfluous to be able to talk. People who describe it feel like they are trying to make up numbers. In fact, it might be better to write the mount as a jet ski at the beginning, but these have already been written It can't be changed, but the abilities of Ghost Rider should be clearly stated. People who don't know Ghost Rider will definitely not know that there is an immortality plug-in when reading your novel, let alone the difference between a movie and a comic. After reading it, I don't know whether it is a comic or a movie, such as the abridged version of the abilities of comics and movies.
It's quite attractive. Let's just write about Ghost Rider. There's no need for the system to appear.
To be honest, if you bite off more than you can chew, you are both a swordsman and an inferno, so it is of no use at all. We should go all out to develop Hellfire. It obviously has great potential. If you start from scratch with swordsmanship and delay the effect of physical training, it is better to keep training your body and Hellfire. You know, average is mediocrity
The author, the protagonist is a weak nobleman who has no training at all. A nobleman may not know how many Baileys can buy and how many things he can buy, but he must have a certain understanding of historical items like gold coins! Also, the protagonist Chuhai is a ten-year-old child without changing his body shape. He is also very weak. If he goes to sea, isn't he looking for death?
Actually. . . . Because Marvel and DC fans generally don't like the system, which limits its own gadgets and always deceives the protagonist, so since it's Ghost Rider... Then what kind of system do we need? Of course, when we become adults, we can transform into Ghost Rider and ride a horse and drive unparalleled in the sea!
Sooner or later, the identity of the protagonist will be exposed to this "soap". This character has gone too far, and instead of being funny, it just feels annoying.
To be honest, I don't really like data-based physical fitness. For example, strength will be affected by emotions, and there will be sudden explosions. Having data is like playing a game.
There are not many good people among the pirates. Putting the Ghost Rider in is like lighting up the gas tank and it explodes instantly.
It's a good book, but I had to add a system that lowered my score! ! !
In an age where parents find it burdensome, what's the point of raising a dog (horse?)?
I suppressed my disgust at the black dog and looked at it for a long time. Why did I have to bring a holding back chicken when I went out to this corner or that? Nausea, open the door for Nausea.
Wow, what kind of energy does the sea floor stone have? Even with a special stone, One Piece also has black technology, and humanoid war weapons have come out. I don't mind even if I drink coke as energy. Sea floor stone is energy, then the whole sea is energy.
Regarding this book, I believe most people come here for the evil spirits, but the author rarely transforms. What does this mean? Is it used to attract people?
What does the "end" at the end of the chapter updated today mean? It won't be finished!
Nine books, nine books. Damn, he's either a eunuch or a bad guy, is that interesting? Nine eunuchs in a row!
The opening chapter was quite stable, but the system crashed after reviving, especially the horse which was basically just a joke and not of much use.
Is the Ghost Rider without demons still the Ghost Rider? . That big guy who can defeat Lucifer was turned into such a ghost by you
Why Daily Recommendation recommends eunuch books
Isn't the protagonist a time traveler? Why don't I know anything from now on?
To be honest. If the setting does not have this system, or the system cannot be restarted because there is no energy and has been silent, anyway, it would be better to just write the Spirit of Vengeance without this system.
Haha, fuck the eunuch!
I'm still raising it, but it's gone cold?
You still have to pay attention to logical issues. The plot development is incoherent and uncomfortable.
I've finished this book. I recommend a good pirate novel
Author, do you have a book club? If there is any, please send it to me. I can't find it here.
Ghost Rider, what kind of swordsmanship do you practice?
Luffy has a bright fruit and calls you daddy.