Illustrated Guide to Phantom Beast Evolution

Why do some people still say that my book evolved like a divine pet? (QQ reading comments) Could it be that what I wrote is a fake book? I also saw Chapter V. So far, this book and Divine Pet seem to have no similarities except that they are both pet novels, right?

I don't really like the setting of the game. Is the protagonist omnipotent? Playing games, making medicine, and training fantasy beasts, the role of the golden finger is not reflected, so many settings on the golden finger do not play the role they should play, or in other words, the golden finger does not come out for a long time after playing games.

Regarding the game part of this book, some people don't understand why it is written. Let me explain it here. First of all, the original intention of the game is to practice combat. Although there are average beast masters per capita, it is too dangerous to encourage young people to fight directly. Games are the most appropriate way. Secondly, there are talent requirements for phantom beast masters. Not everyone is good at cultivating phantom beasts, but many people are good at training phantom beasts. The meaning of the game is to absorb the wisdom of these people and feed back those who are good at training phantom beasts. Of course, the protagonist doesn't need it at the moment. The reason he wants to participate in the competition is actually to sell medicine and create a star product to increase the price. As for why he doesn't sell medicine in partnership with his uncle, if the uncle could do it, the protagonist wouldn't be short of money.

The setting is okay, but the character descriptions are disgusting

This damn book persuaded me to quit after the 12th fucking chapter. Damn it, what the hell is this? Why is it that when I see a lot of Yuju-ryu movies these days, they are so fucking off topic and so focused on one thing? Isn't it good?

My brother-in-law is a failure, it's embarrassing to see that he has cancer. Goodbye.

Do you dislike the content of the game, or do you dislike the absence of the protagonist, or simply don't want to see the supporting characters lose?

I personally feel that the pace of this book is too slow. It may not be feasible to write like this if you are not famous. I gave up the book before even seeing the paid chapters. It is a vicious circle, unless it takes off later, but it may be more difficult.

It's not good, the pace is too slow, and it's only for adults to read novels. What you wrote does seem to be for children. There are too many chapters about the messy campus life. You have to think carefully about whether this is a fantasy novel or a campus novel. The protagonist's growth process is basically not written. Instead, he writes about arguing with a group of children

The beginning was a bit bland, and I couldn't find the burning feeling! The plot is not very compact! It's hard to attract new readers like this! It is recommended to discuss the three golden chapters next time and break them out of chapters.