Mage Alan

Big cheers for the author 💪

Only a few dozen chapters have been written, and the men who have entanglements with the protagonist basically have no good endings. The women who appear can learn the magic knowledge that the protagonist has worked hard to collect and experiment with just by chatting with the protagonist. It's so cheap... I guess there will only be women around the protagonist in the future! ! !

Why do you feel this is an abusive article? ? ? ? The whole story is about being chased...? ? ? ? Even if you stay for a while, will you continue to chase? ? ? ? The plot development is not good... Ah... Ah? ? ? ?

With the foundation of magic civilization, there is no shortage of auxiliary tools such as optical brain! So articles about chips, optical brains, etc. Are really cheating on word count! Especially the jokes about gunpowder and petroleum make me sick (embarrassment syndrome). . An excellent time travel article should guide, fine-tune or summarize the current civilization from the perspective of another civilization. . Why bother to repeat the development routine of "Earth"? One civilization on Earth is enough. .

Anyone who accepts them is a mage genius. I have adopted several, and they all turn out to be geniuses. Every one left behind is really enough.

Since promotion is so dangerous, how can you tell others that you want to advance? There are quite a few people who have been plotted against by their own people, and there are many who have killed their teachers and inherited their property.

I hope it can be more complete. I don't mind if it starts at the beginning but ends at the end.