Take a Hunting Space with You

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I am born in the 1980s. Many people of my generation have adopted children at home, but I have never heard of brothers and sisters getting married. There are many novels about brothers and sisters growing up together and getting married together even though they are not related by blood. I thought it was a bit perverted, so I gave up on it.

The novel, the storyline and everything are pretty good. But. Why do everyone have the same chatting style? I can't accept it. A bunch of funny people. . . I hope the author can enrich the character style a lot. Mature, steady, insidious, cunning, majestic, yet gentle and elegant. Have it all. They all have the same style and I will get tired of it! 🤐🤐🤐 Support me by giving me a like so that the author can see it! Hope Jia Jing Hey hey hey. The book is really okay! Support

It's understandable that all the jokes in the early stage are funny, after all, you have to keep people. The writing in the beginning is immature, which is understandable, after all, you are a newcomer But it starts to fall apart in the middle, with all kinds of digging holes, not burying them, and all kinds of settings. Is there anyone with any brains in the whole book? The contribution currency system has collapsed, and the leadership has been living like a kindergarten for hundreds of years... It is not required that everyone is an old fox, but at least they must have some IQ and sense! With deep love comes great responsibility! After raising it for so long, I finally raised it, but when I looked back, I thought, what the hell is this! Four million words! It's not time for me to collect the 400,000 words! It's time to grow up!

In the early stage, the fighting scenes when encountering enemies whose strength is not as strong as Ying Ying's realm are as detailed as possible. Then, when the protagonist and Ying Ying's strength are not much different, the realm will improve by leaps and bounds. After a few chapters, the emperor will be invincible in the universe. At chapter 1300, it was still Star Territory. After chapter 30, I went directly to the Emperor and then finished the book. Before finishing the book, there was a very sudden "Will you marry me?" Which confused me. Several of the great imperial clans in the universe have almost finished the book and come out to make their presence felt. The first 1,300 chapters have never appeared. At most, the Celestial Spirit Emperor poked his head in and described the strange phenomena caused by his appearance. It is really careless. The ladies also happen to have similar talents and follow the footsteps of the male protagonist. To put it simply, the closer the relationship is with the male protagonist, the stronger the strength will be. The longer the relationship is, for example, the original bosses of the elves can witness in a year how the once insignificant male protagonist's father-in-law has reached a state similar to his own. There is also the Essence Fire, which has only appeared a few times. It was initially described as a top talent comparable to top geniuses. I thought it was very strong, but it turned out that it was not outstanding at all. It just became an ordinary magical power. It may be that the space occupied by this heroine is too little ( Sorry for the carelessness of your writing (I read it so carelessly that I can't even remember her name). The positioning of the heroines is quite clear, but they are not strong enough or deep enough. It would be much better if these pages were used to write about a single heroine. Too many people will only make them less outstanding. The change of mentality of these women is also quite sudden. They suddenly like the protagonist and suddenly accept to share the protagonist together. Moreover, all of them have domestic violence complex. The protagonist will feel "cold in the back and feel the murderous intention" when he looks at the woman. Other women admire the protagonist and are star-struck and want to sign the protagonist's autograph. I didn't do "cold on the back, feel the murderous intention", I wanted to pinch Yingying's face, "cold on the back, feel the murderous intent", but when these female protagonists met the handsome guy, they thought he was so handsome in front of the male protagonist, rubbed his face around Yingying and described Yingying's "frightened eyes"... Do you find this contrast interesting? I won't go into detail about the writing style, but benevolent people have different opinions. It can be seen that the author really wanted to write in a funny style. Did he want to learn martial arts? It's a pity that it failed, it was too far behind. What kind of plug-ins can be shared also made my eyes light up, and blood flowed from my eyes. Later, I was even able to take the heroine into the hunting space, which I couldn't believe. There are still some novel settings. For example, there are no supporting roles in the plot. The purpose is to use various exaggerated facial expressions to show shock when the male protagonist is showing off. The human race is very united and there are no traitors. All humans are united in order to survive. This is very socialist. Don't use your head when reading. Don't remember the specific numbers when you see them. Just say what the author says. This will make it much easier to read. There are quite a lot of flaws, so I won't write them down one by one, otherwise I feel like it could be a chapter. Those who are not very demanding and want a challenge can read it. The title also says that it is all superficial xx, and it is also mentioned in the middle. So if you don't agree, don't agree and don't come to argue with me. Thank you. I wish you all a prosperous calligraphy career

​ ​ Personal feeling: As of Chapter 538 "Storm", this book is still slightly abusive to the main character. He is so powerful and genius in reality, but as soon as he enters the hunting space, he is abused in all kinds of ways. When the protagonist is strong enough to dominate a certain map in the hunting space, the plot begins. In order to keep the plot of this interstellar novel from collapsing, various bosses passed by and then casually killed the protagonist. Moreover, the protagonist's character is not portrayed steadily, especially when he is in the hunting space, he is all kinds of promiscuous and seeking death. Although this book avoids many of the poisonous points of similar novels, the plot is really boring. You can even guess the plot of "Hunting Space" before reading it. Fighting monsters, seeking death, being killed by the boss... It is also true in reality. The author delays the development of the relationship. The same goes for the supporting characters. Among them, the role of the sister "Lu Li" is really disgusting. There is also the fact that the protagonist's "brain circuit is different from others", which is simply trying to lower the upper limit of IQ. The protagonist's emotional intelligence is set to be low, and it is still like this. I obviously have a lot of credits, but I don't know how to exchange money. I even ask my friends to pay when I go out to buy food. This is really a shameless thing. The most important thing is that he is very cowardly towards women. I don't know why the author made the protagonist so cowardly. There are also some typos that I won't mention. The same goes for the author's writing techniques. For example, descriptions in the form of "an X-ray flashed in the eyes" are written almost every time after the practice. Once the word "expansion" of the protagonist appears, there will be bosses who will teach the protagonist how to behave, and then forcibly suppress the protagonist's growth. For example, in the battle of the Erna Galaxy, if the protagonist has not been suppressed to grow, wouldn't it be more interesting to directly crush him? There is also the issue of hunting space and time. You can stay in the hunting space for a long time, but as soon as you enter, you will go crazy. There is one chance a day, and at least one week of hunting time at a time. Anyway, it takes only a moment after you return. Why do you die every time in less than a day? The author really doesn't need to suppress it like this... emmmm, my personal opinion is that I am not a writer and cannot write novels, but I have read a lot of novels, some are great and some are bad. I am writing this book review just because the subject matter of hunting space is really good. I hope I can stop being a noob. Looking back at this book review, there will definitely be boring people complaining about why I didn't write it myself. I am not a writer, and I am just evaluating it from the perspective of an ordinary reader. Some people may also complain that I am not a writer, so I am not a BB. It is because I am not a writer that I can write a book review like this. If I am a writer, what does it mean to write such a critical book review on other people's novels? Envy? Well, I hope the author pays attention to my personal opinion... Also, if you pass by, give me a like and push me up! ! !

It's really a bit too much, the small climax just passed by, there are almost no exciting duels, and complicated clearance accounts for more than 90%. I have always wanted to read the story of leaving the Milky Way, but the result is that I have always put aside the Milky Way. Chen Dong is so bad that he at least changed the map! ! You don't even want to change the map! I'm begging you, hurry up and push the plot. What's so detailed about fighting monsters throughout the whole story? Writing four or five chapters for one night is a bit too much! I really want to see the auction in Elf Star Territory! ! I really want to take a look at the list of geniuses, is it possible? The author is great😭😭

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Tsk, (｀⌒´メ) Otherwise, the author, you would still be in women's clothing (^ω^)✧

When I first started reading it, I thought it was a good first-rate novel. In the end, I found out that it was a stallion story? Why do you take them with you? Abandoned. Baibai I suggest all the great book lovers to give up

Chapter 390: I feel so sad when I see it. I know it's a space bomb? Humans can't play? Still need to study for half a day? Only used the spaceship to get rid of it in the last 10 seconds? And then blow it up above the planet? Do you know that if a space bomb explodes, the entire galaxy will be in danger? ? ? Writing this should at least give other passers-by some wisdom, right? ? ? ? The first novel I read on Qidian was pretty good, but after one chapter I felt sick.

There are so many poisonous points in this book. Just like the main character, his sister originally had more than 200 orifices, but after 5 days, she had more than 400. Doesn't it mean that the physical body is not strong enough and cannot use high-level energy? The protagonist can add more than 20 points a day at most, and as mentioned before, his sister can add more than 10 points a day. So how can I add more than 200 in 5 days? Am I not good at math?

I feel like Lin Ling is better than pig's feet! Pig's feet work so hard to cross the realm, but they are not as good as Lin Ling 🙂! !

After reading Chapter 300, I really can't help but feel unhappy. The author would like to give you some advice. The plot of your novel is originally very attractive, but every time I read it, my eyes flashed, and a hint of ferociousness flashed through my eyes. It made me laugh. It was repeated too many times, and I felt very unhappy after reading it! ! ! Eyes are the windows to the soul, but they are not the only ones that can express emotions. You can use other expression descriptions or action descriptions or even behavior descriptions to reflect the inner activities of the character. As soon as there is an interaction between characters, your eyes will flash out of the play. It doesn't mean that you can't flash... Can you flash less often?

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I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing the galaxy class. When I went to plunder resources, I found foreign warships. Not to mention sneak attacks, I just stood up and fought hard and was convinced. There are also a few chapters near the galaxy level, all of which are frontal and aggressive. You insist on watching the opponent use one-time trump cards, and then confront others head-on? There's something wrong with this brain! Why don't you just stand there and pretend to be stupid if you don't teleport over and kill them while they are surprised by your combat power, aura, cultivation, age, etc.? Even if a sneak attack cannot kill those of the same level, you can still attack a lower level one. Once the soldiers in the spaceship are set on fire, how can the spaceship that has robbed the resources enter the warp! This guy is just showing off without any brains.

It's a very straightforward and refreshing article, Liangcao. There are not so many plot ups and downs in reading along the way. It is pure and refreshing. Thirty years in the east of Hedong and thirty years in Hexi will not exist first and then rise. I am a genius and I will blow you up now. The villain has a lot of tricks in his heart. The character creation has a strong sense of visuality, especially Alice. The scene with a blue hair crying and saying "I don't want to die" under the sunset is really old two-dimensional. But I started to feel tired when I saw about 600 chapters. The first is magical power, which is directly to change the map combat power cycle. And because of the golden finger of the male protagonist, the treasure hunting in the upgrade novel has no sense of existence. The magical elixirs, heavenly materials and earthly treasures are not as useful as the balls that the male protagonist takes out, so the golden finger jungler is the only way for the male protagonist to become stronger. At least this is how it feels to me. Most of the fighting descriptions are about teleporting to behind your back and punching you in the back of the head, and then the punch will be dodged. The visual experience is quite satisfying at first, but later on I get tired of it, because the visual sense is too strong.

It's a great novel. The male protagonist is not a brainless type, but occasionally he feels that his IQ is not up to par. The use of high-tech elves here makes my eyes shine. In my memory, the elves all use primitive bows and arrows, magic fusion bodies, forest guards, neutral factions, and big breasts (I want to be quiet)? But the elves in this book are high-tech spaceships, high-tech weapons, star controllers, enemies of the demons, and still have big breasts [facepalm].

I just saved up for a few days, and I'll watch it after the limit is over 🤓

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I finished the book before I knew it, so fast

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Wrong words, wrong words, one more word or one less word. There are too many errors like these. And the author has not corrected it for so long. There is an error every few chapters, and sometimes there are several in one chapter 🙂 Actually, I think when writing a novel, it is inevitable to have a few errors when writing so many words, but it is actually nothing. Then I have never seen any novel with so many errors. And the author made a mistake and won't correct it. When I look at other authors, they will basically correct it if someone says it. To be honest, this really affects the look and feel.

Just try to write it as a united human family. Don't write those family-style plots of intrigues for interests. Let's work together for the future of the human race. How great! What do you think?

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For readers who like to read novels, this is a wonderful era. You can read various types of novels at any time when you turn on the Internet. The only problem is that you have too little time and too many books to read. The development of the Internet has brought about a huge number of readers. This is also a good era for Internet authors. As long as they have some writing skills, dare to write, and can write, even if the number of people who like their books is only one ten thousandth of this huge readership, they have a chance to get ahead. This current situation has led many authors to either be forced by life or to want to be famous too much and start blindly catering to the tastes of readers. During the process of writing a book, they change the concept, plot, and outline according to the comments of readers. In the end, the changes are completely different from their original intentions. In the end, they do not know how to write, and they constantly go against their own wishes and cater to the readers. It is no exaggeration to say that many authors suffer from depression when writing. My personal opinion is that as a reader, you can find typos and bugs in the book, but those readers who say to the author: Your plot should not be written like this, and your protagonist's character should not be like this, will others who like and approve of you also recognize it? Shakespeare's saying, "Among a thousand readers, there are a thousand Hamlets" explains this very well. If an author cannot adhere to his own creative ideas and blindly cater to readers, he will not be successful without his own personal style. Those martial arts authors from decades ago, including the top-notch Jin Yong, Liang Yusheng, Gu Long, Wen Ruian, etc., The top-notch Wo Longsheng, Liu Canyang, etc., And the master Huang Yi in recent years, all of them have a distinct personal style. It is no exaggeration to say that without looking at the author, you can tell who wrote the novel by turning a few pages. Although the personal styles of today's great authors are not as distinctive as those of the masters, many of them are very obvious, such as Chen Dong, such as Xuehong and Mao Ni. Each author who can be called a great author has more or less his own style. It is a good thing to learn from the strengths of others, but the purpose of learning from others' strengths is to allow yourself to absorb the strengths of others as nutrients, and eventually form your own unique style, just like Yang Luchan, who studied martial arts everywhere, but in the end what made him a master was his own Yang style Tai Chi. I believe that as long as an author's writing skills are not too bad and he has his own style, even if he cannot become a god, he will not be unknown! Dear authors, thank you for your stories, and thank you for the spiritual comfort you have brought to us in this restless and radical social atmosphere. I only hope that all authors can stick to their own writing concepts and original intentions, and do not blindly cater to readers. Your catering may destroy your own ideals and future 🙂