Opener of the Immortal Path

This is a rare good book in the past few months! The language is fluent, the plot is reasonable and not abusive, the pace is good, and there are many climaxes. I gave the author my monthly vote. I hope this book becomes a hit and reaches the top ten on the monthly ticket list! Another little suggestion, other book friends said that it is a bit difficult to distinguish between simulation and reality. I feel the same way. I think we can use dividing lines and hexagonal brackets to distinguish at the same time, similar to this ………………[In Simulation]…………………… Plot ………………[In Reality]…………………… Plot

Your own strength comes first, and everything else takes a back seat. Don't tell me about your skills. Can a master of swordsmanship defeat Heng Lian? This is still the case when Heng Lian is empty-handed. If Heng Lian is given a sword to cut off his horse, do you think he can get close with the sword? I can fail countless times, but as long as you give me a blow, I will not die or be crippled.

At present, this book is more kind than the one by the demon monk. The demon monk simulates N lives continuously and directly copies and pastes the punctuation marks without changing them.

Everything else is good But can the protagonist not react so much when someone around him dies The protagonist has traveled through time, does he really have any deep feelings? In addition, you want to become an immortal, and sooner or later you will not stay here As time goes by, mortals will die of old age, and they will have nothing to do with you.

I always feel that practicing Qi with a group of Jindan Yuanying is weird.

The work is good, but the author is not careful enough about the overall world view and price levels. For example, when the prey is owned by the hunter, how can the village chief pay a monthly salary of 100 taels. The protagonist makes medicine in reality, but the cost and source are not clearly explained. It is only mentioned that the mother-in-law has a medicine. You must know that even if there are several prescriptions, there will be dozens or hundreds of ingredients. These require cost and supply, but as long as the protagonist needs it, he can have it. These sections will affect the reading experience. I hope the author will continue to work hard to upgrade grain and grass into fairy grass.

The golden finger is so unbelievable. There is such a golden finger that can predict the future and obtain various martial arts, martial arts, pills, and secrets at zero cost. Unless the main character is mentally retarded, even a pig can conquer the world. Such an unbelievable golden finger makes the book meaningless at all.

Woohoo, the author of New Internet Fraud has updated a chapter about his work. I thought he has updated two chapters 😭

🤔 The protagonist is not attractive enough No charm, no goals, no depth of thought, etc.

You probably have more than 30,000 fans. If you cut it off like this, you would be sorry to the people.

Dear author, please send me the title of your new book so that everyone can watch and cheer.

First post, a souvenir, cheers for the author. In addition, too many characters are easy to collapse, so there should be fewer characters and more plot.

I think it's very good. Don't listen to what they say about cutting books. It's not good to keep cutting books. You have to keep writing even if it's unfinished.

The protagonist has almost become the nanny of the village, helping here and there, and treating the people in the village like pigs.

The original version was reopened three thousand times to become an immortal three times

The author should sort out the book friends circle. Delete some posts that are disgusting to new readers. Otherwise, many people will be discouraged.

Why are there so many people saying this and that? It's silly! I know the writing is very good so far. Just cheers, author. Don't be influenced by bad words

The writing is very good. The simulation and reality are a little messy at the beginning, but it gets better later.

Are there several chapters missing? It feels like a part of the plot has been skipped. Can't connect at all

If you ask me, if you want to achieve this result, you should write more every day and quickly finish a million words and start the next book. The author cannot rely solely on love to generate electricity. One thing to say is, Qingzi, your trumpet's Luck Line was imprisoned immediately. Why did your character suddenly change for the better?

Damn, I've actually read the three books under your account and the Luck Line book. My favorites among them are Space and Luck Lines, so I hope you can write about these types of books in the future.

When will the author's new book be released?

What is the name of the book written by author Xiao Xiao?

I am your 100th month ticket. Please improve.

This book was a bit convoluted at first, and it seemed that it affected my grades. I feel like it should be better.

The main thing is that there is no change in upgrading, except that it is stronger, more spiritual, and faster. No qualitative change, no special transformation?

Why can't I find your trumpet account? It's that inflated book of luck lines, and what's the name of your newly opened book?

? ? ? I was too busy to get to the starting point yesterday, and it's all over when I get up today? Did you cut it again? Are you planning to write the book about luck lines?

Everyone, let me explain now why the author hasn't released a new book yet.

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