Magic Mountain of Ice and Fire

This amount of updates... Are you planning to switch to amateur writing? Will you update it when you have time and mood? If you write seriously, I will pursue it seriously, if you write perfunctorily, I will delete the book. Now that all those who have paid are in trouble, make it clear as soon as possible and don't waste everyone's time and mood in waiting.

I feel like there is an AI smell at the end of the writing? For example, in Chapter 651, the dialogue between the Magic Mountain and the Madam is basically about you, which feels weird; in addition, when describing each incident, there will be a summary, which will have a better reminder effect if you haven't read it for a long time. However, for book lovers who read continuously, it feels a bit watery to repeat what happened in the first few chapters.

Prince Oberon cursed and quit the book 💀

Okay, I've read more than 100 chapters. Feels good

I haven't read the original novel, is Aegon VI a fake or does he really have blood?

It is indeed a good book, and the author's writing skills are of a very high standard.

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I originally thought my poison resistance was okay, but after subscribing to 200 chapters, it really wasn't working anymore. I regret not listening to my book friends' advice! I am asking the author to read more Western books, or you can write Chinese historical articles. Does the dialogue look real? It feels uncomfortable, like eating flies, a lot of ancient Chinese words, what else, come here, my daughter, say to the lord, I am here... Wait, what kind of author is this? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

After reading more than a hundred chapters, here is a book review. First of all, ice and fire fanfics are relatively rare, and even fewer can write more than a million words. In the unpopular category of ice and fire fanfics, this novel is still worth reading. Advantages: 1* The fighting description is detailed 2* The character portrayal is loyal to the original work, without any too abrupt feeling 3* There are many descriptions of farming, suitable for lovers of farming literature 4* The protagonist is not refined Poison points: 1* The main line is not clear enough, and there are too many details about the details 2* Chopsticks and noodles The content is very strange. Especially chopsticks. For example, if a new type of tableware is invented and is superior to chopsticks in every aspect, will the upper class immediately replace chopsticks and never use them again? The description in this aspect of the article lacks logic 3* The core of Ice and Fire/Game of Thrones lies in power and military strategy. The protagonist is an armed noble, but he often focuses on small things such as eating, drinking and sleeping. The layout is too small, and it is not a life story after all 4* The pace is a little slow, and many trivial things could have been brushed off in one go Another suggestion: the author's style may be more suitable for writing articles about food from other worlds, which not only satisfies the author's desire to transform the world into Chinese culture, but also allows for more embellished details in life. The core of each theme is completely different, and the hodgepodge writing style can only show the lack of ability to control the theme. For example, although GTA players like the open world, they don't want to control the character's daily chores such as eating, drinking, cleaning, etc., Because the gameplay of GTA is gunfights, exploration, and racing. The same is true when writing novels. Readers don't want to read every insignificant detail, but rather stick to the core content of the subject matter.

The character of the protagonist you wrote is really too bad. If he really doesn't survive a day. A cowardly waste with no blood and no blood travels into a villain who does whatever he wants. He deliberately writes two extremes. What can such a protagonist do and change other people's views on him? He was originally a noble and gave free money to the common people in the underground. This is ridiculous. What qualifications do you have to challenge the class at that time, Holy Mother?

This book is all ordered. However, in the past two days, I have seen that in order to follow the bullshit traditions of the natives, the protagonist actually killed his brother who was still with him through life and death in the previous chapters under the instruction of his wife, and used the head of his flag officer to please the natives. I really feel like I can't get over this hurdle here. The author explained several points, but there are still many issues that were not explained. The purpose of Magic Mountain's compromise is to appease the natives, and by the way, he wants to take over the native tribes of Crab Claw Island. But has he ever thought about it: the flag officer died because of these people, and in a blink of an eye, these people will come to call the old brothers brothers again. Can the old brothers turn around? Moreover, these natives have so many bullshit traditions that it is inevitable that some brothers will offend them when we get along in the future. Who was Magic Mountain helping at that time? Helping the natives, what do these old brothers mean? After following Mo Shan through life and death for so long, he is still not as good as the natives who just joined the gang. If the natives are separated by helping the old brothers, then wouldn't the former flag officer's death be in vain? Also, in the eyes of his subordinates, Mo Shan is simply being commanded by his wife and obeys her words. It's okay for you, Magic Mountain, to listen to your wife, but you want our subordinates to listen to your wife, and even your wife will kill the flag officer Hei Shi with just one word. Why? This time Black Stone was killed by Magic Mountain for some inexplicable reason, but Magic Mountain didn't even hesitate. Whose turn will it be next time? It would be fine if it was Mo Shan's own decision. Anyway, his life was left to Mo Shan, but this was obviously instigated by Mo Shan's wife, and Mo Shan actually carried it out without hesitation. What do you think of brothers of life and death? In addition, in the eyes of others, the Mountain's wife Jenny has become another center of power among the Clegane people besides the Mountain. For what you can't get by taking the Magic Mountain Route, taking the Magic Mountain Wife Route is another option worth trying. The Mountain's own authority declined. This situation is dangerous for feudal lords. Loyalty to the Demon Mountain himself and loyalty to the Demon Mountain's wife are two different things. The human heart is no longer a piece of iron. This book is still very well written. The Magic Mountain is famous for its ferocious nature, and everyone in the Seven Kingdoms has changed their minds after hearing about it. Difficulties such as moral kidnapping, taking advantage of the situation to pressure others, and defending honor to the death have never worked on the Magic Mountain. If you want to do this with the Magic Mountain, you are just tired of living. This is also cool. That's why I felt such a sense of division when reading these chapters of The Demonic Mountain. As an aside, to paraphrase DND, the Magic Mountain was chaotic evil before being traversed, and turned chaotic neutral after being traversed, so it is natural to follow the path of chaotic neutrality. The killing of the flag officer on Crab Claw Island has completely turned to lawful evil. A person who had been in chaos all his life suddenly became lawful without any warning. This is outrageous. If this were a priest or a knight, the rules would have backfired on him long ago. I have to take it slow and pick it up again in a few days.

Emperor Joffrey: When I first came to the throne, I thought the greatest enemy of the Seven Kingdoms was Ned Stark. I killed Ned Stark, and I thought the greatest enemy was Stannis. I defeated Stannis, and Robert Stark became the worry of the Seven Kingdoms. Ah, I used a trick to kill his family and take over the North. Daenerys Targaryen became the worry of the Seven Kingdoms again. It is becoming more and more clear to me now that the troubles at the heart of the Seven Kingdoms are not outside, but in King's Landing, right here on the Iron Throne! Among my orthopedic parents and ministers. If our place is bad, the Seven Kingdoms will be rotten. If you are all rotten, all the seven countries will rise up, leaving us with no place to die! Think about it, it's only been a few years since Mad King Aerys II was stabbed to death on the Iron Throne? Forgot! This Iron Throne is still standing here, staring at you every day! I haven't closed my eyes for three days and three nights. I'm always thinking of something to say to everyone, but my words must have a beginning.

The invention of chopsticks and noodles is really poisonous. It is recommended to jump directly. The cultural confidence is used in strange places. Khan😅 Everything else is okay.

If you don't have a monthly pass, I'll give you all the recommended tickets. Come on! ! !

Update soon, this is the best Ice and Fire fanfic I have ever seen!

It's such a shame! It's so deceptive! I just ordered it and it's free of charge within a day! It's such a deception! It's such a deception!

Personally, I think the stupidest person in Ice and Fire is either Robert or Joliver.

To read this book, first of all, you should skip all the content that promotes Han culture in the early stage, and secondly, skip the entire plot of Crab Claw Peninsula, otherwise you will be sick to death.

I haven't read such a good book yet. It's already in the top 100 of all rankings.

Even without reading it, I know that you are not good at writing fan fiction. Why? As for fan fiction, I think the best type of fan fiction is to make others think they are reading what the original author wrote. This is the highest level... I read the original work as a pornographic book, but yours has not been sealed yet. Not good at writing

Drinking a pot of poppy milk, the soul of another world wakes up from the abyss, a drop of ink dyes the clear water black, trembling! Fight! The ice sword is coming towards you! The screams of white ghosts are endless

Among the Game of Thrones fics I have read so far, Magic Mountain is the first, far better than Winter is Coming (because I couldn't watch it halfway through), and there is no third

Everything else is good. The noodles and chopsticks are too bad, especially the chopsticks.

Look what I found, a good book, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

Worri, is this your first time writing a book? Even people like me who have never read A Song of Ice and Fire enjoyed it with great interest, and even went to complete the plot of Game of Thrones. The writing is really good, but it's a pity that it's too niche, otherwise it would definitely be popular.

I tipped 5,000 points. It's rare to find such a good Ice and Fire fanfic. I am very surprised as I have read the original work and am not very satisfied with the TV series. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Why does Magic Mountain's wife Jenny command the army? She has basically never received military training. She has always been in the military camp, has never practiced military training, and has never commanded an army. But the army she commands can enforce orders and prohibitions and win wars? Where do you get the qualifications and abilities? Magic Mountain takes revenge on others. In addition to being the mastermind behind the scenes, she will also deal with those who directly execute it. She also secretly changed the concept. The knight of ice and fire has no glory in front of her? You can despise Magic Mountain once, but you can't tell him that his enemies are still looking down on him.

After going around for a while, I found that this book is actually the best among the Game of Thrones fans on this site. It has a lot of small problems, but the overall direction is fine.

Why are banknotes round? Just to highlight that the author is different from others? Production material costs, storage, transportation, and technical difficulty, are these not considered?

After so many years, this is the first time I read a book about The Helm. 😃😃😃