Oath of Fire

So far, it seems that the writing is okay, and the plot control is also good. I have subscribed to this book, and I hope I can keep writing. There are relatively few Western fantasies nowadays, but there is still hope. I'm optimistic about it 😁😁

The chapter seems pretty good, I have collected it and will be taking a look to improve it.

Come on! Nowadays, not many people watch western fantasy. It is not easy for the author to persevere. I hope the next platinum master will be you 😃

Why isn't the book popular?                                                                                     not because readers have no discernment, but because of the problem of the book itself. To be honest, the writing is not bad, the plot and writing are not bad, and there is nothing fatal, but it is not very attractive. This is very fatal for paid online books. How can it become popular? Mainly manifested in the following aspects. 1. Western fantasy novels usually have one theme, which is responsibility and mission. The novels pay great attention to team spirit, cooperation, struggle and compromise between people. There are endless swords and swords, overt guns and secret arrows, and conspiracies. Unfortunately, novice Internet writers can only write Western fantasy novels in a straight-forward way to show off young and Dangerous characters. How many readers of this Western fantasy novel will read it? Not to mention paying for it, Western fantasy novels were actually ruined by novice writers, but they blamed the readers for not knowing the goods. Similarly, although this book does not smell like Long Aotian, it has no bright spots. It has no responsibility, no mission, no sense of crisis, and even no big goals. The protagonist has no big bright spots except for being motivated, hard-working, and kind-hearted. How can we have the pleasure of being involved when there are a lot of such people around us? It's bland and not thrilling at all. 2. It's monotonous. Apart from knight fighting spirit, other professions are useless? Warriors, swordsmen, thieves, assassins, shooters... They are all missing, and even knights have not been written. Who can see the difference between fighting spirit with different attributes? 3. Excessive procrastination. There are too many plots or descriptions that have nothing to do with the growth of the protagonist. Several chapters and dozens of chapters can be skipped without even affecting the reading. 4. There is no suspense. Huo's books usually have techniques for breaking chapters. Every chapter the reader reads is eager to know the next chapter, but there is no such thing here. … Finally, there are too many short sentences like poetry and prose in the article, which ruins the sense of reading. Many Chinese words that pop up inadvertently make people speechless. There are even ancient Chinese poems in the article. Typos and sentences are even more common. There is still a lot of room for improvement in writing.

I'm still persisting and haven't canceled my subscription.

If you are a time traveler, that would be great. . .

When I posted this comment, I only read the title of the book. After all, such serious titles and covers are rare in Western Fantasy.

I just want to say, "Oh my god, how many more chapters will the main character have to disappear from?"

Ouch! Not bad. Very nice work, good luck to the author.

The protagonist absorbs fire, which is a fitting introduction to the fire dragon, the terrifying shadow. I think the protagonist may have the blood of a fire dragon

Dear author, was the article deleted or was it just written?

Sauron, Lord of the Abyss Death Believers: My Lord Sauron, I will surely lift your kingdom to the sky.

A rare novel about warriors. Compared with the rich and diverse magic, punching to the flesh can give more blood and pleasure.

There are really very few novels that are written with such concentration. The system of online literature is combined with the delicacy of traditional literature.

Can the protagonist be given more drama? There is no protagonist in several chapters. After talking about the Grand Duke, he talks about pseudo Sauron, and then talks about the Duke. OMG, doesn't a heroic story center on the protagonist? Can it be less troublesome to introduce other people?