Wandering the Azure Heavens

It's tiring to read, it makes you wonder what you're even writing, like this. Xiao Ming went to the amusement park today and saw his best friend. He exclaimed, "Wow! What a tall Ferris wheel!" He quickly left the bedroom, opened the refrigerator, and took out his favorite bicycle.

Having the ability to showcase yourself is called confidence and pride. It's pretentious to complain and blame others for not giving you opportunities when you lack ability. Even in this world, most things still force us to consider gains and losses. Who would willingly give away their possessions to a stranger, especially when those possessions concern their future?

There seem to be too many oddballs in the story, always trying to kill the female lead for some inexplicable reason. Some are driven by a female cultivator they meet by chance, others by her exceptional talent after just one meeting, and still others by her refusal to help when she's in danger. Does the female lead have a knack for attracting negativity? Is it really necessary to create so many mindless freaks to arrange rivals and advance the plot?

This novel is so frustrating to write. The female protagonist talks a good game, but she gets into trouble whenever she feels like it, and she takes action whenever she needs to, one thing after another, giving the reader no chance to breathe. The pacing is too tight, and some plot points don't make sense.

The opening and thematic concept seem good, but the dialogue throughout the text feels like something out of a melodramatic soap opera, reminiscent of those in "Red Apple Paradise"—it's inexplicably childish! It keeps pulling me out of the story.

Sigh, as a reader who's already hooked and subscribed to all the chapters, I'm a little unhappy. I should probably find authors with a better track record of not leaving chapters unfinished. Sigh...

Seeing comments saying there aren't many male supporting characters and the main characters are all women suddenly piqued my interest! I really hate those shows that claim to have no romantic pairings but then create ambiguous relationships with a bunch of handsome male supporting characters.

About this book: *No male lead, no romance, no raising children, no ambiguous relationships. *The world where Baishan City is located is a small world. As of chapter 186, the female protagonist has already left the small world. Everyone says the writing style is depressing, and the author also feels it is.

She was lost. "Following Meimei is what I want, but it's not what I'm after. What should I be after? Power? A handsome tomcat? To mark my territory and be king? I hate tomcats, and I don't enjoy being with them at all." The male cat's penis was small and had barbs. Before Yuka gained sentience, she disliked sexual intercourse.

The premise is good, but the writing style is like a diary entry, with all sentences using subject-verb-object structures. All the characters feel stiff and emotionless. 😒