Immortal Splendor Along the Path of Alchemy

It's good. I had trouble getting into the beginning because some of the wording was a bit over the top. For example, every sentence about the female lead started with her blinking big eyes. But I didn't see that anymore later on, and it got more and more interesting. It's worth watching!

It's pretty good! 😁😁The writing is mature, and the characters are vividly portrayed. 🤭

The author writes really well, it would be great if there were a few more chapters every day!

At first glance, the character seemed rather immature, like a little girl. Perhaps the character is indeed quite young, but it just felt a bit odd.

Suddenly, I felt the later plot was a bit boring, like it was repeating the storyline from Tianxiang Continent, and Duan Zihua was always invincible...

I've read a few chapters, and the writing style makes me think it'll be a Mary Sue/Saintly protagonist story, not a pure cultivation novel. I want to read about leveling up and fighting monsters, but I don't like the female lead having too many so-called relatives who hold her back. I'm torn.

The female lead, a woman with several-year-old children, keeps calling everyone "grandpa," and she supposedly grew up in a cultivation world. She addresses most older people as "senior," but seeing her, a woman, calling someone "grandpa" gives me goosebumps; it feels like she's a little girl.

I hope the author continues writing about what happens after the realm of gods.

The author's logic seems to plummet whenever he writes about Zihua; he goes from fighting someone in the Qi Refining stage to someone in the Golden Core stage and still can't kill them, like a persistent, stubborn ailment. The female lead clearly saw through Duan Zihua's disguise but kept convincing herself it couldn't be him, not even mentioning it to the male lead she was with.

Overall, the story concept is good, the writing is good, and the logic is good; it could definitely be a sequel. The few minor plot holes are quite impressive for a female author writing a cultivation novel. Keep it up! 💪