Konoha No Tenten

The idea is good, but the writing is not very good. I hope I can work hard to write the next one.

Author, the tendons used in bows are used on the bow body. The energy storage of the bow depends on the bow body, not the strings. The tendons are attached to the bow layer by layer. The strings are made of materials with lower elasticity and higher toughness, the better. But they must not be made of metal. Because of metal fatigue, it will be terrible if the string collapses. Common string materials are mulberry bark, etc. There are also insect silk threads, animal hair and fur, woven into multiple strands, and the tendons are used on the strings to create an oversized slingshot.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh being being to to to to to toss me into a devilish muscular man with eight-pack abs every day!

It was fine at first, but then it completely turned into a fantasy novel. The reason is probably that the gold finger is turned up too high, the protagonist's strength is too far away from the others, and the author does not want to give up the plot characters, so he has to join the second set of collective cheating. The end result is not Hokage at all.

The author said that this book was single, so I read it with confidence, hoping that I would not be poisoned later. There is a book called Shiranui Genma of Konoha that is really disgusting.

Regarding the huge changes in Naruto and Sakura that appeared in recent chapters, book friends have said so. Many people are speculating whether Sakura is reborn, or why she is so depressed. I'm sure it's not the case here. First of all, judging from the previous content of this book and the changes in Xiao Li and Neji, the author of this book pays attention to logic when writing. I believe you have read many fan fictions in which the protagonist does nothing, but the plot changes and develops into the situation expected by the protagonist. The author calls it the butterfly effect. There is also a situation where the protagonist does many things that affect the development of the plot, and in the end the plot is forced to develop according to the original work, which is called the problem of historical inertia. In fact, both of these are due to the author's lack of writing power and his inability to control the plot. Judging from the current plot, the author does not intend to follow the original plot, but the various changes are also logical. But the reason for Sakura-Naruto's change has not yet been revealed, and the protagonist does not know what she did to cause such a change, and depending on the situation, Sasuke has also changed a lot. It seems that the plot has a tendency to get out of control. But I'm sure it's not. First of all, the author said that there are no alien time travelers other than the protagonist in this book, and also said that the changes in Sakura and the others are due to the actions of the protagonist. According to the latest chapter, Sakura has worries, but her worries are no different from the worries of other little girls. They are just ordinary worries of little girls. They are incomparable with Xiao Li's unyieldingness and Neji's worries of being enveloped by fate. But this is the real Sakura. In the original book, Sakura is such an ordinary little girl when she is a child (in terms of thinking). Then she will solve her troubles with Tiantian's help and strengthen her heart. It's just that it's unclear why Tiantian doesn't know where he helped Sakura. (Visual inspection is a narrative writing technique) But this is not important. What is important is why Sakura has such troubles. In the original book, Sakura also has various troubles that only little girls have, but they are not so serious. Judging from the latest plot, Sasuke rejected Sakura's love, and Sakura realized her true heart. This paragraph does not exist in the original work. So is this a plot that the author deliberately added to change the plot? If this is the case, it is no different from doing nothing but forcing the plot to change. Judging from the previous content, the author is not such a person. In other words, there is a reason why this plot happened. Why does this plot happen? There is only one answer, and that is that Sasuke has changed. Reminiscent of Sasuke's sense of disobedience when he saw him every day three years ago, Sasuke seems to be more mature than in the original work. Referring to the original work, Sasuke never paid attention to the nymphomaniacs who liked him when he was a child, and it was impossible for him to refuse others' confessions. And why did he know about Sakura's strange powers and dual personality? The strange power is okay, but the dual personality is something that only Sakura knows until the end of the original work. Moreover, Sasuke said, 'This time, I must... Definitely...' This should probably say that Weasel must be killed!

The plot structure and rhythm of this book are very good~ It's just that I can't eat it every day... Especially I don't understand why the author turned Tiantian into a King Kong Barbie. I'm so devastated. QAQ

Hinata's pink is still disgusting, just as disgusting as the fox demon matchmaker's moon pink. Basically, Sakura's negative fans later turned into Hinata fans. When watching Naruto, I always directly block Hinata and Sakura because of Hinata. Watch the fox demon little matchmaker block Honghong 😤. Nausea

I feel like the protagonist is not a master of concealed weapons at all. Is someone who can only throw concealed weapons with his hands considered a master?

Ah, why is it that under the influence of the protagonist, a bunch of genin have surpassed the strength of the jounin not long after graduation, especially Xiao Li. In the original work, he worked hard, and the influence of the protagonist is very small. The result is the same as cheating, which is too exaggerated. .

I casually glanced at the cover and thought it was a girl with a big face 🤭

Is this book about getting married or single?

Single? Then you can take a look. I personally don't like reading about married people. I'm afraid that some authors conceal their sexual orientation. When asked, they will say you guess, guess your sister. This kind of usually refers to married people. It's best to add a label. Married people watch married people, Lily people watch Lily, and single people watch singles. This way, you won't argue. If you are tearing up these kinds of things, you can delete them directly.

Long zero, long time, long time, long time, long time, long time, long time, long time, long time and long time. Anti-harmony can only be mixed with homophones, and the administrator's question is the title of the book. The group is newly created and has no one. There are a lot of Naruto fanarts, including the Devil Muscle Man Daily version. You are welcome to join to discuss the plot and the like.

I think of that sealed evil book Tiantian

It collapsed after writing about seventy chapters.

It's surprisingly good. I'm halfway through it. The visuals are great. Many people can't stand muscular women, but I'm different. I'm curious.

As soon as I saw the Weapon Master, I thought of a young man who doesn't work hard enough to have a sword soul with sword spirit.

I don't really like the feeling of being a good partner. For Chutian, Naruto is as warm as the sun and inspires her to move forward. As for Neji, even if it changes more, it feels like putting himself underneath to protect Hinata. In my opinion, it is impossible for these two people to come together. So the author used the butterfly effect as an excuse to write that Hinata left Naruto and chose Neji, which felt weird and awkward.

I have finished reading Yi Jing. Except for the author's mental state and writing in a hurry, it is generally good. So in the second part, it is said that Shenma does not have Nezha form. The curiosity-seeking party is not convinced.

Speechless! Do you have to forgive him because he is Jiraiya? Wrong is wrong! You can skip it! Why is it written so upside down and posted!

After reading a few pictures, I feel that it is far different from other Naruto books. The fighting is not good. I feel that the force setting can only rely on the system in the later stage. Naruto stories that rely too much are not interesting because there are too many. Readers can't stand it. I recommend the author to read other people's books. Naruto: Water Release is the Strongest. You can make the protagonist advance in technology. Gatling. Big Ivan. Isn't it good? This is called a weapon master. Looking at your profile, I feel like you are the Weapon Master in League of Legends.

I don't know what to write and I'm speechless

To be honest, Tiantian is the one with the least potential among the twelve little heroes.

I saw this book again. I had forgotten all the books I had read before.

Why did Nezha lose his form and give me Nezha's life back? ! !

A very interesting Naruto novel, highly recommended!

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How to say it? I saw more than 50 of them. The setting of the author is very interesting, but it seems that he did not write an outline and did not make some detailed settings. As a result, the language description of the plot is smooth and smooth, and it is very stiff and out of touch. It seems that he has an idea and is ready to write it wherever he goes. He is a good creative author and has some skills, but he still needs to practice the rhythm control. I look forward to your future, I saw this first. . . . But don't be discouraged. Everyone has their strengths and weaknesses. At least the character of the protagonist has not changed in terms of character handling. Last year, it seems that the book was very popular in the first two years. Dafeng's book, Dafeng Dangjingren, was almost the same as what you wrote. His stiffness made him uncomfortable. I remember the protagonist in the early stage was, at that time, A character like a little gangster doesn't really care about other things. He listens to music every day. At most, he is a little better than these things and adds some wisdom. But before he escapes from that chapter, he suddenly becomes filled with the righteousness of the family and the country, serving the country and the people. It's like you can imagine that in Gu Long's novels and Jin Yong's novels, he was Guo Jing and Huang Rong just a moment ago. I beat up a little thief on the roadside, and the next moment, it suddenly turned into 20 years later. Guo Jing, the giant hero of Xiangcheng who defended the city, also moved many people inexplicably. It was so blunt. At least I see that you are better than him now. There is also a leader who always recites poems and pretends to be B. He even pretends not to understand. He recited the 30 chapters of that broken poem no less than five times. , And it's the same one every time, no other actions are the same. No one thinks he is awkward except him. He is better than you in writing. In terms of plot rhythm, at least in the early stage I saw, he is much worse than you. A and B have a chance on the 10th. You may not be better than him. His one is really disgusting to me. How did it become popular?