The Fantasy Journey of the Void Mage

I hope the author's works won't be like those glamorous bitches out there, filled with too many conspiracies, super villains, inexplicable calculations, etc. Life is already very tiring, just reading a novel, I don't want to be too tired with the inexplicable villains and inexplicable plots.

The idea is good but the narrative style is a bit uncomfortable

I'm really sorry about this. Because I'm usually quite busy, I uploaded it directly without reading it after I finished writing it. The result is a lot of typos and sentence fragmentation, and it has been criticized a lot -0- So I have started to revise the previous chapters a few days ago, and I also promise that I will check them carefully when I finish writing and upload them in the future. I'm really sorry--😭

Read the introduction! Took Galen away? ? ? Is my Lux no longer fragrant? Or is my Sword Princess not beautiful anymore? Or is my piano girl not old enough? Or am I, Kyle, not good-looking? You should talk about it.

I didn't see the protagonist using his wisdom to analyze spells and understand the rules. I only saw him using the mage as a warrior!

Starting from the encounter with the giant dragon in the forest, the whole book dropped to a new level, and successfully transformed into a novice novel. Later, he subdued the Black Widow and criticized Stark's father. The supporting character successfully lowered his IQ and EQ, and died of poison. Dumbledore is such a cautious person. It was logical to let Pigfoot enter Hogwarts as a teacher. Later, he ignored Dumbledore during the meeting with the dragon and made Dumbledore unable to understand. I am Dumbledore. Lido definitely suspected that the protagonist and the dragon were plotting something. The protagonist's series of actions were simply selfish and did not treat Dumbledore and the people of Hogwarts as true allies. He also wanted to manipulate others and use them simply as tools. The most rubbish meditation method. A man as smart as Dumbledore couldn't figure it out. He dismissed Dumbledore in just a few words. Dumbledore loved the school and the students so much that he was willing to sacrifice himself to protect the school and the students. He would actually do it because of the protagonist. After a lot of talk, he happily agreed to send students to another world to work for the protagonist and take risks in getting involved in royal battles. He also agreed to be the protagonist's dog... After the poison test was completed, the front was remarkable, but the back was full of poisonous mushrooms.

I couldn't finish ten chapters, I talked a lot of nonsense to myself, and the character descriptions were not very good.

It looked fine at first, but when I saw people going to Assassin's Creed to spread their faith, I couldn't stand it. What you want is someone who truly believes in you, but they tell you that the person and god who booked you to spread your faith is just a stronger magician? And then tell them they can be like you? You're still spreading p's beliefs?

Icathia and Demacia are separated by a continent, and then Galen, the leader of the Vanguard Legion, a mortal, goes alone across a continent to do this thing, to do something that even the ascended ones may not be able to succeed. Also, the protagonist's light was seen by Galen, but not others? What's going on with the nearby Mount Targon? The Kinkou Sect won't care? What about Ryze? Don't tell me about distance. Ryze in CG has R. Ryze will not take anything about the void lightly. Some people may say that Ryze may have taken a break, but I can tell you that Ryze hasn't rested for a moment in thousands of years, and his lines are all there. Then, the void creatures were all created by the Void Monitor, the Void Prophet, the Void Walker, and the Void Daughter were all eroded by the void. Where does the inheritance come from? The so-called void magic of Icacia is actually given by the Void Watcher. Lissandra's power source in the middle period also comes from the Void Watcher (officially it has been recognized that the Frost Watcher is the Void Watcher). If the Icathians did not have the void, they would be slaves of Shurima, so where would the inheritance come from? Finally, where did the sound come from? The Void Monitors are a group that has never experienced time or space, and the void creations cannot even communicate. So, where did the sound come from in Icathia? I am not saying this to criticize, but I hope the author will think carefully before writing and don't write some unreasonable things. This is very embarrassing.

I hate those who say that Western dragons look like lizards. According to your statement, Eastern dragons look like worms.

There is a big problem with the route that the protagonist took. When I went to Valoran, I only got the power of the void. I was really speechless. The most valuable thing in Valoran is the ascension ceremony. Wouldn't it be nice to become an ascender and then be promoted to a god? With the power of the void and the power of ascension, the gods will be invincible without coming out.

There is no well-conceived book. Maybe you can read it blindly. Let me briefly talk about the problems I saw 1 Word count of buying football team water Toxic index ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Reason: There is water in several chapters. I thought it was gone. It's out 2 Hogwarts details Ignore all the biggest rewards of traveling to Hogwarts and forcefully write a plot There are none of the three well-known artifacts (Elder Wand, Philosopher's Stone, Invisibility Cloak) Animagus and transfiguration, which I think are second only to the three artifacts, the protagonist has not learned (One can change himself and the other can change into something) West, even dead things become living things) 3 Inconsistencies Going to Hogwarts and saying that he has lived for more than ten years and not remembering the main plot, but after buying a team, he remembers the number of words in this league and that league 4 IQ fluctuates up and down The first time he traveled, he also knew how to exchange gold for money, but when he went to the zombie world, he went directly to other worlds to exchange for fake coins and was called by the police. That's what I saw To be honest, I'm bragging and don't draft the article. Can you please plan the plot

There are more than 1.9 Million words, and there are an estimated 1 million words of nonsense. I really want to read it, but I really can't read it. I just say one sentence and then explain it in several paragraphs. After reading 120 chapters, I really can't bear it. The plot was quite attractive to me, even though it was full of long explanations. Represents only personal opinions and personal preferences.

The first book that made me hate Hermione (maybe there are others I haven't read yet)

You must know that the protagonist has been a prince for 16 years, and his quality is somewhat low.

The author dared to write Harry Potter without even understanding the plot? So brave

There are women but not men ~ Are you a tomboy? ? ? 😱😱😱

I can't stand it after just two pages. Is this really a powerful author? No one has made any sexual innuendo to you yet. Are you kidding me? You are a prince or a lord. What commoner doesn't want to fly up a branch and become a phoenix? Also, it's been 16 years since etiquette. I don't believe you can't adapt well. Really, you are not suitable for writing novels

It's a bit interesting. There are so many girls. If you don't choose, why don't you bring a gay? Okay, this is very interesting, I'm very interested.

I know this author is actually gay.

I feel like the book is good, but I can't take it in. I can't read it. I'm leaving.

The first chapter is poisonous. There is no one author

This author is completely rambling. The first sentence is discussing meditation with the ancient master, and the next sentence is that the protagonist is considering contacting Stark, and then he doesn't know where to go. It makes people look confused.

I watched the pirated version before and liked it better, so I ordered the full version.

What's the use of building a territory? Why do people who don't need it and don't need it for magic experiments want to develop their territory and make money?

It's a bit painful to see that the unit of time is light years. I can tolerate it if I'm a little wet, but it's a bit unacceptable for common sense mistakes.