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Why write sex-change articles? Such articles that pollute human nature should be banned.

He can't be a eunuch, right?😅

Just wipe out 155? O()o Alas, without the 155-caliber cannon that represents glory and justice, the protagonist is just a salty fish.

Let's briefly talk about the current problems ① The power system is weak. It basically has a level division, but it is too rough and the professional characteristics are unclear. For example, after the protagonist upgrades, in addition to the plug-in enhancement, it is the magic power enhancement. As a reader, I have no idea about high-level professions. What is the strength of the industry? The other senior professionals I have come into contact with so far only know that they are powerful and have the strength to suppress them. There is no mention of why they are so powerful. God's Domain also says it is vague. This thin setting can easily cause readers' reading fatigue ② There are too many pitfalls, and foreshadowing is a good thing. If there are too many holes, I'm afraid you'll forget that there are holes that can arouse the reader's curiosity. But if you fill the holes too slowly, the readers will almost forget that filling the hole again will have little sensory difference from digging the hole but not filling it. If it's the kind of big hole that runs through the whole text, forget about it. Try to control the rhythm of filling the hole with small holes as much as possible ③ The side plot is slightly messy and redundant , to a large extent, this experience has nothing to do with the plot you designed. Instead, it is due to the weakness of the training system and the too single plot of the protagonist. A lot of things happen to others every day. As a result, the protagonist rolls up his sleeves and beats up the plot. In summary, it lacks excitement Let's say that for now.