With the Devil

Don't worry. I believe this book will be popular. It has been fully ordered. I hope the author will stick to it. In addition, it would be better if there were more updates.

Because of the completion, this book cannot be published now. I thought it could be distributed for free, so I can only create a new book, which will probably be uploaded during the Qingming Festival holiday 🤝

I finished reading this novel yesterday. How should I put it? I really like the author's writing style, but I feel that the author does not have much experience and is not very precise about the roles given to the supporting characters. In a good novel, it is very important for the supporting characters to be well-rounded. However, there are places where the supporting actors are given too much role. After reading other book reviews, some said that the main character was too weak and was overshadowed by the supporting characters. In fact, this does not have much impact on the halo of the protagonist. As I said before, this article feels very similar to the writing style of "Jiang Ye". The protagonist in the early stages of "Jiang Ye" is also very weak, and it can even be said that he only has combat effectiveness in the middle and later stages. I feel like there is still a problem with the distribution of roles. This is a matter of experience. The more you accumulate, the better you will get. Actually, I have a lot to say, but after thinking about it I let it go. After all, you are not familiar with me, so it would be a bit disrespectful to give suggestions directly. I'll talk about it slowly after I get acquainted with it. However, I suggest you make some improvements to Mao Ni's writing, because the writing style and techniques are really similar to Mao Ni's. Finally, I hope this book will get better and better, don't be too eunuch ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ! ! ! !

I really believe that the author will be popular... Even if it is not this one I like it so far But there is a reason why it is not popular Analyze the reasons from a utilitarian point of view. The following reasons are not shortcomings, but I think the current market needs The layout is too big. Although I believe in the author's writing power, I vaguely feel that it will not be able to finish. With such a large layout (coupled with such a slow speed), it is easy for people to lose patience The characters are too rich and many supporting roles are very vivid. (Comparatively speaking, the protagonist is the least vivid) But the aura of the supporting characters has surpassed that of the protagonist. This has been improved recently. The vividness of the supporting characters is not a shortcoming, but this book does have too much ink about the supporting characters, which does not conform to the aesthetics of today's online literature (but I read it very happily) There are too many branch plots. I remember clearly that there are many chapters that simply describe branch plots. My impression at the time was that the author must not have written many online articles. The description of branch plots is really helpful in reshaping the world view and shaping characters. But... Writing too much does slow down the pace of the whole book But the above three points definitely do not mean that this book is bad, and it is definitely not a shortcoming or a problem. It is just a problem of the market in my opinion. If the author thinks it is wrong, just think of it as my crazy words. The author is happy enough Everyone said it was a tricky book, but I felt a bit like Jian Lai or Xue Zhong... This book is really the book I look forward to seeing updated every day. I hope the author will write better and better. By the way, is there a novel group?

The Hanshan Black Market chapter should be written in detail in the future, right? I always feel that the man who is willing to kill people in exchange for strong drinks will appear in the Youzhou chapter. And it seems that Yuan Zhen should have many stories. Chaohua can't understand the fourth volume. Is it because Sister Xiaoman died? I guess the hawthorns at my junior sister's house will become the hawthorns at my senior brother's house in the future, right? 🤫

The plot is really good, and the description of the big shots' methods is also very interesting, which makes people like it very much. There is nothing particularly embarrassing. But when describing the fighting, it is really a bit too bland. I hope the author can add more details in this aspect, and try to write more excitingly when the killing is not possible. There are always some modern measurement methods that make people feel strange and slightly uncomfortable.

The quality of this book is quite high, the writing style is sophisticated, the plot, characterization, feelings, and artistic conception are all very good. From the reader's point of view, I hope it will achieve good results (so that the author can stay motivated and finish the book 😏)

What the hell is this? . . . . Still updated?

Some people like to be pretentious, this is good writing

Awesome, I was talking about asking for a few days off, but in fact I have already finished the book.

I feel that the author's writing style is really good and the plot is also pretty good. Please keep writing.

I just read 20 chapters, which is too few for an online article, but I still can't wait to write about my feelings. At least in my opinion, this book is a good book, and I habitually want to find a book as a template. After thinking about it, I feel that the writing style is a bit like Jiang Ye. It's been a long time since I've encountered an article with this style of writing. In the past two years, the trendy writing style has tended to be funny. This kind of writing style that is more serious and not nonsensical is really rare. I hope your results will get better and better.

It's very well written ~ interesting! ! !

Don't write down in the later stage, find a great person to recommend you, and your grades will improve.

I have to work harder to update, let's do five updates a day 😄

The writing is really good, but the grades are not good. Come on, stop being a eunuch.

I wish you a happy New Year. I hope you, the author, will continue to work hard and do your best, so that I can kill more happily.

The introduction to the novel briefly introduces the practice methods of various practitioners in the Tang Dynasty. It makes people secretly amazed. There are many characters in the Youzhou volume currently in progress, but each has its own characteristics in the descriptions! The protagonist's various strategies and suggestions are really eye-catching. Reading all the way from the beginning, although it is a fantasy novel, it does not fall into the cliché! There is no training speed like riding a rocket, and there is no aura of invincibility and brainlessness. And after reading along the way, I have a good impression of the author's writing attitude. It can be seen that the author has carefully studied some places. I hope that later authors can keep it up~ The author wrote a big puzzle at the beginning. The puzzle attracted me very well, and I immediately decided to pursue it. At the same time, the appearance of the puzzle gave our protagonist a small limelight, and at the same time confirmed his identity as the smartest person in Beicheng. It is also an introduction to future development. The character creation takes the little sister Chen Ni at the beginning as an example. Chen Ni's eccentricity, Chen Yi's love for his sister, and his yearning for the outside world are really well expressed. The author's writing style is very sophisticated in terms of the characters' personalities. But I think the author can create a more layered character image of Chen Yi. Sometimes the protagonist's image is not outstanding enough and he is easily suppressed by others. But the author also explained that the protagonist will improve in the future, and the protagonist will rise after Hange City! I'm looking forward to this~ Some of the ideas and jokes in the book are really interesting, such as the snowflakes that are actually hail as big as your hand, the name of the character named Chen Pi, etc. These small details made me laugh out loud. The author really wrote brilliantly.

My ability is limited, I'll give you a reward of 1,000. I'm going to scare you to death. Please give me more.

The writing is very good and there is something worth learning from.

Don't tell me, it's a bit fishy

So is the author continuing to update? I changed the book. What is the title?

Update another 10,000 words and reward another 1,000 points. Come on.

The writing style is very good, the world view is good, and the practice is also very interesting. But when I read it, there was no passion at all, and there wasn't any pretentious plot that made people's blood boil. Even though the plot was flammable, your descriptions were still so bland. The style of Zhu Xian is similar to yours, but I remember many classic plots, but there are almost none in this book.

I'm a little confused. If a person is on the list, or Jieyuan, can he really take the exam three times?

There is another question that I have been holding back for a long time. It is also a question in other novels. Does increasing spiritual practice increase intelligence? If so, will reading become faster and faster?

I suggest the author read the introduction of the book twice. The first sentence is a bit unclear and hard to read (=_=)

After reading Chapter 170, I only have one feeling: the protagonist is too overestimated. I suggest that if the author prefers strategy, he can write some low-level martial arts or historical novels.

A small suggestion for the puzzle at the beginning I hope the protagonist can add a concluding sentence at the end. "If A is true and B is false, it is a straight lie; if A is false and B is true, it is false. Therefore, what is said is ultimately false, so it does not matter whether you ask A or B, whether you ask about Xiao Long Bao or Zhai Su Bao." This is the way I want to write it 😁 I hope you will adopt it.