I Am the Abyss

I have to say that the beginning is quite attractive.

The first volume gives people a strong sense of dissuasion. The word abyss has been used in some fantasy novels before. The impression is that evil chaos is powerful. There is nothing wrong with the protagonist farming. However, as many others have said, the protagonist's presence is too weak. The first volume almost all focuses on supporting characters in a city. The protagonist does nothing but come out to make soy sauce? ? This has nothing to do with the writing style. The author's writing style is still good, but the layout is a bit too biased. Just like other novels about the God's Space that I have read, the protagonist is farming at the beginning, but in the end, it is written that the protagonist is gone, and all the writing is placed on the supporting role. However, the protagonist is too involved and it feels too cheap. Everything has to be done by himself. There are also some ideas that I can write about the protagonist conquering the world. The protagonists I see now, besides pretending to be bratty and fighting, are just pretending to be nice to others. . . Write more about the evolution and development of the protagonist. From your introduction, it seems that you will also conquer other worlds later. It would be bad if you want each world to be like your first volume and put too much thought into the supporting characters.

Could the author change the main character's name? It's very inconsistent for a good Western fantasy novel to suddenly have a protagonist with a Chinese name (don't say it's admiring foreigners, I just think it's inconsistent, the words in brackets are not for the author to see!) It can be replaced with something like the real name of God. Of course, this is just a suggestion!

I've only read Chapter 5, but no matter what, if it doesn't fall apart, it's definitely a good book. In the past year, I have occasionally looked at the rankings, but this one made me see some flavor. For the rest, I really can't stand the writing style, or the writing style, and the content of the story. Finally, cheers to the author.

Author, please don't do that extra chapter later, okay? At first I thought you were a eunuch. The result was unexpected. . . . . Moreover, the computer shows that your latest update is on the 17th, which is all the fault of the extra chapter. And if people who see this latest update don't understand the situation, they will definitely think that you have become a eunuch. How can your grades be good like this? If you don't change, you will be thrown into the street! Because no matter how beautiful your writing is, the update time is a fatal blow.

I think the writing is quite good. The main character is "Not the Holy Mother", and a few are capable of writing about the abyss. The demonic insects are also very strong. The subject matter is also novel, and it has the potential to be a masterpiece. Personal shortcomings: This should be considered a fantasy style, after all, it is an abyss, but the protagonist's name is very funny. I suggest you find a suitable reason to change the name, which is more like a western fantasy. Personal suggestion: The protagonist is the abyss and the world, so you must have the personality of a superior person. You can be cruel, crazy, forbearing and giving in, etc., But you cannot be like an ordinary human being. Therefore, I hope that in the future, "there will be no harem", or there will be no female protagonists, and no carnal desires, otherwise it will become ordinary. Advantages: The description of demonic insects is great, especially when lying on the protagonist, it feels like a heartfelt pet, which is very touching 😁

I don't know what the mentality of those who want to persuade people to quit is, but Abyss is probably a top manager like an emperor. It is impossible to describe the upper level every day, but the lower level is the meat of the novel, and the upper level is just the backbone, representing the direction of the novel.

The extra chapter is for entertainment and has nothing to do with the main text. If you are not interested, you can skip to the third volume of the Unification of the Continent. Thank you 🌹🌹

After receiving the readers' reminder of the great love-killing love, Zhang Bai will now be set as Abyss's real name in the subsequent chapters. We are now asking for the daily names of the protagonists. The selected ones can contact me directly to order the supporting role. The names will be sent directly here. The requirements must be consistent with the abyss setting!

The subject matter is great, but the protagonist's presence is too low. Don't know what you are talking about? It is recommended that the author add the protagonist's presence at the end.

Come on! The subject matter is great! The pen power works! If you keep at it, it will become popular! I'll give you the tickets first, and don't be a eunuch for good books. When the word count reaches 70,000 or 80,000, I'll advertise it, and there will be more people soon!

The layout is quite big, but the writing is not good. It cannot be promoted in such a small place, and the main character does not have many roles. I remember the last one written like this was "Controlling Evolution" which has been inactive for a long time.

Another GM who ended up personally

There are too many things to talk about that are irrelevant, I can only talk about water

I saw Chapter 21. If it weren't for this subject, it would be very well written. But regarding the protagonist's sense of existence, one is the abyss consciousness and the other is a supporting role. There is really no comparison. However, the excessive narrative supporting roles make me feel that the protagonist really has no sense of existence. First of all, the protagonist wants to devour the world. In other words, the person who is at least equal to the protagonist is world consciousness. Normally, I want to write that the protagonist explodes soldiers to pollute the world, and then devours the world in one fell swoop. But now I only see a group of people with long names scheming and fighting, as well as the grudges and entanglements of various forces. Then the protagonist seems to have arranged a big game of chess and then quietly watched the play somewhere. Well,,, we readers are also watching the play, but it is still the kind of play that we can't understand but still insist on watching. That's all

No, the protagonist is almost almosttransparent and can't write about farmingIt's refreshingIt's even more impossible to describe the feeling of Western fantasy

Please add me to the group!

Those pictures are to introduce the world view and introduce the main characters in the later stage. Looking at the next few chapters, there is always a foreshadowing that is not easy to show up all at once. I don't know who they are...

Because the first world in the setting is for setting up and torturing people, a big event will happen when the first world ends, and the entire Void Sea will be online very high. It is not easy to write about an emperor rolling up his sleeves and going to the battlefield, so many people in the first world will feel that the plot of the protagonist is insufficient. The second world will begin to narrate the protagonist in a new form. It is not interesting to spoil it for the time being, otherwise it will be boring. I hope everyone understands and supports it. Xiaosheng is a low-level manager of a group company. He has a lot of data matters every day. It is a very happy thing for Xiaosheng to be recognized by everyone for the book he wrote. This is also the reason why Xiaosheng works hard to code after working for more than ten hours a day. I love you, you are the best readers🌹🌹

After reading a few chapters, the opening world view is quite grand. Like the world view in the middle and late stages of Lord God's Way, this world view will definitely be interesting in the later stages. And the writing style feels okay to me. I hope the author can keep it up and don't collapse! There are too few words now, so I'll save it for now, hoping it won't kill me!

The writing is a bit poor, and I can't see what the main character is like.

I haven't read it yet, the subject matter is acceptable, add it to the bookshelf and wait and see

I think of my youth His name is... Mu Susu

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Because many readers complained that the extra episode affected the continuity of viewing, I deleted it and replaced it. That's it!

The new book has been sent to Creation: The Game of Life and Death of the Universe. You can read it on QQ. The starting point will be synchronized later. Thank you!

My big dnf is the abyss!

Brother, do you remember your character's name?

The layout is large but a bit confusing. If I didn't like your story, I probably wouldn't be able to watch it^ _ ^