The New White Snake Asks the Immortal

I don't know if I can see Mu Duo again, Mu Bai is a good match|･ω･｀)

Nanhuang Baifu School! It's really awesome! The master of digging graves comes to teach new tricks! Digging graves without a shovel! Even jumping before digging! The disco does not have a subwoofer! The coffin board is still raised!

I recently read the latest chapter of the book and started to think about it again and again. I really, really like this book, it's a very special experience! Here I would like to share some of my personal experiences, which are quite subjective, so just have fun communicating with them as book friends! (By the way, is there any book club group? I really want to share this book with everyone). The following contains spoilers, please read with caution! First of all, let me talk about some of the things that I am not satisfied with about this book. (1) First of all, in the early and middle stages, which lasts until the protagonist turns into a dragon, the protagonist's psychology and motivations will jump a little at certain times, and it feels not very coherent. For example, in the plot where the protagonist escapes from the Li Tang Palace and enters southern Xinjiang, my impression is that there is almost no clear main plot drive. There is basically no explanation of what the protagonist is going to do in a certain chapter, and the adventure in the ancient Dragon Palace in the middle is also slightly abrupt. Of course, in this plot, the protagonist regains his freedom and wanders around aimlessly, and the article repeatedly emphasizes the protagonist's monster perspective and relatively casual personality, so I don't have any objections to the plot arrangement. I just feel that there is a lack of explanation between each other, "as if the protagonist has completely forgotten what happened before", so it feels a bit jumpy. (Of course, it may be that I am more sentimental and miss my old friends, so I am eager to see an explanation 2333) (2) The plot between the protagonist turning into a dragon and before discovering the Dragon Gate. In one plot, the protagonist is involved in the world for merit. This section of the plot begins to gradually connect to the main line. I feel that the descriptions of secular dynasties are a bit cookie-cutter, and the descriptions of wars between secular countries are also a bit repetitive. Of course, history itself is repetitive, especially when the article needs to highlight the decadence and ignorance of secular dynasties and contrast them with the snake demon empire. This kind of shaping is understandable, but it was a little too frequent during that period of the plot, which was a bit aesthetic fatigue. Interspersed in the middle are many scenes where the protagonist beats up the street prostitutes who are interested in sex, which also feels like this. (But I don't particularly mind, after all, who doesn't like cute little Bai~) (3) As for the issue of realm, in fact, as a novel with upgrading elements, it is inevitable that as the protagonist upgrades, the high-level characters who were once so high and rare will become less and less valuable as the protagonist's level increases. There is probably a slight sense of inconsistency in the level settings of the characters that appear when the protagonist is in the Nascent Soul transformation stage and the Mysterious Immortal stage. But since I am not particularly concerned about combat power, everything is for the needs of the plot, so although I feel it is slightly inconsistent, I can accept it. After all, it does not affect my experience of the emotions in the plot. (4) Regarding the issue of borrowing a large number of elements from Sword 3... When I first watched it, I felt a lot of inconsistencies and it was awkward, but as the plot progressed, I gradually ignored this problem. The name is just a code name, just change it. But direct appropriation is not a long-term solution after all, and just because I don't mind doesn't mean that others don't mind, so I'll just mention it here without making any further comments. I'm going to brag a lot later! ! ! Let me talk about what I think is good about this book. It may be recalling a certain plot, or it may be an overview, and I will write wherever I think of it. (1) First, let's start with the author's description of the snake stage! The snake's habits, some small living habits, and hunting skills may not be completely based on reality, but they are consistent. Xiaobai's habit of swallowing without chewing even gradually changed after a thousand chapters. This adds so much to the agility of the article! There are many incompetent authors who forget the characteristics of the protagonist when writing about non-human protagonists. They write completely according to human beings, and the charm of the non-human protagonist is lost. Moreover, these "small non-human details" are complementary to Xiaobai's self-perception as a beast created by the article. Each small detail naturally and repeatedly deepens the impression that "Xiaobai is not and will never be a human being", instead of describing "human monsters have different paths" over and over again in pale words. This way of shaping allowed me to naturally put it into Xiaobai's perspective when I saw the villain in the novel shouting to slay demons, which aroused my emotions. This is a unique reading experience for this novel! (2) Before Chapter 170, the description of Xiaobai's daily life in Huashan. This is where it all begins! I felt really comfortable reading this paragraph of daily life, the daily life of a fairy family in this world full of fairy spirit. Moreover, the characters are created concisely and distinctively, including a master who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, a strict senior brother, a senior brother who has unrequited love, a lazy and playful senior sister, a fat cook, and a carefree little snake. During this period, although Xiaobai experienced the experience of going down the mountain, he was always protected by Chunyang Palace. Every time the plot reaches the point of returning to Chunyang Palace, I will breathe a sigh of relief like Xiaobai, as if I have returned to a safe home. The descriptions of these more than one hundred chapters made me completely regard Chunyang Palace as home with Xiaobai, and regard Qingxu's master and senior brothers and sisters as family. Then this directly led to me being stabbed in the back! ! ! After Xiaobai was wronged by the river, I really wanted to see her return to Chunyang Palace to rest and recuperate, but the result was to see her being sent to the demon-slaying platform and being used as a tool to suppress her for 200 years... During the period of being suppressed, when she knelt down and kowtowed to the master, the emotional explosion made me completely immersed in it. I couldn't bear to see it. I felt a sense of despair that there was no place for me in the world. At that moment I took on the role of Xiaobai, and I felt like the sky was about to fall, so I just emo'd for several days. The author is so cruel! ! ! This part of the story is really well written and very appealing to my taste. (3) Description of family love. What impressed me the most about this book was that the author laid out nearly a thousand chapters and almost made it clear who Xiaobai's parents were, but the moment he shouted it out to everyone at the end still moved me. The protagonist has seen the phantom of the Dragon Queen countless times before, but he wants to embrace her but cannot, and wants to pursue but cannot. When he returns to the small courtyard of his childhood, he can only look at the phantom of the past, and what he wants to say cannot be conveyed. Every time such a plot makes me want to cry but I can't. It accumulates time and time again, and settles down time and time again. Finally, at the moment when it is announced to the world, it seems that all the emotions are rushing out, and all the longings have become tangible, and my eyes are red. It is not like the straightforward and utilitarian feelings in other cool novels that directly give all the golden fingers to the protagonist. In the article, Xiaobai's parents truly love to lick the calf. They watch silently and accompany Xiaobai's growth. The water flows slowly and moistens everything silently. I don't know how many thousands of years have taken this ordinary warmth to become thick and just right. If there was more emphasis on family love in the article, I'm afraid it would be cliche; if it were less, it wouldn't be able to evoke such emotions. It's just right! (4) is actually complementary to point (3) and is about "bloodline". "Bloodline", "bloodline" and "origin" are elements that have appeared in countless works, and they are often given to the protagonist for no reason. Some appear in the early stage and some appear in the later stage. Just like Naruto, who was once the Hokage, he thought he was the one who counterattacked through hard work, but later found out that he was the son of the fourth generation, the blood of the Uzumaki family, and the reincarnation of the child of Six Paths. "It turns out that it was still about reincarnation in the end." For a youth comic that focuses on hard work to counterattack, it is quite absurd. But in Xiaobai's case, this issue was directly named through the illusion of Xiaobai's father. Xiaobai refused the blood exchange and chose to be himself - that is, he truly rejected the golden finger of getting something for nothing and chose to walk this path on his own. Moreover, the dragon queen draining the dragon's blood from Xiaobai's body also clearly conveys the author's values. Xiaobai's background can be said to be extremely noble. The Dragon Court Emperor's daughter received the inheritance from her father and mother, but each of these inheritances was obtained by Xiaobai's taking risks and proving the Tao with his own life. Xiaobai's journey to transforming into a dragon is extremely dangerous. What if he is not corrected? What if there was no suppression? What if Xiaobai couldn't stick to his true heart? What if Xiaobai couldn't restrain his desire after turning into a dragon? ... Every step of the way was earned by Xiaobai through his own hard work and kindness. The gift from father and mother could not make Xiaobai become the strongest overnight, and even brought her endless pursuit, turning her into a coward who was always careful. So when I saw Xiaobai roaring and shouting "It's - you - you -!", I also roared like Xiaobai in my heart. It was really hearty. (5) The admiration for order and respect for heaven and earth revealed in the full text really resonate with me. I was also young, and I once thought about "defying heaven". But as I get older, I also begin to understand the importance of order and respect for nature and the world. We are ordinary people and part of the world. We have no personal bravery in our imagination. It is the order that protects us. It is the nature of this world that gives birth to us and raises us. I resonated with this theme without any hindrance. I understood Xiaobai's ideals and everything she fought for, so I became more involved in the subsequent plot. In my opinion, the plot of Heavenly Court after Ascension is not a continuation of the story, nor is it meaningless watering down, but rather a sublimation of the main theme. In fact, the plot of Long Mian's Little World is indeed incomplete. If it only ends with the ascension, then Xiaobai's story is still just an ordinary, enjoyable article without a main purpose, and at most it is an enjoyable article with a little abuse of the protagonist. Only by adding the subsequent plot of Heavenly Court and the Dragon Emperor and Dragon Queen can we truly convey something. (6) Rhythm. The rhythm of this book is very unique. Since I didn't catch up on updates, I read it all at once recently, so I felt this way. It's about a hundred chapters of daily life or a slow-moving preparation period, and then comes a passionate main line with an emotional explosion. In the preparation period, there are very spirited daily routines, and some classic but romantic jokes. Some of the main content involved in the middle is mainly dull and emotionally restrained. During the explosive period of the main plot, all previously restrained emotions are released. When I watched it, basically every time when the main plot reached its climax, I would feel excited, unable to control myself, and even burst into tears. I have to say that this arrangement is very to my liking. Just like this, people who follow the update will suffer, so now I have caught up with the latest and joined the ranks of suffering. (7) Modern plot (Earth plot). What particularly impressed me was the plot on Earth before ascension. It was unconventional to me, both from the perspective of perfecting the world view and achieving a satisfactory state of mind. I couldn't stop crying during the part where I repaid my parents for their kindness in raising me, and when I looked at Xiaoyun. Repaying kindness with kindness, clear grievances and grudges, compared to other online novels where the protagonist practices cultivation but does not cultivate his heart, and cultivates to the point of not recognizing his own selfishness, the realm is really different. Hey, that's all I can think of for now. This is one of the best novels I have read in a while, and it brought me back to the fairy tale pit. During this period, there were countless times when I could not help myself, I sighed with regret, and I was so upset that tears filled my eyes several times but I could not cry. The 4,000-year ups and downs of the journey I took with Xiaobai to seek immortality was definitely the most unforgettable journey for me during this time.

How to put it this way, if there were no problems with this book when it was connected to the big world, its evaluation would definitely be very high. In addition to the above problems, what makes me feel very comfortable is the author's writing language. He uses his own unique humor to bless the dragon girl. Especially in the middle and late stages, this kind of writing is more mature. On the other hand, it is slightly related to "White Snake - Origin" but replayed. In my opinion, it is a small highlight and it lives up to the name. Finally, I want to say that it is actually not a problem that this book does not have a male protagonist. The character and image of the protagonist make people feel both sad and funny. No matter what the author thinks, I get the intention of writing a good book. I give the author a thumbs up 👍👍

This is another good book series that no one reads. Now there are too many mindless and cool articles from Qidian. The author must insist on finishing the book!

From the setting up, he began to abuse the main character. He drank blood and ate flesh to take revenge, and later he was killed by humans. It's really not worth risking your life for humanity. The world's non-neutral nature and the double standards of American imperialism are on par with each other. Really cruel

There is a poem written with deep feelings, please: Mingxi gurgling, the sun rising Window screen slightly sideways The breeze is coming If I turn into a koi carp and enter the pond I swim with my tail Swaying among the lotuses The light of the orange sun melts in the river My thoughts of a gilded dragon cross the dragon gate Incarnate and fly in the sky of steaming clouds and clear rain If I feel compassion A continuous drizzle falls to soothe the dry land Call a gentle breeze to protect the fields If I Sensing rebellion Calls violent storms Dark clouds gather, mixed with angry thunder Flash strikes, thunder roars Kill all the little ones here There is no right or wrong, only position My wish Is to travel freely in the world But a roar of anger spreads throughout time and space Vent out all the injustice

I think the reason why this book is so well written is that she is writing about a spirit, the spirit of a dragon, describing his greatness. This is the best novel I have read in ten years.

Personally, I think the protagonist's IQ is related to hatred. Every time he is abused, his IQ becomes higher, and he is determined to take revenge. After being oppressed for two hundred years, the protagonist escaped with coaxing and tricking, and took advantage of the troubled times to suck out the dragon energy of others. After taking revenge, he was so bad that when he encountered the dragon-slaying organization, he only knew how to kill.

After watching so many fighting scenes, I found some issues that I wanted to vent about. Generally speaking, let's be honest. Let's talk about the more obvious problems: the writing of the fighting is a bit slow and not refreshing. It always feels like it is suppressed and cannot be exploded, which is very frustrating. I have read more than 300 chapters so far, and I have to say that Dabai is really stubborn. He is forging swords and making armor, but you can't cut the enemy with your sword. The frequency of enemies evading is very high, and neither side can do anything to the other. It's a bit annoying to drag out a chapter. Fighting back and forth, and finally transforming into the real body to fight, both sides were injured, it gave me a headache when I watched it. Fighting takes up a lot of space in the book. I don't understand why the moves and techniques used in the human form are described very vaguely. During the battle, strange moves suddenly appeared (or maybe they were forgotten), and they didn't know how powerful they were. It felt like Calvin had to improvise the moves casually. (The above is purely a personal complaint, and does not mean to be a negative work. I actually enjoyed the relaxing and ethereal feeling when reading this book. Please avoid the trolls.)

Since I read this book, I have not been able to read other books. I have been looking for a true classic book for 5 years since I started reading novels. The writing and plot of this book are both above average, but it is a true classic, and this classic is not that classic. It speeds up the passage of time, and writes the protagonist's activities and knowledge to the extreme, although ordinary people cannot see it. However, once quantitative changes lead to qualitative changes, and it lasts long enough, from ancient times to modern times, this article is a real pretentious book. And if you write an ascension article, although it is difficult to write, you can write a divine book that is comparable to those of great gods and platinums, or even better. But the author should guard against arrogance and impetuosity. The author's strongest point is not to impose or integrate personal emotions into the book, but to already see the end point from the starting point, and there is a beginning and an end. The writing of the supporting characters is even more impressive, and the small presence of the supporting characters only highlights the specialness of the protagonist's own race. If you think about it carefully, you can only sigh that it is so terrifying! When writing the villain, you try to avoid your own blind spots and use only a few strokes to outline it, triggering endless thoughts in the reader.

What a cute little guy

I like this book very much, I like this daily life, but I should take Qingling with me when I go out, and what is the hare that appears n times?          ，，，，， It wasn't until I saw the name "Bai Yujun" that I realized it was a completely different story.

The Chunyang Sect was a Taoist sect founded by Lu Dongbin on the top of Mount Huashan. It used Qi to cultivate one's body and mind, and over time, he developed a martial art that uses Qi to control swords. Lü Dongbin called himself Shanshi Taoist and had six disciples in total: The eldest disciple Xie Liuyun was the best in Chunyang in martial arts. Later, he was falsely accused of betraying Chunyang and was named Jingxunzi. The second disciple, Li Wangsheng, is kind-hearted and pertinent, and has a good understanding of the general situation. His name is Yuxunzi, and he is the current head of Chunyang. The third disciple, Shangguan Boyu, was very talented. He knew everything about music, chess, calligraphy and painting, and his nickname was Lingxuzi. The fourth disciple, Yu Rui, is beautiful and kind-hearted. He is one of the three wise men in the world and is named Qingxunzi. The fifth disciple, Qi Jin, is handsome, obsessed with swordsmanship, has a strong personality, and is named Zixuzi. The sixth disciple Zhuo Fengming has an unusual skeleton and a violent temper. He carries a huge ancient sword on his back all the year round and is named Jin Xuzi. Chun Yang-Chengnan Font size: Description: Players can obtain the sect's font name after joining Chunyang. Yuxu - Yuxu's son Li Wangsheng's disciple, Xunzhen asked. Qingxu-Qingxuzi returned to his original nature under Ruimen. Zixu-Zixu Zi Qi came in to punish evil and ward off evil spirits. Lingxu-Lingxu's son, Shangguan Boyu's family, seeks immortality with golden elixirs. Jinxu-Jinxuzi Zhuo Fengming's disciple, defeated demons and defended the Tao. Chongxu-the protector of pure Yang six meridians, the essence of Taoism. Buying Taoist - an entry-level disciple of Chunyang. Chun Yang-Adult Girl Martial Arts: One of the Chunyang Techniques Chun Yang Technique: []: Flying swords all over the sky style. [Turn Qiankun]: The spirit sword should be in Yuan style. [Broken Sky]: The lone sword breaks the Japanese style. [Broken Star]: Jade Sword Broken Star Style. [Zhenshanhe]: Xuanjian Transformation Style. [Swallow the Sun and Moon]: Ice Sword Prisoning Dragon Style. Beiming Sword Qi: [Four Symbols of Reincarnation]: The four symbols of spiritual energy, reincarnate into one. [Liangyi Transformation]: The essence of the two Yis complement each other and defeat the enemy. [Tai Chi Wuji]: The vitality of Tai Chi, the judgment of Hongmeng. [Sancai Transformation]: The three talents are angry and attached to the sword. [Liuhe Suzun]: Liuhe is domineering, controlling everything vertically and horizontally. [Seven Stars Gongrui]: The seven stars are strong and fierce. [Endless]: The mountains are high and the rivers are long, and the source is eternal. [The five directions are exhausted]: The righteousness of the five directions is unstoppable. [Nine Transformations Return to One]: Nine transformations of true energy can defeat the enemy. Tiandao Sword Power: [Three Rings Enclosing the Moon]: The sword edge appears three times, making it difficult to distinguish the true from the false. [Ten Thousand Swords Return to the Clan]: With unparalleled sharpness, Ten Thousand Swords come to court. [No Self, No Sword]: No sword in the hand, no self in the heart. [Dao Wushu]: Absolute sage abandons wisdom and returns to nature. [Bahuang Guiyuan]: Fight fiercely in all directions and return to Yuan. [Man and Sword Unite]: When people and sword unite as one, they can defeat all forces. [Sword Chong Yin and Yang]: Sword Qi invades the machine and reverses Yin and Yang. Sitting and forgetting Sutra: [Sitting and forgetting without self]: Meditating on sitting and forgetting, there is no stain or injury. [Purple air coming from the east]: Purple waves and clouds come like the sun from the east. [Tiyunzong]: Smiling proudly across the rivers and lakes, he flew away through the clouds. [Bianxu Yufeng]: Walking in the wind, misty and horizontal. Qinggong: [Xiaoyaoyou]: Absolutely cloudy, carrying the blue sky, traveling among the wormwood, walking freely in the wind, the most wonderful, the most holy, the most virtual. Books: "Pure Yang Jue", "Secret Essentials of True Essence", "Huashan Asking the Immortals", "Pure and Wonderful Theory", "Chongxu Alchemy", "Chun Yang Secret", "Phun Yang Five"

There were minor problems in the previous plot from time to time, but at least it was acceptable. But after 400 chapters, there is a plot that cannot be ignored, which is really unbearable.

I've read it since the 50th chapter was updated. Now there are more than 1,500 chapters and the updates are slow. Do you know what I got here all these years 😰

It is a meticulous work, a heart-wrenching and delicate novel.

Maybe my taste is too high, there are some logical problems, and many conflicts are unnecessary. The author has good writing talent, but his ability may not be enough to make the plot more reasonable. The beginning feels very average, really average, but judging from the word count and overall evaluation, the writing may become better and better in the later period. Let's watch it first and hope that it won't disappoint later.

The author has updated a lot. Don't stay up late at night. It's really harmful to your body.

I cast 13 monthly votes this month. (๑>؂<๑) Delicious!

I haven't read it for half a month. Alas, after reading this book, I feel like I have completely lost my appetite for reading other books. It's too pretentious. By the way, did the author write it based on his own child? It feels like he is raising a daughter.

The book is very good, but the author updated it 😭😭😭 If anyone has the author's address, I will send him some souvenirs.

Brother! More than two weeks! If you have anything to say, just tell me!

I have been reading books for 10 years, whether niche or popular, and have read most styles. This book is one of the few novels with a fairy spirit among all the books I have read. How to describe this kind of fairy spirit... Easy and leisurely That's the feeling... It's hard to describe... It's just very comfortable... Very relaxed... Times are changing, and everyone is becoming more and more nervous. This kind of slow-paced writing is rare now. I don't know what I want to say... I just say a few words. I don't know what I want to express... Maybe this is the feeling of nothingness

The human world chapter is the best, and it gives people a strong fairy spirit, which is different from other immortality novels. However, the rest of the novels are a bit homogeneous. If the human world chapter is finished, I will blow it, which will be a pity. In addition, Amway has two novels with the same transformation heroine, "Yggdrasil" and "Poor Ghost". These three novels are among all the novels with male and female protagonists that I have read. I think they are the three most beautiful. I have read each one no less than three times.

The description of troubled times is really uncomfortable. Maybe the author sees troubled times like this. I can't say it's wrong, I can only say it's outrageous, quite outrageous.

I hope Xiaobai never grows up

Portrait of Bai Yujun

Come on, author, it's been a long time since I've seen a good book.

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