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The pace of this book is very good, not laggy at all, and each chapter is more or less laying the groundwork for the plot. However, one thing I am not satisfied with is that the child Misha's heart has been a bit too sad so far. Every time I write about her, I always feel that this child is forcing a smile, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable. I hope the author can make the child really laugh as soon as possible.

It is extremely poisonous. The protagonist's identity as an undead is really useless. When in contact with people, it is very normal. Others don't feel awkward. Moreover, others know that the protagonist is countless times more powerful than him, but they dare to threaten the protagonist. For example, at the beginning, the level 5 brother magician from the Magic Guild actually dares to bargain with the protagonist after knowing the protagonist's strength. Is it normal? It is poisonous all the way, and a woman threatens the protagonist at the auction. The protagonist touches and explains again. Goodbye, he died of poisonous hair and licked the dog.

Looking at the title, I thought it was a fanfic of Overlord. .

First! This is not a Gu Aotian fan! It will be very poisonous at the beginning, so don't watch it if you have low poison resistance

I have quietly started a new book again. The author is still more suitable for writing this type of novel. I like your narrative style very much and will always support it. Come on!

The setting that the protagonist is an undead creature feels useless. I feel that the protagonist is a normal person and the plot can completely go on. Of course, it may be related to the undead identity of the protagonist in the later stage. But in the early stage, it felt like it had no special features. Even if the protagonist didn't show his purple soul, I almost forgot that he was an undead, and it felt like a normal person. I don't want to be as evil as the Bone King, but it's better to feel a little more indifferent, and then transition to normal.

Do you ever feel that the protagonist is too nice to the women around you?

I give a thumbs up to the single heroine, the stallion can't stand it, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, and by the way, what's the heroine's name and how was her role?

The writing is concise and the plot is fast. There are no routines or anything, and there are no IQ problems. It is just too white, and some transitions are a bit stiff...

The protagonist does not have the feeling of being an undead. You can write this novel if you change the species of the protagonist to any other species. It is a complete set of questions, just like having a template.