Yuanfu World

This setting feels very interesting. Ma Zheli has a saying called worldview determines methodology. Here, worldview determines superpowers. It is interesting. Even a madman may have powerful and crazy abilities. It is interesting.

As an old bookworm, with a critical eye, your protagonist's entrance setting is too sudden, that is, too crude. Judging from the background you wrote, is it a sign of amnesia? After giving her the scabbard and then not harming her, she gained initial trust in the male protagonist? When the British and French allied forces joined the army, they did not support Cixi. After Cixi was defeated, they continued to support Cixi for other reasons. Then Cixi thanked the foreign invaders in turn... I feel that this plot is a bit hardcore. Later, I felt that your character portrayal was a bit childish and did not fit the background and personality you wrote. For example, the inner monologue of the woman who was detoxing in the hotel really felt a bit inconsistent with an image of someone who has been discriminated against for a long time, or a conflict between self-improvement and desolation. The other thing is to let the older generation remember the destined forest at a glance. It feels like the theme of Douluo Continent's Star Forest: to reduce killings and give soul rings to future generations. It's a bit of a parody, although... I don't know why I don't like this part. Um... Well, the background structure is too hardcore. Why not write it through the introduction of characters or plot, but directly ask the whole teacher and believers to ask questions and answers about the structure. In fact, if you solve the above problems, you can basically move the book to another level, because most old bookworms follow the rhythm of the early stages and then follow it, but the above problems are all early stage problems. Finally, this is my first time writing a book review. I will continue to read it. I haven't finished it yet so I can update it... Read it first and let me know if you have any questions.

It is really rare to see a witty novel in which the IQ of the supporting characters is online. Xia Zhengqing is so funny. You think I am on the first floor and you are on the second floor. In fact, the protagonist is already on the fifth floor. 😁 The design of the puzzle-solving and deciphering of the four-character poem in the fifth volume is really awesome. I hope the author will continue to work hard and the quality of the subsequent plots will not be too high. Don't write boring plots like the first volume, just follow the current plot!

If you like science fiction, fantasy, cities, and military, you are right to enter Keng Yuan Fu! This book is very suitable for science fiction fans and military fans to read. In addition to traditional fantasy content, it contains a large number of modern tanks and aircraft. Military knowledge is very rigorous, various high technologies, science fiction content, and modern metropolises. It is slow in the early stage, but after the early stage, the plot unfolds with various gods. Highly recommended!

The puzzles are so exciting. The design of the Water God Crystal treasure map is really interesting. I feel like I am reading the reasoning of a detective novel. I hope the update will be faster.

After reading the first chapter, the character design collapsed. How can I read it? First, a person who has lost his memory has no concept of fighting. How can he tell people that I have no intention of fighting with you? It means that the person is dead, okay? He should be a coward. Even if he is a blood demon and has killed countless people, it should be like I don't know. Second, a person with amnesia who has been defeated will not have the concept of being strong. Source Hunters don't even know what it is. How do they know whether they are strong or not? They should be very panicked when they are enveloped by gravity. Third, I thought those three people were just odd jobs, people from the bottom of society who ran errands, but it turned out that the three you hired were top-notch experts. Damn, author, what have you been thinking about for the past four years? Isn't this what you call the system not collapsing? A top-notch expert has no experience at all. Three against one, and his combat effectiveness has not yet been detected. If he doesn't start directly, he will dump the corpse in the wilderness in seconds, and he will have to escort him for a while? Forced to write a plot? In robbery, don't you kill the person and take the things first? You wrote these three, do you think you have the IQ of robbing families and homes before graduating from elementary school? Fourth, if the protagonist is in danger, he will explode. Yes, do you want him in addition to the setting of Lin Zi? Is it another book that forcibly subverts the protagonist's intelligence when they meet him? Will he still be invincible when his opponent discovers that he is a blood demon? I've only read the first three chapters in total, and I really can't stand it anymore. Sorry to bother you!

In fact, it would be better to return it to the second dimension. It is a bit middle-grade. It is like watching anime. The writing is quite careful and the writing style is a bit immature. It is more suitable for high school students and those before.

Did you find any foreshadowing? Chapters 19, 72, and 23x. Every time Shi Lao summoned Ling Shang to enter the sea of ​​spirits, it was always in the bathroom or toilet with water running. This time, Ling Shang was washing his hands, in chapter 72, he made a bathtub, and in chapter 19, Ye Bingna had just finished taking a bath. Moreover, Mr. Shi said that Ling Shang could not take the initiative to enter the sea of ​​spirits and could only wait for his invitation, otherwise it would hurt him. Every time Mr. Shi asked Ling Shang to come in, it was to talk about important matters: 19. Explain the mission, 72. Explain the conspiracy of the Palace of Destiny, 23x. Explain that the treasure map is the God of Water Crystal, these things If you can tell Ling Shang without entering the Sea of Spirits, why invite him in? Why?

I haven't read the book, but after reading the introduction, I guess the strength of your power depends on your understanding of the world, so aren't science students invincible?

This book has a good power system and handles the mysteries of life and death fairly well, but sometimes a very clichéd internet plot will pop up, which is a bit unacceptable. In addition, I feel that the descriptions and settings of the plot sometimes have a lot of inconsistent feelings. For example, it is a country with a Western-style name, but the monarch shouts lines from costume dramas like "My Country" before being destroyed by the Blood Demon... Shouldn't we refer more to the tone and context of the king in medieval setting works before arranging the lines... Including some city settings, school settings, etc. They all have the feeling of being covered in Western style but containing ancient or urban novels (the ancient style and Chinese style are not excluded here. I personally also read some historical and urban novels). I hope the author can pay more attention to these aspects in the subsequent processing and unify the frame setting and detailed description. Otherwise, it will be very easy to get into trouble and it will be difficult to get a smoother reading experience.

The world view is great, the plot is very good, and the writing would be perfect if it could be improved a bit.

The setting is detailed but not amazing. The introduction does not reveal much about the source of talent. It only introduces the cultivation of the Palace of Destiny. There is currently no explanation of how cognition determines the source of talent, such as the protagonist's cognition that led to his extinction of the source of talent. Most of the settings are adapted, which is a bit boring for people who already know it. Excessive setting descriptions can also be easily discouraged. And many settings currently have no advancement effect on the main line. Excellent description of battle scenes. The complete power system, fixed basic source skills and mental power settings make IQ a major factor in winning. The plot is generally smooth but some parts are stiff. Some white texts are very vicious when unfolded. Focus on the characterization of supporting characters. Very good The protagonist's image is a bit confusing. At present, it is a good work but the heat is not good.

The setting is good, but the male protagonist feels like a female. . The description of what the heroine is thinking is a bit too much. Has the author read a lot of light novels or anime? I personally don't like this narrative style, but the setting is good and the writing is not bad. It's worth a read.

Is this a bug?

The only bad thing is that one fight takes several chapters. (≖͞_≖̥)

The plot is a bit delayed, come on

After watching it for a while, my head became more and more dizzy, and I wanted to skip over and over again. . . . Now after reading Chapter 21, I finally understand why. . . Too many words per paragraph! I can't see it at all! There are some unnecessary descriptions of popular science, introductions to suspended trains, and dialogues, etc. It's a lot of rows in one paragraph! ! Strongly recommend changing the layout!

Although I am still reading this book, the more I read it, the more I feel that this book is about to become a eunuch. His nn has almost become a weekly update. I am speechless. Being popular is also supported by my peers.

This is not a cool book, but a good book, a good book, a good book. Those who want to read cool articles can go out shivering with me.

I have read 100 chapters so far, and my overall evaluation is that it is still childish. The setting is very precise, but the character description is not close to the requirements of most readers today. Today's readers are very impatient, and the characters' psychology should either have no psychological changes, or very few. The process of transformation is painful, and online novels are meant to give it a "feeling of pleasure" that is not found in reality. There are still some toxic points before the 100th chapter. After reading the book review, it seems that the rest is okay. I hope the author will be more decisive in his transformation. Come on.

"Yuan Fu World" has 65,000 words on the shelves. The author has repeatedly postponed the release time, just to let everyone see a few more free chapters. It was originally available when it had 20,000 words. The author deliberately did not put it on the shelves in order to accumulate popularity, so that readers can see more free words. Such a conscientious author, please everyone to subscribe! The book is relatively slow to read, so I hope you can be a little patient. The plot of the second volume is much better. I hope you don't miss this masterpiece.

Welcome everyone to join Yuanfu World Book Club and communicate together~

It's been a long time since I've seen a high-quality novel with such a detailed setting and such a huge world view. The combat system is very interesting. During the battle, you can use clues to guess the origin of the opponent. The battle of wits and courage is very exciting. It is also filled with a lot of wits, reasoning, and foreshadowing. It is really difficult to find a work that can be slowly read these days. It's a pity that the beginning was a little off, and I guess it dissuaded a lot of people, otherwise it would have been perfect. I hope the author will continue to work hard, and the updates will be faster, and there will be more explosions. I wish the author will become more and more popular, hahaha! I like Zhou Hanyun the most (ps: I personally believe that the blood demon is Ye Bingna, not Ling Shang, and it is impossible to be Shi Lao)

Ye Bingna, a very strong and independent girl, was suspected by the Jueshun Group of being related to the Blood Demon Incident because of her gift, the Blood Demon Eyes, and was wanted. As a red-level wanted criminal, she battled wits and courage with the agents of the Jueshun Group who possess high-tech equipment. She has always been on the edge of danger. She has developed a character that makes almost no mistakes and is very cautious since she was a child.

The beginning of this book has been greatly revised. Book lovers who have been persuaded to quit may wish to pick it up and read it again to see if it is good. The main reason is that the pace of the first dozen chapters is a bit slow and slow, but the following chapters become more and more exciting. After the first dozen chapters, the plot will be much better.

After reading more than sixty chapters, let me complain. The protagonist in the author's writing is quite easy to trust others. In other words, he has a relatively strong sense of security, and this sense of security must have been formed by growing up in a relatively safe environment (since the protagonist still has a lot of common sense in life after losing his memory, I don't think amnesia will affect something deep in consciousness such as sense of security)... But paradoxically, the strong anger and revenge emotions indicate that the protagonist should not have such a strong sense of security... (Simply put, since the changes the protagonist has experienced left him with such anger and revenge, it is unlikely that he will have such a strong sense of security)

The beginning of this book has been greatly revised, and a lot of things that have been complained about have been revised. Book lovers who have been persuaded to quit before may wish to pick it up and read it again to see if it is good. The main reason is that the pace of the first dozen chapters is a bit slow and slow, but the latter becomes more and more exciting. After the first dozen chapters, the plot will be much better.

Those who want to apply to be a supporting role can leave a message here and include the name of the character. You can also attach the source talent you want, but considering the strength of the setting, the source talent may not be set according to everyone's requirements, but the name of the source skill will try to meet everyone's ideas. I will arrange everyone's roles according to the needs of the plot. Some people may have more roles, and some may have less roles or even no talent. I will just mention their names and hope you can understand. I will randomly select book friends to be my supporting cast, and will not screen them based on their fandom, so it is fair and just. (Of course, good-sounding names have higher priority, but particularly gorgeous names may not be used... I hope you can understand) Finally, thank you for your support! Sapphire will work hard to code.

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