The Reborn Dominator

After reading more than 400 chapters, I really can't stand it. As the creator of the world, his avatar sits in the heaven and the underworld. If this is not the case, it is better to say that the protagonist manages the extraordinary city by chance in reality with about ten people. If you want to be high-profile, just follow the original description and become the founder of the real world. If you want to be low-key, just guide the mountain god vines behind the scenes and wait for the mountain god vines to bloom and bear fruit evenly. Now I feel like my writing is too high and too low. Waiting for your new book. Bye!

I have been following this book for a long time, because I think he writes it well, plots characters, and portrays it well. Although I think his identity as a time and space manager is of no use. I seem to have written hundreds of golden fingers at the beginning, but they are of no use. The other thing I just hope is that the author will not pretend to be a slap in the face from beginning to end. I am not referring to the protagonist, but I am saying that the so-called Eastern power must be stronger than that of the West, and everyone is better than others. There must be at least a few examples of failure, right. To be honest, I was a little annoyed after watching Victory from beginning to end. Whenever I saw a Western extraordinary person appear, I knew he was dead and he would definitely not win. Another aspect is that although the background setting of the protagonist is, um, Chinese, the country you are away from has betrayed you, and you still help it like this, and you have also written before The sentiment has been over, and you should stop when it's time to stop. A novel is a novel, reality is reality, and everyone is patriotic, but that doesn't mean you have to write like this. If you read too much, you will get tired of aesthetics. What's more, every time the Western Extraordinary appears, I think he is LOW, because he will definitely fail, and he has never won. It feels like the plot keeps repeating itself, just this one part. I hope the author can improve

The writing is really great, invincible but also suspenseful, invincible without losing the spirit, invincible without losing the humanity, invincible without losing the pleasure, the fairy has fairy style, fantasy has whimsy, the writing is smooth, the characters are vivid, it is really very good, if there are people who don't like it, they are mostly impatient readers of Shuangbai.

It's not enough, it's not enough to watch, Lu Zhiyu has no sense of existence, the author, please write a side story for Lu Zhiyu 😭😭😭

Invincible-style novels are difficult to write, and the plots of many invincible-style novels basically collapse in the middle and late stages. However, the author Ji's previous book "Low Dimensional Game" handled it very well. The positioning of the marinated fish is very clear. From the beginning, he is the leader and the mastermind behind the scenes, and uses the narrative technique of group portraits to promote the plot. It's a pity that the author Ji, you really don't know how to do it. What the hell is the operation of the outline? O_O Looking at the starting point, you are really outstanding⊙⊙ In fact, this book solves the problem of expansion of strength and too small a map to be sustainable. This problem has been solved by the author Ji from the beginning. Opening trumpets and creating incarnations are the characteristics of the Chinese mythology system ＠_＠ A single Taiyi Tianzun opened N accounts by playing multi-threaded operations. Dr. Chen next door also followed suit and created many unique trumpets. The protagonist of this book has more than one alt account. The main account has reached the maximum level, but the map cannot keep up with the development? Things that don't exist¬_¬ The main body is hidden behind the scenes. How about opening a new thread and using a trumpet account to continue wandering🤓 Yes, my ID is also a trumpet account🤭

Behind the scenes, this book is still beautiful! ! !

I feel like this book, just the first few chapters, made me confused, but the later chapters are really exciting! It is recommended that those who want to watch it skip the early stages and go straight to the beginning when the pig's feet touch the necromancy tree! Because I only like to read books and rarely review books. So I can't write well.

Now that I write it, I feel that it is a bit empty and false. The details are too big and too difficult to explain.

I felt goosebumps when I saw Castle in the Sky 🤓 The world in the book is really unbelievable. Extraordinary! Extraordinary! When these two words really appeared, it was so heavy and crazy. But it's so addictive! ! !

Hello, author, I think some of the things or people encountered by the protagonist in your novel lack a kind of greedy humanity! For example, when I went to the meeting of time and space rulers, I didn't see the kind of human ambition in all the time and space rulers and other creatures. The same kind plundered and devoured each other, and the weak wanted to devour the strong. The law of the jungle. I remember that the protagonist is not at level seven now, right? It is illogical that those at level eight are afraid of him because of his identity. At the beginning, there were low-level demons who came to the protagonist's world to rob him, but now the protagonist is not at level seven, and other high-level mythical creatures have no intention of hunting and plundering low-level time and space rulers? This is obviously illogical, and it is still a world where the jungle prevails. There is a saying that a dead genius is not a genius. Do princes and generals like Xiang Ning have the guts? Are there no naturally evil villains like demons in countless time and space? The novels written by the author have never seen any serious opponents. They are completely farming style. This kind of writing is okay, but you will feel excited after reading the first one, interesting in the second, and you will feel aesthetic fatigue in the third and fourth. Of course, you can also insist on copying yourself like Tudou. After all, being able to copy yourself and make money is also a skill. Why have Chen Dong and the third young master of the Tang family been popular for so long? Just because the novels they write are relatively novel and can arouse readers' curiosity. Although I haven't read their novels for several years, I hope the author will make changes in future chapters or novels.

This paragraph is too bloody. Can we write it from another angle? I'm almost losing my appetite.

I finally felt a little bit better when I saw that the latter part was getting more and more dull. The first part highlighted how the opponent was so strong and why the fight was so intense. As a result, the protagonist was defeated as soon as he came. Writing it once or twice still highlighted the awesomeness of the protagonist. But too much would be boring. I just saw it and it was a bit boring.

Seeing this, I feel like it will be a group drama again in the later stage. Now the fifth level is basically invincible. To put it bluntly, there are no 1-in-1 enemies among the characters I guess I can only defeat it by going to a new map.

It's still interesting, come on

There is a loophole in the latest chapter. The author said that except for the ruler's own world, there is no way to go back to other worlds. However, when the protagonist first encountered the time-traveling monster, wasn't it killed by the protagonist in the previous time back (recall time refers to the time before the protagonist's guardian)? Or the protagonist's retracement can affect other worlds, or the time-traveling monster belongs to this time and space.

It's a very interesting novel. Is there any similar novel?

It's time for the protagonist to go to a meeting (˘•ω•˘), and there are also time and space rulers. Can the protagonist go to the past to cause trouble, and by the way bring back a few reborn people from the future?

If you come from a low-dimensional game, please raise your hand.

After these chapters, I really realized a problem. In fact, there is a difference between what the author wants to express and what the readers understand. I always believe that readers can put forward their own ideas, but they cannot teach the author how to write. This will affect the rhythm of the article. I support the author here and sincerely hope that the author's level will get better and better, and this situation will continue to decrease in the future_(:з∠)_

Rational discussion, Lin Shu did something so outrageous that so many people want her to die. She didn't fall behind when she should stand up for the country. Because of the importance of the Sanyangguan elixir, they were directly locked with their own hands when they were sent to each other. The person was half-dead after being bombed and his hand was cut off. She also tried her best to stop the monster created by the alien scroll. I was puzzled when I read the description of this chapter about seeking death. That monster has a passive skill. , If you don't fight him, he will also freeze the city. How can she say that she is seeking death if she stops it from the perspective of the country? The reason for not entering the mountain and sea realm is because the country does not have extraordinary people in the early stage and needs someone to take charge. If there are three people abroad who can take charge, the country will send her there. After that, she will also contribute to the country's exploration of the mountain and sea realm. There is no description, but it is not without danger, so why does she become nothing?

I wanted to say it very early on, what totems, incense artifacts, they look powerful, but they actually tie ordinary people into chariots. Once a war breaks out, the enemy will definitely use weapons of mass destruction to reduce your source of telekinesis, and a massacre will be inevitable.

The rest of this book is fine, except why after cultivating an immortal you have to kneel down and down, so what kind of immortality do you still have to cultivate? It would be better not to become an immortal. If you don't become an immortal, everyone will be aloof. After becoming an immortal, it seems like your kneecaps will be gone.

I said why do low-dimensional people like to read it? I just like to read it. I didn't subscribe to this book. It turned out that I was disgusted by the plot with Wang Hao at the beginning. I really deserved the poor performance of this book.

It's so disgusting to watch. The Eastern Monk is powerful, has many opportunities, and the protagonist is very contradictory.

Looking at the dozens of chapters so far, it seems that the pattern is very small. The author describes controlling a time and space, which should be the earth. However, the events all happened in the protagonist's city, so the pattern seems to be very small.

The government took the initiative to attack and didn't fight back. It's been like this several times. It's poisonous, right?

After reading more than 300 chapters, I found that the controversy about Lin Shu has never stopped. To be honest, I don't like the character Lin Shu either. It has nothing to do with the so-called haters or G. It's purely from the perspective of character setting Compared with other characters, Lin Shu doesn't have anything particularly outstanding, but from the beginning of the book to the present, she has always been almost in the first echelon, a first-line master, only a little worse than one or two of the protagonists. However, from the book, I didn't feel her efforts and advantages compared to others. It gave people the feeling that the author kept giving her preferential treatment. Especially when he was three to four, Qingyang, as the first person to enter the mountains and seas, was among the group with the strongest Taoist heart, strength and opportunity, but he failed and died. Zhang Heming was also one of the first people to cultivate. He failed to advance to the fourth level and entered Shinto. These two people were no worse than Lin Shu. They both failed in getting promoted to the fourth grade, and then Lin Shu succeeded easily. Originally, the first two were supposed to be that the author wanted to show the difficulty of cultivation and the dangers on the road, but Lin Shu succeeded in making people unaware of the reason. In fact, the author described Lin Shu a lot in the early stage. His identity should be laid out and he should be an important supporting role later. Perhaps because the readers are more disgusted, the length of the later chapters was reduced. But the reduced length does not mean that she has disappeared. From the previous descriptions and speculations, Lin Shu has been remembered by readers, and she will be easily compared when something happens. Moreover, the reduced length of the following pages means that readers cannot feel her efforts and advantages, and she appears to be very mediocre in comparison. But other important supporting characters with talent, opportunity, and perseverance all failed. Lin Shu, a very ordinary supporting character, suddenly succeeded, which will be difficult for readers who like other supporting characters to accept. Compared with other characters, Lin Shu has nothing outstanding. She did not create her own martial arts or corpse exorcism like Lu Wu and Ma Ji, but just followed the sword immortal inheritance of her predecessors. She also does not have the courage and perseverance of Qingyang and Jia Yi who were the first to break into the mountains and seas. It is even said that she is not as profound as Taoist Taoist Qingyun's paranoid Taoism in seeking a breakthrough and massacring his entire family. But she succeeded. Maybe the author didn't pay attention to some details and thought it would be enough to reduce her length and make her appear less. But instead, it gave me the feeling that she succeeded without doing anything. ps: After all, the author's book is to make money. If the character in his novel is decent but not liked by most people, it will be considered a failure at least from a commercial perspective. It is suggested that the author caters to the preferences of most readers and makes money to make a living, not shabby.

I gave up on this book halfway through. To be honest, it is not as good as the previous book. It originally came from a low-dimensional game. I thought it was the same type as low-dimensional and full of magnificent history. However, I was really disappointed. The feeling of the big boss behind the scenes of the protagonist was also disappointing. I hope the author's next book will be more exciting.

Not long after I saw Lin Shu reach the fourth level, I found that this chapter is quite controversial. Some readers also mentioned low-dimensional games. Let me first say that I don't like Lin Shu going to the fourth level like this. I have never seen a low-dimensional game. I feel that I don't like Lin Shu going to the fourth level like this. It's not a matter of hatred, but the author is too negligent on this small detail. Maybe the author also feels that as the plot progresses, It is definitely necessary to go to the fourth level, but I think the arrangement is unreasonable. Qingyang failed to go to the fourth level and died directly, and Zhang Heming failed to go to the fourth level and considered Shinto. The author showed us the difficulty of going to the fourth level. In terms of contribution, after the cultivation of immortality began, Lu Wu became more of the same. If you want readers to watch a flesh-and-blood character die, and let Lin Shu go directly to the fourth grade, this is purely to attract trouble for Lin Shu. Many readers said that although Lin Shu didn't write well, she must be working hard in places she didn't know about. The problem is that Qingyang and Zhang Heming's efforts are right under their noses! In terms of his contribution to the country, Lu Wu is not bad. Readers have no sympathy or feelings for Lin Shu. The hatred for Lin Shu is as deep as the regret for Qingyang Zhang Heming. I think it is a problem with the author's arrangement ps. Several readers said in the book that he is a woman hater and scolded me. They are gay, haha. I think they are sensitive. He wants us to be what they think we are. If he finds someone who has a different opinion from his, he wants to beat them to the dark side completely. And they all have those names. The one I remember is Mr. Block, causes war, he is the one in this chapter who has this controversy.

It's the first time in my life that I'm giving a reward. Big, come on.