Goddess Long Ji

I always feel very embarrassed when I see the French part. There are too many self-drama things. I want to highlight the weakness of the protagonist and highlight the characteristics, but the author cannot perfectly over-integrate it. Now it feels very strange. The heroine's character in Romania can be rounded off, but the male protagonist doesn't want to be a normal person at all. Timidness and bravery don't conflict, but it doesn't mean balance. That's a very strange thing. Either highlight one point, or change the character. It's hard to grasp the conflicting characters. You can completely show them with non-conflicting characters such as caution and bravery.

The Ying Concubine of my Great Qin Dynasty is the best in the competition. If my Ying Concubine of the Great Qin Dynasty does not die, you will be the concubine after all!

When the volume of Britain is unfolded, I can only say that the author has a very big imagination, and I feel that the author is quite attentive. Although I only saw the public chapter, I think this is to my taste, and I want to read it, rather than out of an attitude of making up for the votes (the author has published a few books, which is a good thing).

After just reading a few chapters, I felt that the protagonist looked like a retard, and I was shocked.

It seems that the thought of sacrificing oneself has not been taught since childhood. . It's a bit embarrassing to watch

The plot of this novel is okay. The author's ability to construct the world and handle the direction is okay. However, I feel that the protagonist is not well-shaped, and there is no mature transformation of the protagonist's mentality. I feel that the author has no intention in this aspect.

? ? ? I think the writing is okay, but what about the people?

Looking at the heroine, I thought it was a moon shape, but the further down I looked, the more something was wrong...

Naiya is actually not a silver-haired person, so I have to give him a thumbs up.

The author should work hard ✊

There is no creature more cruel than human beings

Don't think I won't recognize you if you change your vest, go back and update the evolution history of the Demon King! !

The protagonist's psychological activities and behavior feel seriously inconsistent. If you want to be kind and be a virgin, then you should do it to the end. The author should also consider logic a little when he is happy.

I accidentally opened this book and was shocked. There are 280 chapters and 1.25 Million words. On average, each chapter is close to 4.5K. Really conscientious

To seize the opportunity, I decided to build my own right here! ! !

So Yang Ming's story ends like this? Is this the end?

Is it Yang Niyi who is more awesome than the Chaos God? ? ?