Dimensional Dragon

The plot of this book is fascinating, the writing is beautiful and smooth, and the logic is clear and rigorous. The characters are vividly drawn, and the story unfolds with twists and turns. It can be seen that the author's intentions and profound skills are not enough. The first order is not 88,000, but the starting point is suppressing it.

Chapter 2 The Lance plane looks like Lance Ramen

As soon as I saw you saying that my paper figurine wife doesn't love me, I didn't want to look at you 😡

Colorful dragon? It feels like it will be ugly

Opinion floor. If you have any comments or suggestions, you can write them here and I will read them. But I will definitely ban you if you don't want to comment. After all, the author has a glass heart.

Hey... Elsa's plot has been arranged and will not be given to dad, so don't worry. Moreover, this kind of plot will never happen again! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I've only read a few chapters... I suddenly remembered... Speaking of which, humans should be the prototype of the Zerg... Like locusts using their fertility rate to crush high-ranking races →_→

I came here to read Thor, but the writing turned out to be terrible, and I was very disappointed, so I left. To be honest, no novel can be written without the word "true". Whether a book is good or not is the difference between a book that looks like it and a book that doesn't look like it at all. Do you think the characters in your novels look like them? Oh, I'm going to be verbose. Don't worry about it. It's all because I like Thor so much. But the greater your expectations, the greater your disappointment.

In fact, I think this type of book is certainly easy to write. Isn't it just that the new protagonist takes away most of the bonds of the original protagonist in a relatively invincible manner, and "saves" everyone's wives in a superior manner? I'm not saying there's anything wrong with this way of writing. After all, people often bring themselves into the role of the protagonist and then enjoy it along with them. But is this fair to the protagonist of the original film? Take RE as an example. It is precisely because 486 is weak that what he does is more eye-catching, because he dares to give his most precious thing - his life - for the people he likes. At least in RE, 486 does not regard the people around him as NPCs. He values ​​what he has, even the children of villagers, and works very hard to save them. Throughout the animation, you can see that 486 has grown from being an evader at the beginning to a good man who can shoulder responsibilities. Although he was forced by the environment, it is indeed a touch. On the contrary, the protagonist of this book, Long, "If you can't save/everyone's wife/just kill 486", he completely treats 486 as a tool, and somewhat lacks respect. But how much did the protagonist Long actually pay? He just took advantage of the plot to do a relatively small job for him. If he had to choose whether to save himself or his wife, he might not have to prioritize saving himself - "Anyway, there are other wives in other worlds. It would be a pity to lose one or two." So this kind of writing is easy to write. Anyway, if the writing fails, just change the environment and let the original characters disappear silently. However, if you want to write it well, you may still need to figure out the character characteristics and relationships of the original work. In other words, it is not only the growth of the protagonist that no one can beat in the end, but also the inner growth of the protagonist. I also read some variety comics. Every time I read about Sword Art Online, those people ran over and snatched Asuna away for no reason, and I felt really sick. But it was just cheating with the advantage of the plot and a bunch of cheats. How sincere is it? Do you dare to give everything for her? What's more, the protagonist in the book cannot give the original heroine a lifetime of happiness. The bond in the plot has been snatched away. What to do with the unknown outside the plot? Is it possible to handle it as well even if there is no standard answer? Without further ado, let's return to this book. The protagonist Long... Actually there is an inexplicable sense of superiority between the lines... Rescue should not be a kind of charity...

Can be the main character in human form

I saw your smile, and now my whole body is twitching. Can I send you a lawyer's letter and reimburse you for medical expenses?

Isn't this finishing speed too fast?

I came here to read Thor, but the writing turned out to be terrible, and I was very disappointed, so I left. To be honest, no novel can be written without the word "true". Whether a book is good or not is just the difference between a book that looks like it and a book that doesn't look like it at all. Do you think the characters in your novels are like them? Oh, I'm rambling. Don't worry, it's all because I like Thor so much. Everyone who has been in my room knows it. It's just that the greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment.

♡ ̑̑ฅ(ٛ˃̶˙ω˙˂̶ٛฅ) This cute appearance

Ahem I was very angry when I saw the introduction, so I decided to kill this book (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻

The wizards in this world are so rubbish. A big family doesn't even take racial factors into account when it comes to seizing the family. Although it seems like an improvement for apprentices to be able to cross planes and seize bodies, if you think about it carefully, isn't this just a cannon fodder tactic? It turned out to be true later. But since you individual strong men are not as good as the giant dragon, you can actually succeed in seizing the body as an apprentice even though you failed to deceive the inheritance. But this is also a naked crushing of civilization! What do you wizards do for food? Can't even defeat a group of guys who rely on their bodies to make a living? If this is your first contact, then forget it, but you have obviously looked at your whole body, inside and out. Hey Gunda, I am so disappointed in you!

What exactly is BBQ?

He actually has the nerve to open a new book! ! ! ! ! !

Have your own ideas! Just keep writing! Suddenly changed my mind! It will become impossible to write! Those people who have no end to their BB! Let him write it himself!

Author Da Da, this is the last time I use this account to read books. Since I bought an account and it was cheap, I stopped using this old account. I gave all the remaining starting coins to Da Da. Thank you for the joy your book brings me.

... Beatrice asked him to bring fruit wine? Don't you know that Beatrice and Echidna agreed not to drink?