Dachu Little Shopkeeper

What bothers me the most is introducing a girlfriend to a male co-star, as if he is awesome.

The author sometimes writes the protagonist, it's so useless

First of all, the protagonist is a time traveler and should have parents in modern society. As a time-travel book, it is really inconsistent to read. At the beginning, the father who is called ancient times should show a struggling person. There is not too much emotion in it. It is best to modernize the inner narration! Then I was slowly moved by the ancient relationship between father and son. You acted foolishly and filially from the beginning, which seemed so out of touch... Please, you are not an ancient person, you must have your own characteristics! So obedient 🥵 is so speechless

The author is trying to write a portrait of a saint. After reading five chapters, Brother Dali slipped away. . .

I don't want to read after seeing the name of the protagonist

Good book, not bad. Good books should be rewarded, and everyone should support them.

Why is it that the protagonist does everything himself? Why can't the protagonist come up with the plan and the indigenous people implement it? . . . I've read several books with the main character in it, and seeing the same plot, my expectations have diminished.

I can't stand it. Maybe I'm too young, or maybe I'm not well-educated. I've never seen such a stupid dad. He's so honest. He's the best in the family. How did he raise that honest dad! It's so sad. If I were in that family, I would never do that!

I have read less than 20 chapters. Is this book written by the same author as Driving a RV Back to Datang? It is more than a bit worse than Datang. The writing is too stiff.

Shopping malls, officialdom, and battlefields. Looking at the introduction of this book, the protagonist must be good at business warfare, official fighting, martial arts, and military tactics~ Anyone who writes novels only writes about one of them, right? If all three are present, then it's not a story, it's YY~ After all, in ancient times when the status of businessmen was extremely low, it was really difficult for businessmen to be officials and generals~ I think that when writing business novels, just write about how the protagonist makes money and becomes a wealthy businessman, that's it. As for national justice, the darkness of officialdom, and the battlefield, it has nothing to do with him~

As a time traveler, I can't bear to be like this.

I just read more than ten chapters. The plot is good. The plot in the countryside at the beginning is very good and fits the background of the time. After entering the city, the protagonist's behavior was a bit out of line. But I quickly reflected on it. But then I taught my friends to pick up girls. I felt it was a bit too much. Come on, it's a good book.

When will a new book be published? There is a book shortage right now!

I am a person with a bad temper. After reading two chapters, Brother Dali became so angry that he ran away.

It is said that miracles come from great strength. Why is Zhen Dali's son called Zhen Jian instead of Zhen Miracle? 🤫

To be honest, the most annoying thing is deleting novels with book reviews, so I deleted them from my collection.

Was the author's mathematics taught by a physical education teacher? 20 Guan*30 acres=6000?

It looks good. The main character has very useful powers. Can think of plants I wonder if I can come up with a money tree

I'm a little curious about how the character Qin Mengjing will be written.

Haha, if Zhen Dali knew the reason why the fourth child was sentenced to death, would he still spend 10,000 yuan to save him? Brother or son, which one to choose?

It's well written, with twists and turns in the plot and delicate characterization.

It can be said that 99% of online writers are basically like this. Just use it, use it side by side, use it several times, use it this way, use it that way, etc.

When I saw the supernatural power and fantasy, I immediately retreated. I can't stand this poison!

In my personal opinion, if you read too many books, you will be able to figure it out in just a few chapters. I suggest the author read his own book.

Yes, it's interesting. This is the rhythm of being the son-in-law of an enemy.

I have been fond of military affairs since I was a child, especially ancient times. Is it possible to arrange a general, preferably to lead the cavalry? My name is Ma Zhaokai. Thank you. No matter if I give the author a daily recommendation vote, at least one will be left 😁

The Prophecy of the Emperor's Arrival: Qin Meng Ending 1: Committing suicide after surviving 10 episodes, 2: Becoming the protagonist's biggest opponent in the later period