Konoha Namikaze Legend

This is basically a fantasy novel in the skin of Naruto. It is similar to Zhen Dun. There are "a touch of strange color", "a shrinking of the pupils", "little girl", "a faint sneer at the corner of the mouth", "a flash of XX in the eyes", "a slight XX look in the pupils", "a slight XX look in the pupils", "with a faint smile", "a faint smile", which makes me laugh every time I see it.

With Naruto as the protagonist, Naruto who is reasonable and vindicates Naruto or who is full of resentment and murderous intent has been badly written. He will not shine in the fandom, and many situations are not pleasing to the eye. The plot is also a bit difficult to edit. If you edit too little, it will be a copy of the original work. If you edit too much, it will be a bit fake and contradict the original work. If you want to be original, you should go in the opposite direction. You have to write something that is full of sunshine in your heart but needs to be different from the original work. Of course, I feel that this is a bit difficult, or simply don't open the prophet bug. There is a person next door who writes about Neji, and he is thrown directly into the world of One Punch. It is Neji himself, not a modern person who has read comics or animations. You can learn from this when writing about Naruto, so that you can retain the tough character and faith of the original Naruto. Well, personal opinion.

Actually, civilians in Hokage don't have surnames. Namikaze Minato is called Namikaze Minato, not Namikaze.

Let's put it this way, at this stage, if Naruto rebels against Konoha through time, not many people will like it, because for Naruto, Konoha is the safest and most harmonious place in the world, just like a country, although some places are not good, it is still pretty good.

The relationship between Naruto and most people in Konoha, to be more direct, is very cold. If you want to say that this relationship drives people crazy, it would be better to directly retaliate against society. If you are holding a grudge, it is normal to work in Konoha and not contribute any effort in the future. Revenge... Except for Danzo who can take action. Otherwise, because someone did not greet you, it is a blood feud, and it must be washed away with blood...