My Martial Arts Trumpet

I finished reading it in one go, and I can honestly say that although there are some minor problems, the story is really wonderful 🤭. The more books you read, you will find that some online writers have good writing skills, but not many can tell stories. The current highlight of this novel is that the side stories are all quite well written, and both the literary and martial arts dramas are remarkable. There are not many routines, making it enjoyable to watch. Of course there are shortcomings, such as the main plot is a bit scattered, the portrayal of female characters is a bit thin, the world view is not very clear, etc., But the flaws do not hide the good points, it is really a good book 👍. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I will book all the tickets and give you the tickets.

Well, again shamelessly I'm here to plead for help. Many times, I am still unable to write because I think of these names. Here I hope to get some advice from the big guys. The format is as follows: Kung Fu/Moves/Weapons-Introduction (including a short background and forging materials) Thank you guys for your support. I wish you all a happy reading.

From the first time I found this book by scanning the rankings until now, my grades have not improved, and I am somewhat worried. I am quite afraid that the author will cut off the book because of unsatisfactory grades. Today, I talked about this book with a friend, and I felt a little more emotional. I thought that I could summarize the problems for the author, and maybe make the book better and better. (Well, it also improves my reading experience by the way) Okay, without further ado, let's talk about some of the main issues when reading this book. 1. Classification problem In fact, after I found this book and read it, I had a black face and asked why this book was classified in the fairy tale category. At this point, I have to analyze the current situation of Xianxia channel on Qidian Novel Network. The great masters are at the top, and newcomers have no way out. In fact, let alone newcomers, some old people also encountered subscription slumps in Xianxia, ​​and some newcomers even started with zero subscriptions. Writing a book is not as good as going home and planting sweet potatoes. So... Author, why do you want to classify Xianxia? And this book is not suitable for Xianxia at all. The selling points of this book are immortal martial arts, game systems, and travel. It is most suitable to be placed in a different world of games... But you are placed in Xianxia (Wangtian). Even if you place time travel in science fiction, I won't complain about it. Also, why I specifically talk about the classification issue at the beginning is because the vast majority of readers will look at the classification after reading the title of the book at first glance. The classification is here to filter readers. When people look at Xianxia, ​​they think: Hey, it's cultivating immortals again, shut it down. However, if you have anything to do with cultivating immortals, it is just a system upgrade in a different world in the game. I really want to say that you, the author of this category, chose it after drinking fake wine... But there is no point in regretting it now. After signing the contract, I am GG and cannot change the category. I am also very helpless. 2. Plot issues I remember complaining about this. The usual slap in the face pretense at the beginning was enough. If the custom settings and game world were not so eye-catching, I might have abandoned them. In fact, of course there is no problem with showing off, but generally speaking, showing off also requires foreshadowing. As soon as the readers have a sense of immersion when they first come here, you design such a bloody plot, which will greatly reduce the senses. The same goes for the later chapters involving the Taiyue Clan branch helmsman gaining power. From beginning to end, it is full of awkwardness, the kind of bloody plot that I have watched seventeen or eighteen times. I'm not sure how the author arranges the emphasis of the main world and the small world in this book, and whether he pays more attention to the main world or the small world. If you pay more attention to the small world, you can get rid of the awkward plot in the main world and ignore the plot of wits about taking power (facts have proved that forced wits are the most deadly). If it pays more attention to the small world, then the author should try to think more about how to highlight the battle of wits, and do a good job of foreshadowing and hidden lines in the early stage, and then highlight the tension and stakes of the situation, and then the protagonist will win the game at lightning speed, highlighting the protagonist's IQ. In fact, I recommend that you write less about the battle of wits (if you can't write it well, avoid the important points or lighten it a little), and write more about how the protagonist defeats monsters, levels up, solves crimes, explores the main world, obtains treasures, etc. (You can write whatever you think is good, and you are good at it). Don't forget that you are Amber style. You have predicted so many things in advance. If you don't seize the opportunity and grab the treasure earlier, it is a waste of settings.

Please tell me where the author is going. This book is really good, but it's a pity.

I met the author in the Taiwu picture scroll section of NGA. He was obsessed with Taiwu and couldn't extricate himself. . . .

My head hurts from looking at it, the practice system

What a pity for a good book

After reading it for two days, I felt that it was very difficult for the author to control such a huge and complex world view. I hope the author can take a good look at it and avoid making any mistakes. After all, the book is still okay, it's a pity that it collapsed after writing!

Wu Kui Demon. . . Why do I think of five leaders, six six six. A crab has eight claws, and the two ends are so big 🤭

The first part is very good, but the second volume is inexplicable and I don't know what it's talking about. I can't stand it anymore. Sorry, sorry, see you in the world 🙂

This book can definitely be recommended.

The author shouldn't write so many stories about who was bullied and then describe all kinds of emotions. At the end, the protagonist suddenly appeared. It made me want to vomit. I could tell with my eyes closed that the next step would be a slap in the face, pretending to be a low-level and uninteresting cunt.

One person is short of wisdom, but everyone is wise. In fact, when writing, the names of those characters are often the most difficult and fatal to write, and one name will be entangled for a long time. I am here to collect the names of supporting roles from the big guys, and the big guys can help me a lot. There is no limit to the format, but it must include at least four parts: character, gender, personality, and skills. Thanks and happy reading everyone.

Is the protagonist handsome and evil, or is he vicious and destructive? Why do people always say that others seem to lose their sanity when they see him? Could it be that he has the appearance of an ancient god?

In a world where martial arts is respected, improve your cultivation, and once activated, wipe out the whole family, collect evidence, and engage in intrigues.

How to say it. Obviously his cultivation level is not high. And wandering around. Obviously knowing that Su Mansion wanted to resell it overseas. Can't you invite a senior from your master's sect who is from the four realms and five realms of the Life Wheel to come over and hold the line? I feel that I will only encounter enemies in the second level of Fate Wheel at most. Higher realms will not attack you. In addition, you can rely on yourself to be invincible in the same realm and invincible in another realm. So you go wandering alone? It is clearly written as a disciple of a large sect. Just a question. Disciples of the sect are they confident enough to solve everything on their own? The writing seems to be like a lone wolf without a backer. The master has many enemies. So I can't find a master? Neither can my senior brothers or sisters. Do you have to carry it all by yourself? Author, you need to know. Since you are writing about a big world. You can't continue to write him as a game! Each mini-map is rigidly fixed? The characters are all restricted inside and cannot come out? The writing is too unique! How many years ago was this written?

This training system is too complicated! It's poisonous!