Apostle of Ashes

Wow, the writing is great. Although it is a bit immature at the beginning, the world view in the later stage is really exciting! The various characters are also pretty good, so I won't say much more, so here are two chapters worth voting for✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

The character of the protagonist, haha, I hate it when I see it, a loser

In the face of great criticisms and suggestions from readers, I will carefully accept and make changes.

There should be no alien planes, just one plane with multiple continents. Be innovative and creative, not routine and imitative. Downplay the strength training system. Downplay individual combat capabilities. Multi-racial civilizations compete for hegemony. The protagonist can not only use technology, artillery battleships, and steam engines, but also use fantasy racial biological magic to tame Warcraft mounts to form cavalry, tame flying dragons and rocs to form an air force for bombing, and fly biological aircraft carriers to power steam engines. You can conquer girls and their tribes, families, and races, shrink and annex and conquer, form powerful vertical and horizontal alliances to attack far and near, and form a multi-racial sea, land and air alliance camp. Don't develop technologies like airplanes, steel battleships, and tanks. Airships are of limited use. Of course, the air force in the fantasy world must be dragons and birds. Just focus on artillery and steam engines, otherwise it would become a military historical novel. The sea race, battleship artillery, flying race aircraft carrier, and sail battleship are not suitable for aircraft carriers. Steam engines or magical arcane power need to be developed. The technology is limited to artillery and steam engines, and the rest cannot be used. Floating islands, even floating continents, civilization in the sky. There are four major civilization systems: land (human race, giant race, insect race, dinosaur race, ferocious beasts, giant beasts, auspicious beasts, and some flying races), underground, sky, and ocean (offshore amphibious, island amphibious, and pure sea race). Each civilization system has army and air force races. Every civilization has several intelligent races that fight against each other. First it was within one civilization, then two civilizations, and finally all four major civilizations were involved. There are three main points. The first is that there should be no gods, demons, legends and extraordinary things. The combat power level system is downplayed and a real fantasy world is presented. The second is that the emotional plot must be impactful, especially the love plot, which must be titillating rather than nauseating. Third, the rhythm should not be too fast or too slow. There should be no hints of pretentiousness or foreshadowing that a big game of chess is waiting, or that apocalyptic disaster will come. This is very childish and disgusting. There are also ferocious beasts, huge beasts, strange beasts and auspicious beasts. You can draw inspiration from the Classic of Mountains and Seas as well as various Chinese myths, stories, strange stories and novels. To construct a Chinese-style fantasy world, the world view must be deep and impactful. Break away from the traditional binary moral and ethical framework. Race, civilization, beliefs, and interests transcend the flat binary values ​​of morality, right and evil, and enter an objective and macroscopic three-dimensional worldview. I also don't like those dark novels that pretend to be cruel, bloody, violent and terrifying. I really hope for a grand and sophisticated fantasy novel. Naval battles, air battles. Aircraft carriers of flying races, air and space battleships, air fortresses, air and space carriers carrying flying races.

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