Pirate's Fire Dragon Claw

The idea at the beginning of this book is very good, and the plot is even better until Gaya Island. I just don't understand why the protagonist with a crazy setting wants to kneel down and lick Luffy and Ace? No changes to the plot? Excuse, how many characters have been killed in the original book, why do you still care about changing the plot? Is this still the protagonist who kills decisively? Setting conflict

Xiaobai's writing style, the writing method of running accounts

If a good person doesn't do anything, he will become a dog.

A decisive protagonist who meets Luffy and Ace can no longer talk or do anything. In Gaya, he even spoiled the story for the sake of the plot. These poisonous points are unacceptable.

The author is a novice, smooth writing, conflicting settings, and severe forgetfulness.

I watched a short section before and thought it would make me fatter. Now that I've gained weight, I can't stand it anymore

. . The content is quite good, I only watched the first few pictures. . Third person acceptance cannot be sorry

If you can persist in writing it to the end, it's a good start.

The author is too naive and the logic of the plot makes no sense at all.

It's written like a narration, with no feeling at all!

Your money is really unacceptable. The Vietnamese dong is not as rich as yours. In the original work, a meal at the sea restaurant only costs around 100,000 yuan.

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong, all of whom are great swordsmen and compete with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

Originally, I thought that the second personality of the psychopath was too kind and a bit OOC, but when I thought about it, the protagonist was only kind to the characters in the plot. Maybe it was some kind of perfectionism. Some mental illnesses will stubbornly maintain certain things or mechanically fixed activities. OK, I will help you round it up (there are no loopholes at all, but still full of loopholes, hahaha)

When I go there, there are a lot of serious people. Their second personality is enough. They also ate artificial devil fruits. Are you trying to persuade them to quit?

It is really difficult for a normal person as the author to create an abnormal protagonist. . There is always a very deliberate feeling.