Naruto: Shura Liuyun

Come on author, persistence is victory, everyone get active 🌹

I still think the red bean looks better. Well, that's right, meow. Why. Hongdou later gave up on himself and ruined his outlook on life.

Author, I would like to give you a small suggestion, can you please stop using Kaiten at every turn? You said it makes sense to use Kaiten to block a big move thrown at the opponent temporarily, but you said that you should use Kaiten even with three shurikens? In the early stage, I repeatedly said that I didn't have enough chakra, but as soon as I took on the mission, everything changed. After all, the protagonist still has a white eye. Wouldn't it be great to just throw the shuriken and destroy the opponent's shuriken? Do you need to change the situation?

It seems that there is no mention in the original novel that Hinata wants to rebel.

Author, you have left me a message before, and now I want to leave you a message as well. Only after perseverance will you know what the result will be. It would be a pity to give up halfway. Do something worthy of yourself while you are young. I hope the author will not give up. Who in the world is not struggling. Come on!

With support, the writing is very comfortable to read.

Countless books are all about Flying Thunder Gods, which made me sick to my stomach😵

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Emm, I found that many people's timelines are very different. The Nine-Tails Rebellion is Naruto's birthday, which is October 10th, and July 20th is Sasuke's birthday. Hinata's birthday is on December 20th, and she is a Capricorn. I think it's okay to change their birthdays, but if your zodiac sign changes, your personality should also change, because different zodiac signs have different personalities. Just like the introverted Capricorn and the passionate Aries.

The protagonist learns the art of flying thunder? It would be better to give the protagonist an interesting trick, or create his own power. The Flying Thunder Technique is suitable for the protagonist. The Flying Thunder God is related to many elements of the Sealing Technique, the Seal Barrier Technique, and it also has something to do with whether the mind is good or not. The protagonist is forced to learn it, but the protagonist is not given a trick. The body is from the Hyuga clan, and the protagonist has an average mind.

They use Yin Chakra, which can only be used in close combat. Ninjutsu cannot be used at all. There is something wrong with the author's setting!

Since Hinata is the Crown Princess, I believe many people like her. Then I will set the protagonist to be a girl control, no one will object. 😜