Staying in the Ninja World

First of all, Mito Monobu's strength is equal to that of Hokage. The characters of the three generations of Book of Fighting. The book is set in three generations. The Book of Array has three generations of characters. Even Obito, who is an enemy, has this evaluation of the third generation. Regardless of setting books or comics, excluding fan fiction and secondary settings, the setting of the third generation shown by Kishimoto is kind, gentle and righteous from beginning to end. I wrote it according to this setting and filled in the holes according to this setting. So I welcome those who can accept it. If you can't accept it, please leave directly and don't insult the author, okay?

Anyone who saw the showdown was poisoned and died. Report o(*≧▽≦)ツ

Is it to persuade me to go to bed early? After reading a few chapters, I got poisoned and died as soon as I became interested.

It is recommended not to read this book. It is extremely poisonous ** Even Shen Nong could not bear it. When I see this kind of subject for the first time, there are definitely more people who don't like it than people who like it. Generally, those who like it are kind of **. 🙂🙂Brothers who don't consider reality, please follow some logic, okay? Writing a novel is not something you can do whatever you want. That's not called writing novels, that's called pornography. If you write novels to make money, I beg you to be more serious. Don't do all these bells and whistles and it will hurt your head. Writing novels is to bring people happiness, not to make people who read them want to die like you. What kind of shit are you writing? If you feel that your writing is simple and you just want to write a short story, I strongly suggest you not to post it and poison everyone. What good will it do to you?

Progress is too slow. . . Two hundred thousand words is written until the protagonist starts school. . Emmm, almost every chapter describes psychological activities. In addition, the protagonist has no sense of existence. This book should be renamed The Third Hokage Who Knows the Plot.

Welcome back! ! ! ! ! !

The front part was eye-catching and a bit stunning, but it was quickly buried in the water. I tried my best to swim to the back in the sea, but when I took a look, what the hell was original at the back...

Let me express my opinion. I only read five chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. I want to ask the author a question, do you like Uchiha? I can tell from your words that you don't seem to like Uchiha very much. So why does your protagonist start as an Uchiha? Is it because of the Sharingan? I don't know what you think, but if I were asked to choose a Devil Fruit, I would choose the Rubber Fruit or the Burnt Fruit, not because the fruit is powerful, but because I like Luffy and Sabo, so I want to be like them... But for you, the Sharingan is just a useful prop, and I don't like this. I don't know about you, but I read fandoms because I want to find the emotions I felt back then. However, after reading a few chapters, I didn't see what I wanted. Well, I said some nonsense, I hope it can help you. Flashed, flashed...

The writing is too long-winded. After reading about 30 chapters, the reason why the Uchiha did not make a coup and so on were spent a lot of time explaining in each chapter. It gave me a headache.

In fact, the writing is quite good, the author has a good imagination, and there is no sense of disobedience to the direction of the plot after the third generation knows the complete plot (in fact, the first half is a novel about how the third generation of Hokage saves himself after knowing the plot of Naruto) However, there are too many explanations irrelevant to the plot, I hope it can be reduced The second half is very exciting The protagonist is really a bit weak

The novel itself feels quite passable, and the presence of the weak pig's feet in the early stage is not very strong [I just don't know if the kaleidoscope is time-based, if it can be controlled directly or indirectly, it will explode] Every character has a sense of plot presence [Obito is really miserable, after watching it for so long, he has no sense of existence except after being bombed, and there are no storyboards to show his shock, doubts, suspicions, or changes in preparations or something? The only more controversial part is the one where he directly opened his heart to the Third Hokage, although he was forced to do so and the author eliminated the conspiracy theories of the Third Hokage. [Speaking of such plot operations in the real world and the comic book world, I have to mention Marvel. Professor . The Third Hokage was shocked. His mistake caused the Anbu to come in. He must have been too calm. My personal opinion is for reference only]

But I feel that if the plot is fully explained now, omniscience and omnipotence will be of no use. It will feel like a new novel in the skin of a fan. Although the characters have not changed much, isn't the biggest cheat in fan fiction just knowing the plot? Moreover, the protagonist of this book does not have a real golden finger. . .

I just read the author's book and haven't finished it. I've read a few chapters and it doesn't mean anything else. It's not directed at the author. Have some people read too many conspiracy theories? He, Hiruzen Sarutobi, ordered Shimura Danzo to kill Shisui and give Danzo his eyes? Why did he kill Shisui if he didn't get any profit? Force against Uchiha? What good would it do to the village or himself? Some comments are quite reasonable. The third generation of Sarutobi is a collective political power and his power is not as concentrated as the second generation. The information he got is incomplete. At least he should not know about Orochimaru and Shisui. Every Hokage in Naruto has a great affection for this village. The third generation may have some shadows of politicians, and he may not be able to make decisions. But his responsibility for the position of Hokage and his love for Konoha are definitely very high. Don't be like Liu Bei two years before he appeared. There are conspiracy theories everywhere. Have you been oppressed by the image of kindness for so long that everything you see with black eyes is black?

To be honest, this book is the most consistent with the setting of the original work I have seen in so many years, especially the Uchiha rebellion at the beginning, which I feel is amazing. If I have to say a flaw, it is the description of Obito. In the original book, Obito is indeed dark enough, and many things are incomprehensible, but Obito is one of the few characters in Naruto who has the greatest impact on the audience emotionally. But the problem is not that big. Anyway, from the beginning, I personally feel that you have the potential to become a god in the Naruto fandom, so your results are a bit strange later. Personally speaking, except for not being cool, everything else can be said to be the best among the best (I don't know if I haven't read the plot), so you are not popular, which feels very strange. Have you offended the boss at the starting point?

Some people say it's poisonous, but I personally don't feel that way. Instead, the author's explanations of the settings make me feel that the logic is self-consistent and reasonable. If there is no explanation, it will be explained in a dry stroke or handled improperly. Although the explanation of the settings is a bit long-winded, I also know that the author has put a lot of effort into filling in the logic, and I also know what style of story the author wants to write. I I think it's very good. I think it's one of the few Naruto fanfics that explain the context and the characters are not transformed. I highly recommend it. Read the book slowly to understand how much this can be done. It's weird to read this book quickly without thinking or skipping to read it. If you don't read it with your brain, you have to look at what kind of book it is. It's not nonsense. If you set it to not read, the explanation will be skipped, the context logic will be broken, and it will be weird if you don't die.

Posted a post about the character design of the next three generations. Same thing. The conspiracy theory of White Fang's death is that the top management of Konoha pushed the third generation behind the scenes. The reason is that White Fang's contribution was too great and he did not belong to the Hokage line. He was afraid that White Fang would become Hokage. Assuming that White Fang survived until the third generation abdicated, he wanted to compete for the number one Hokage. Someone from the top management had to recommend him to the daimyo and get the daimyo's consent. So the question is, since Konoha's top brass is so dark, will the living advisor of the third generation Danzo recommend him to the daimyo? Did you get stuck on the first step? So assuming that a daimyo or noble has admired White Fang of Konoha for a long time and offered to let White Fang take over, then White Fang would first have to directly compete with Orochimaru Minato. Since the top management is so dark, they can easily do something in the Jonin trust vote or village election. Do you think White Fang has a chance? Just taking a step back. Whether White Fang can compete fairly against Watergate is still unknown, right? (I am a fourth-generation die-hard fan. What is a strong idol group? The question of a strong version or not, being handsome is a matter of life! Tactical fallback) The next one is the famous disappearance of the Senju clan. According to the conspiracy theory, it was caused by the third generation and others, so here comes the problem. It is known that Tsunade had learned to gamble before the death of the first generation. After the death of the second generation, she must be more sensible. When analyzing Tsunade's character, she refused to give in when faced with advisors' attacks. When faced with Pain's attacks, she not only retorted but even scolded him for deceiving others. She even refused to give in when faced with Madara. It would be ridiculous for a person with this kind of character to say that the Senju clan is Konoha's and that Tsunade will come back to be Hokage. Since Tsunade's rope tree does not have a surname and combined with the concept of the first generation, there is actually a better explanation. It's just invisible. When it comes to the Uzumaki clan, the three ninja wars often involved fighting with each other. The second generation, known as the fastest ninja in the world, lost their names on the battlefield. Although Konoha won the battle, it was very difficult every time. Whether it was too late to support the country of Uzumaki or deliberately not to support, from the perspective of Tsunade Mito, Kushina is still the same to Konoha. What can it mean? After all, advocating conspiracy theories can only rely on the brain to make up for the darkness. I can still be somewhat convincing based on the character of the character. I don't want to say more about the genocide of the Uchiha. The author posted what Obito said when he brainwashed Sasuke. It would be really smart to put the blame on the third generation. Then the most important thing is the real black spot of the third generation, like Kumogakure lowering his head. Sending Hinata to die was a real black spot. To put it nicely, it was because the Sannin ran away and a lot of ninjas were killed in the Nine-Tails Rebellion. The Yondaime and Naru's jinchūriki died. Facing Kumogakure, they had to make political compromises, just like what happened in the 1990s. Well, but I still have to say that the third generation was indeed too weak and cowardly. The worst thing was that the third generation of Naruto was actually hostile to Naruto. He is a nice person. He is very busy with Hokage affairs, which is recognized as busy, but the third generation still visits Naruto often. To be honest, the third generation provides Naruto with living expenses, but the reason why Naruto often eats junk food is because the villagers target him and do not sell anything to Naruto. I guess the third generation wants to completely conceal the identities of Naruto's fourth generation son and the Kyuubi Jinchuuriki. Yes, I just don't know why it went astray. The purpose of concealing the identity of the fourth son of the fourth generation is really to protect Naruto. The identity of Kakashi White Fang's son is actually also concealed. The copy ninja Kakashi is also quite famous in the ninja world. For example, Zabuza and the right and left hand of the fourth generation of Lei in Kumogakure Village have all heard of Kakashi's name. Granny Chiyo probably dreams of killing Shiro. After hearing Naruto call Kakashi's name, Kiba still didn't know that Kakashi was the son of the White Fang. It can be seen that the news was still blocked. In fact, there are so many smart people in Hokage. The second generation Shisui Itachi, the three ninjas including Orochimaru all felt that the third generation was a trustworthy person. The late third generation was indeed weak and cowardly, but didn't you think it was too much to belittle him as a fellow scapegoat?

This is my first time writing a review. I personally like the showdown to change the plot. I hope Naruto doesn't have so many regrets and regrets. The author also knows the setting of Naruto very well and has filled in many bugs. Dare to step out of the plot. The protagonist's strength is normal and he can move around in seconds without time travel. The timeline events and characters are correct. The three views are correct and do not follow the dark flow. The characters are flesh and blood and are not black for the sake of being black. The author of the last book seems to have said that he is not good at portraying women. The female characters in the Naruto male channel look just as awkward as the male characters in the female channel. Therefore, the single protagonist of the previous book suits my taste. Please update as slowly as possible. After all, love generates electricity, and the author should not be a eunuch. This book belongs to my fairy grass.

The author's description of the Uchiha coup is quite good. I have seen too many fandoms that shout and kill at every turn. It seems that no one in the world is trustworthy except myself. There is always a sense of hostility, as if everyone is here to harm me. To put it bluntly, I am too chuuni. I feel that the author of this book has done a good job. As a Uchiha who has no wealth and travels to that period, a showdown with the third generation is the only solution. The third generation is a kind-hearted elder in the setting. He has always wanted to reconcile with the Uchiha. The final genocide was also a last resort. For those who troll the author, I just want to say that the world is not that dark, and not everyone is here to harm you. Looking forward to seeing this book on the shelves!

Comparing Naruto to a painting, Kishimoto's paintings of animals and dogs were not good and they looked like pigs. Then a lot of people saw the dog and said it was a pig. Even if Kishimoto said it was a dog, those people just wanted to say pig. The phenomenon has been reflected in my mind, just like Pan Jinlian and Wu Dalang, so those who watch Naruto and like Naruto should stop blacking out Konoha and so on. There are just too many bugs. After all, there are so many pages of comics and episodes, and it is impossible to complete them all, so don't be stupid if you have some brains PS: People who are seriously brainless can even be black in the fourth generation.

There is almost no plot, it is all narration and explanation. The content is complete nonsense, long paragraphs of nonsense, just like a water essay. I turned the page all the way to 22%, and there are still long paragraphs of explanation and nonsense. Is there any need for this kind of novel to exist? Novel is not a paper, and you can't make money just by counting the number of words.

To be honest, most of the comments about the Three Generations of Darkness are idiots who only read the fanfic and not the original work. None of the things these idiots say are valid. For example, the Uchiha clan was destroyed. The Uchiha clan wanted a coup and rebellion. Is it still wrong for Konoha to destroy the Uchiha clan? There is also the Senju clan. Who can tell me where in the original book it was said that the Senju clan was exterminated. The princess of the Senju clan, Tsunade, not only lived well, but also became the fifth generation. According to the logic you are talking about, please tell me, if the Senju clan is under the control of Konoha, then as the pillar of the Senju clan, Tsunade not only did not die, but also became the Hokage, and Tsunade has no resentment towards Konoha at all. Next is White Fang, please tell me why the third generation wanted to kill White Fang, White Fang's ANBU leader, what is ANBU? The ANBU is a direct force of the Hokage, and only obeys the orders of the Hokage. It can be said that the ANBU is a close confidant of the Hokage. And now you are telling me that White Fang, who was the right-hand man among the three generations of close men, was harmed by the third generation? The funniest thing is that during the Payne incident, Kakashi and White Fang exchanged their own lives and stories in the underworld. In the end, the two understood each other. Is this what you call a conspiracy theory? As for the Kyuubi Incident, I posted a post from the perspective of the third generation in the review of this book. You can check it out. There are those who are talking about the Sannin leaving the village. Orochimaru was originally the most optimistic and had high hopes for the Third Generation, but Orochimaru himself wanted to conduct human experiments and used people from his own village. Is this also the Third Generation's fault? Tsunade went out to relax because her mental problems were too serious. Is it right to be forced to stay in Konoha? Not to mention Jiraiya, who only went out to chase Orochimaru and travel casually. He even said that among the three ninjas, Jiraiya was the most loyal to Konoha. When Jiraiya discovered that Tsunade was in contact with Orochimaru, he warned Tsunade not to do anything bad to Konoha, otherwise he would kill her with his own hands! And I don't need to say more about Jiraiya's feelings for Tsunade.

The comments are really hard to persuade. I really can't accept this showdown routine.

I'm convinced, I've been reading novels for 12 years, and this is the stupidest novel I've ever read.

To be fair, the spoilers for the third generation in the beginning are indeed a bit poisonous in terms of the plot. It can be said that the spoilers took away a lot of the fun of the novel. I was a little uncomfortable when I first started reading it, but there are no big problems with the logic and plot development of this article. I have read the author's last work, Naruto: Legend of Naruto, and I am very impressed. The quantitative system is well constructed, the plot development is relatively logical, and the characters are not mentally retarded. My impression of the author is that the setting is clear and logical, but the emotions and plot (that is, the enjoyment) are slightly weak. It is very suitable for my kind of setting party. After all, the setting party has higher requirements for logic than satisfaction. Some trolls simply find fault with the opening spoilers because they are unhappy with them. My point of view is that of course you can troll if you are unhappy, but you must find the right direction when trolling. The author's setting is obviously very reasonable, but you force the author to change it and insult the author simply because you are unhappy. Who do you think you are? In short, since the author dares to spoil the story, he must have a plan for the development of the plot. The feature of this article should also be to change the plot. Based on the impression of the previous work, I am also looking forward to the follow-up, but if it fails, I should abandon it.

I didn't even read the main text, but I was almost poisoned by the author's view of the Naruto world in Chapter 3. I want to say that for all fan fiction, whether it is cool, passionate, or dark, you must be clear that what you are writing is a fan world, not comics or animation. The remarks in Chapter 3 are completely contrary to the world. In this world where people either kill or are killed every day, strength is the only truth. The author said that the Uchiha clan is weak, are you kidding me? The Uchiha and Senju clan of those days defeated most of the families in Konoha now, so these families hate the Uchiha clan. It was a good thing that no one helped the fourth generation when they died. So you think the Uchiha clan can be proud? ! ! There must be some people saying that he was strong in the past, and you think Fugaku is a lie! ! ! It also said (the aged Third Hokage is not as decisive as he was when he was young. Known as the Ninja Professor, he has long lost the decisiveness of his youth. His hesitation and weakness prevented him from fully controlling the movements of the elders and allowed Danzo to sneak attack the last one. The Uchiha Shisui who could save the situation of the Uchiha rebellion also made the situation become more and more uncontrollable, and finally had to reach the point of no choice) You said that the third generation could control it when he was young, and the third generation's strength is the weakest among the Hokages. A doctor of ninjutsu, to put it bluntly, he just knows a lot of ninjutsu. If you don't have the skills to become famous, I'll give you a nicer \(^o^)/. He doesn't know the top ninjutsu, such as Jiraino's senjutsu. His research is not as good as Uncle Snake, and even his physical skills are not as good as that of Netshou. Tell me, apart from being good at politics, what else is he good at? To train students? ? ? Don't you look at where everyone went after the death of the fourth generation? How come I don't see him training Naruto. So with the third generation's strength, do you believe that he didn't make any small moves with Danzo? Anyway, I don't believe it. The Uchiha clan, Obito and Ben, are just two angry young men with a bit of arrogance. But it's hard to understand why Senju Tobirama was the first to take the blame. First of all, Senju Tobirama is a strong man (no refutation accepted). It's normal to be a little worried and defensive about an Uchiha clan that has lost its strongest combat power. (Let the Uchiha clan be separated from the residence of other ninjas to prevent the bomb from exploding and affecting innocent people around one day.) There seems to be nothing wrong with this sentence, but what can the Uchiha clan do if the Uchiha clan doesn't want to go? ? Kill the Uchiha clan? We had just successfully established Konoha with the Uchiha clan, and now we were going to kill the hero? It's heartbreaking, brother. . Besides, misinterpreting Senju Tobirama's meaning is the fault of the Third Generation and Danzo, okay? Even if Senju Tobirama is at fault, it's just that he didn't write a suicide note. If a high-risk profession like a ninja doesn't write a suicide note, I lose. As a Hokage, I don't even have the money to buy paper. 😁😁😁Senju Tobirama is indeed the final pot king of Naruto. Author, you are right.

Testing Poison: The whole process is the author's obscene point of view, which cannot be matched with the flesh-and-blood characters. It is also different from the conventional views of the public, especially Naruto fans. It seems that the author still has the feeling that everyone is drunk and I am alone.

I fell in love with the Third Hokage's ability to confess his own chakra to Danzo and other senior officials. I still remember the first Uchiha who confessed to the senior officials that he was a different god. It's a grave sign! If you announce your specialness without the ability to protect yourself, you may end up lying on the bed in the root laboratory the next day! This kind of behavior is like a child carrying gold through the busy city, or is the setting in this book that everyone is a saint? Then there's nothing wrong with it. .

A novel in which someone is poisoned at the beginning, and even shows off... Search the memory, you are really awesome, you can persuade 99% of people to quit just like you at the beginning

Awesome, the protagonist actually took the initiative to find the third generation to expose the identity and plot of the time traveler. I admire you, do you really think that the third generation is a saint? A person who knows all the secrets exists?

I have been in the novel world for more than ten years. I think that Shen Nong tasted all kinds of herbs and developed a body that is invulnerable to all poisons. I didn't expect that I would fall into trouble with you. When it comes to poison, I would like to call you the strongest.