The Devil Evolution System

I felt that the plot was so confusing, it moved too fast, and I couldn't keep up with my ideas. After just a few chapters, I ran a lot of places chasing clues. I had no idea what I was doing. I was just rushing for the sake of rushing.

Before I started reading, I clicked on the details interface and found that 2.36 Million words had been written. I recommend 425, how about 10,000? Author, don't be discouraged. Although I am a trainee and I don't have a monthly pass, I can prostitute you for free. I support you with actions.

Let's just talk about the first few chapters, there is no clue, no foreshadowing, no plot, not rigorous at all, the writing is 💩💩💩

Don't have a sense of immersion? How to die and how to be reborn? If you don't write anything, do you want us to make up our own minds?

It's up to you to guide the country and inspire words!

The beginning was inexplicable. How did he die? Who and whom?

Overall it's pretty good, not as bad as they said, keep up the good work

There seems to be a gap in what I wrote before. It looks a bit confusing. I'm still looking at the back part, so I'm not sure, but the front part feels a little bit (*^ワ^*)

After reading it, I feel that the author's writing is quite good, and the cover is also good!

If not, light a fire and use heat energy.