Map of Kings

The heroine is too silly and sweet, her training is so smooth that she doesn't even think about going out.

Let's not talk about anything else! Doesn't cultivating immortals respect the strong? Can you still respect your direct descendants? The heroine still feels pity for the outer disciples and so on! Very drunk too! It feels like the heroine is an idiot and it all depends on luck, haha! Abandon the article

In fact, it is a very orthodox fairy tale, and the heroine has a very good personality. Unfortunately, the author is a bastard in naming and writing, which makes people think it is a fanfic about a king. It has so few clicks that I can't bear to look at it.

It will probably come back this month, it should be the end of the month, and I have to finish this hole even if I die, for the sake of the readers who have spent money to read this book, and for my dream of being a fairy ❤️❤️

The golden finger is too big, and there is no feeling of pressure. If the heroine had not traveled through time, this behavior would be understandable, but since she has traveled through time, this behavior is too inconsistent.

I really don't agree with the heroine's idea. You want to keep a villain alive and still talk plausibly. You would have dealt with that person long ago when you had the time to talk nonsense. Don't you know that villains are the most hateful? Especially the one who has had a grudge against you, stabs you at some point, and wastes a talisman just to teach a villain a lesson. I don't even know what to say. Is she worthy?

Only then did I realize that the contents of Chapter 99 and Chapter 100 were reversed. This was because I had reversed the time settings before, and then the editor only changed the chapter names for me, but not the content. Let's read chapter 100 first, and then chapter 99.

Come and add some oil. 😄

I'm not an acquaintance, but I just like fairy tales and see seedlings, so I often search for this kind of seedlings. I usually vote for recommendations after seeing them that I like. Come on＾0＾~

The heroine is **, classless, stupid as a pig, and yet she is so complacent. Apart from good looks, luck, and talent, she has no other advantages. I don't know how she became a heroine.

The book is really good, but I have a little doubt. At first, the heroine worked as a beggar for a while to smooth out the edges. Later, I felt that she had a big backstage and then she became drifting. She has no strength but dares to do anything. She feels a bit like committing suicide, and it feels more and more drifting.

Sure enough, there was an accident when it was put on the shelves😭😭😭

Borrowing 100,000 spirit stones from an outside disciple was simply naive, and he couldn't take it back, and it exposed his wealth. Moreover, he didn't earn the spirit stones himself, but was given by his senior brother. He didn't use them for his own cultivation, but gave them to others. There was no conscience. The heroine is so gorgeous

Hey, does this have a male protagonist? ⊙ω⊙

Stay away for a while, I love you. Wait until I come back and continue to generate electricity for love

I really want to get to know the author, hahahaha, a king's fan girl

I'm here to collect and encourage you. I don't know how to evaluate the plot, because I have very little involvement in the story of cultivating immortals. Then I have three suggestions: First, remember to check the post to avoid typos. I often make this mistake. Second, each chapter should be summarized and given a chapter name, which seems to make unread book friends interested in reading. The third is to remember to divide it into paragraphs. I see many paragraphs in large texts that are very long in length, which makes readers a little tired. 😡😡😡I am also a newbie, so I can only give you my own opinions and suggestions. Please let me know if there is anything inappropriate. Let's work hard together. My book has more than 40,000 words and has not been signed yet, but it is only over 10,000 words. There are great opportunities! People say that the contract was signed for 30,000 words.

Personally, I think the first few chapters should be written better and at least explain the cheats to attract readers to continue reading.

Author, please come back soon 😢

The new book is very interesting, but too thin. I like the author. I have been reading Kuaiwen for several years, and I haven't read the fairy tales for a long time because I can't stand it. However, this author's writing has an inexplicable appeal that I can continue to read, so I came to read the first book here www

Let me organize the language. After listening to the book for two days, emmm is worthy of shining with love. When chatting, I have a lot of water. Brother Come on for the new book! ! When chatting, go straight to the point, hello, have you eaten? Come on, I won't leave. Do you want it? I don't want it. And so on,,. . . . Just, save em! !

The author has read too many martial arts novels~~~ It only costs 50 taels to buy clothes, food, etc.

Gone? ? ? Just gone? ? ?

After reading it, it's okay, actually. . . . Authornb