Goldenia Wind

I was just attracted by the cover of My King

This is my first book for a newcomer, and I feel it has a lot of shortcomings. But when I look at it myself, I always feel, well, I can make do with it. So if anyone reads this book and finds any shortcomings, please feel free to make comments and help me improve. For the first book, it doesn't matter if I don't get good grades. It'll be good if I can make some progress by the end.

Cover What a great way to change your hair!

This book is really well written, with a grand structure and European style descriptions and dialogues. The most important thing is that the "Song of the Wind" in it is actually the same as my ID. What a fate~

I just finished the book when I had been updating it for two hundred days. I suddenly stopped and didn't know what to do. After thinking about it, although not many book friends know about this book, and not many book friends have read it, I still should write a sentence and say thank you. This is the author's first novel. To be honest, I really didn't expect to be able to sign the contract at the beginning. I still know a little bit about my shortcomings. But now that I have signed the contract, I remember the agony of waiting for "ten thousand years" when I was chasing books, so I bite the bullet and insist on updating it twice a day. When I started writing for the first time, the author had his own shortcomings. He could only spend a few hours every day thinking about the plot and updates. The shortcomings in the article were somewhat magnified, either because of the writing style, because he didn't want to describe the environment and characters too much, or because of the flaws in the plot setting. It's self-evident what the results will be. Although I know that it has all kinds of shortcomings and the results are very poor, when I think about this being the first book, it is very meaningful; when I think about myself as a reader, I often complained and chased the eunuch, but I still persisted in finishing the book. But to be honest, there will definitely be feelings of loss in my heart. But what's the use of such emotions? It will only make you blame others. Instead of doing this, it is better to hone yourself and make yourself better. Perhaps such a day will never come, after all, some things require talent, but by working hard with such a goal, there should be some progress. Thanks to all the book friends who have read it before, who are reading it now, and who may discover this book in the future.

Also, the cover is very handsome, the world depends on the face, 555, Me too

The new author is also a fan of books written by other big writers, so I know how helpless, uncomfortable, and unhappy the fans are when the author stops writing, or even becomes eunuch. Therefore, the author never stops updating his own books. So far, no matter whether the results are good or bad, he has not stopped updating for 63 days. If there are book friends who think it's still worth reading, you can feel free to pursue it.

Come on, raise it first, I like to rely on IQ, hate it at every turn: System, system, where are you? If you were a person, would you understand the request of an ant? In the eyes of God, those with many people are ants.

I thought the cover was my wife Saber, but when I looked closer I saw she was a man, and I was almost made gay by the author 😐😐😐

In fact, you can add some description to the dialogue. A long quotation mark makes it unclear who is speaking.

Sometimes, the dialogue is so painful that I feel like I'm reading a martial arts novel from the past.

It looks good. It would be better if it can be written with a sense of history. I don't know how to use the words in it. I don't like Chinese and Western style the most. I have to wait for 1 million words to kill. Otherwise, it will be too painful to read it in one or two days and wait for updates. Save it.

This style, this dialogue, and this world without powers is amazing.

The author basically replied to everyone

I just finished reading it, and I hope the author will make this book a hit.

Why is there so few people reading this book? . Let me see

The name of the protagonist is unusual. It starts with Salian, the founder of the Salian Dynasty of the Holy Roman Empire and the second Principality of Prussia. . .

If you see the old sword coming in, let it be fattened up before you look again

Many novels misunderstand how cold weapon infantry groups fight against heavy cavalry in war. When the heavy cavalry charges, they need crossbows to clear the way, which is used to prevent counterattacks from the opposite side and cover the acceleration of the cavalry. As long as he sends elite dead soldiers to charge when his speed has not increased to a high level to disrupt the acceleration rhythm of the heavy cavalry, and the ordinary infantry behind him can keep up. But organizing a group of dead soldiers to charge requires a high level of military organization. An army with this level of organization would not bother to form a large number of cumbersome super-pike army groups. Without such organization, there would be no good array training and the courage to fight against heavy cavalry. At the same time, the super long gun has basically no battlefield flexibility. It cannot rush up and retreat is very difficult. To improve its performance such as rapid formation changes, it requires a lot of money and time. So even the West, which has few soldiers, will not use this kind of thing since the classical era, let alone China. Even heavy cavalry is few. For example, the Xixia Iron Harrier is of course very effective, but the loss is too great. So super long guns and heavy cavalry, which are extreme and not cost-effective, can easily become useless.