Hogwarts Changes

To be honest, I just don't like Hermione. She is the heroine in most of the fanfics. She has an annoying character. The protagonist is an adult. It is very annoying to take care of her like a child. I hope to write more about the magic of magic, the flow of magic in the body, the feeling of emitting magic, and the appearance of magic and the effects it produces, such as the deformation of the air caused by the magic being emitted. , Or the terrifying coercion caused to others' spirits. Through some side descriptions, it will be more real and vivid, and readers will have more fun. After all, I think that most readers who like Harry Potter do not like who the heroine is. It doesn't matter who the heroine is, as long as the IQ is enough, but to experience the wonder of magic in this world similar to ours. You see, you can learn how to fire. There is no detailed description of the magic of the Hand of Fire. We just use it as it is, and we have to make up our own minds. I think this is a bit perfunctory. I hope that the battle plot can be slightly intertwined with the dull learning career at Hogwarts. It doesn't have to be overwhelming, the battle must be exciting. In fact, what you wrote is really great. I just gave a little bit of advice according to my own ideas. I really like the opening. The setting of the orphan, I'm tired of seeing all kinds of families at the beginning, all kinds of plug-ins since I was a child, the starting point is too high, I didn't post a comparison, it's just all pretentious, it's better to improve your strength step by step. Even if you can't beat others in the early stage, but you can see your step by step growth. This is what attracts readers. It's good not to lick the savior, and those with plot are also annoying. In short, your writing is very good, come on 💪, support you

I think the magic in the Harry Potter world should be called emotional magic. Because, every magic you cast often requires corresponding emotions in your heart. Avada Kedavra requires the consciousness and hatred in your heart to kill others. Patronus Charm, remember the best things in your heart. Therefore, why are dark wizards and black magic always frowned upon? A person always thinks about negative things. Over time, people will inevitably become extreme and dark. The white wizard has positive energy in his heart and is naturally cheerful and sunny. Of course this is not absolute, but it is definitely the most important reason.

The outline was so big that the author couldn't bear it.

Write more, too little. There are not enough words, so some people just don't read it. I used to not read novels with less than 500,000 words. If they were too few, I would finish them in two or three times. If you want to collect more, you should write more, and you can also advertise. Although some people don't like advertising, you will definitely get results if you advertise. I read several novels in the past only after seeing the advertisements. If it is well written, someone will definitely read it. The setting is very good, keep up the good work!

2 Recommendation votes support it. I just watched part of it. I'm still very young, but the plot is good. Come on, author. I just hope there won't be eunuchs.

It ended so suddenly...2333

Is this book a bad book? I feel that with such a small amount of content, I can't write about The Rise of the Witcher at all. There is a big gap between the introduction and this.

In fact, the HP world also has remote communication tools. Let's take a look at the double-sided mirror. Although this thing is relatively rare and not popular. But it's a bit much to say that the crystal ball was invented across the ages. If it were a fully functional crystal ball, it would seem more worthy of the title.

Update, update, can't you update it?

Very well written! Being invincible is interesting!

I hope I won't lose it once I raise it.

Great book, two of my favorite elements of Harry Potter and wizards, all in it!

To be honest, in HP, I feel that the difference between Dumbledore and Voldemort's battle with other people is that others shoot magic spells at each other. They use transformation spell AOE. I think the only things in the whole book that can be worthy of the title of Dark Lord are the Horcruxes and the trap that killed Dumbledore (I don't know if he set it, other Horcruxes Harry Potter has mastered and worn around his neck are useless). The rest of the Unforgivable Curse, and creating a bunch of Inferi that are afraid of fire, I feel that all Death Eaters are good at it.