Steam Storm

If you don't update, there will be no collection. I hope the author understands that updating every day will make many people give up their collection and gain weight. Come on.

And author, even if you want to invent a generator, you'd better not change the world by involving power! Otherwise it wouldn't be steampunk!

The plot is too thin, with only one main line, which is not a clear main line, and the plot is not outstanding. The creativity is good. Please refer to the great writers of CS books.

The description of the atmosphere is not good enough, and the steampunk flavor of the overall world is not revealed, but I still like to watch it. Come on, the author!

Frankly speaking, the steam theme is a niche theme, but book lovers and fans of such niche themes are all die-hard fans. Steampunk feeling! The ups and downs of the steam era! The spectacular and extensive steel factory, the primitive train that burns charcoal, the steam-powered repeating crossbow, the surface ship that uses a combination of steam engine and battery, the huge tank with many rivets and steam, the hot air balloon and airship that block the sky...

I actually found out you wrote a new book! ! !

Copies and typewriters are just for accumulating starting capital, which is not exciting. Although many details including the creation of siblings are very good, whether it is the plot or the world view, it did not start to make progress until the appearance of the fat man. I thought there was going to be a confrontation. The fat man left again and then started daily life. It is easy to lose track of this rhythm. At least set some stage goals or suspense to make people have certain expectations, otherwise it will be quite confusing all the time.

How many updates a day, I hope the protagonist doesn't want to be a virgin! ! !

In the third chapter, you brought everything with you but forgot to bring the solar panel. In the fifth chapter, you wrote that you brought the solar panel with you. You should proofread it after you finish writing~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~! ! ! ! ! 😅

😅😅😅Isn't this plot a bit boring? There is no conflict at all.

Didn't it say at the beginning that there are no solar cells? Why is it there again?

Watching this book grow along the way, keep working hard, I will definitely write better and better!

Look at the author, you have a little jj by your side.

Farmer, this plot of yours is starting to show signs of being an awkward literary youth again...

This transit plot is too slow. It's not compact where it should be.

Has the recommendation vote been revised? Can't vote?

Today, on a whim, I took a look at the updates of the authors of the books in my collection... And I discovered that the author of "The Gate of Green Bank", which has been lying on my bookshelf for five years, has opened a new book! Oh my god, how many five years are there in life🥺

It is recommended that Chapter 3 be revised. The debris carried in the suitcase is seriously inconsistent with the description later.

Didn't we say there would be no solar panels? If you can add something in the later stage, can you add an akm to the protagonist? Just treat it as a business trip abroad for safety. Anyway, guns are banned in China, so it is reasonable to want to get a gun to play with when you go abroad.

I hope there will be some new weapons on the scene, such as pneumatic sleeve arrows