It's Time to Return to Heaven During the Qingming Festival

Getting better

He looks like the descendant of an old friend, Shino Saburo, who has a filthy reputation and is inhumane.

Judging from the writing style, it looks like an old friend. I hope I won't suffer from the literary youth disease again this time, and I won't compete with readers this time. I won't be dissatisfied with too many subscriptions.

You know you have a bad reputation, so you change your vest?

Read the comment section and say you love writing about cuckolds? I'll just say that I am an old pastor who writes cuckold articles.

Damn it, are you a human being? Then don't subscribe

First: The so-called gangsters are not just gangsters. In the late Ming Dynasty, the productive forces could not support many out-of-work gangsters who could fight. It means that there are dozens of core members of modern underworld gangs, and most of them are peripheral personnel. The big bandits of the Republic of China could have a well-trained core of hundreds of people (who could compete with the regular army). They were all famous and registered, and it was impossible for the bandit leader to be an ordinary soldier. Whether it is a gangster or a bandit, its organizational form will not be like an army with laws and regulations. Several bosses control their own troops, and the big boss controls the most people. The gangs attracted by the big boss's reputation are also led by their own bosses. It is impossible for a gang to have only one core like in the article. The training level cannot be so high. They will form a queue at the sound of a whistle and the marching queue will not be scattered. This is at least the training level of the modern army. The author greatly strengthens the so-called power of fighting. Second: The protagonist lacks initiative and does not develop core armed forces at all. All military actions are based on the author's tricks (for example, letting soldiers stand guard can make Liu feel elite, and he is just an old thief. A water who was originally an ordinary person dares to actively block Liu Zeqing, who is armed with his servants without training or war. If he has the courage, he will be selected as the grain chief?), The protagonist is more like a native than a time traveler. The protagonist's team does not rely on strict organization and a combination of kindness and power to establish the protagonist's leader status, but the vague relationship between the township and the party. But now the protagonist is acting more like a strategist than a leader. The protagonist has not clearly defined his status as the leader of his gang from the beginning to the end. He does not take the initiative to develop his own direct troops and only takes orders from him. To put it bluntly, why doesn't the Township Party choose Jia to be the leader? They are all Township Party members anyway, and Jia is still brave and powerful. Directly leading the army will gain prestige over time, and the protagonist's position in the team is more about contacting the Ming court and other teams to obtain resources. He has the same role as a special correspondent, and can still lead in the early stage. In the later stage, if the author does not resort to castrating the ambitions of the supporting characters, the protagonist will definitely be marginalized.

Who is changing the vest? The writing style of the introduction is a bit familiar, but it won't be the same casual and sloppy writing style.

Just look at the update time and you will know that it is filthy and inhumane. The French book was updated at 6 o'clock and this book at 7 o'clock.

I've read Chapter 14 so far. The writing is good, but it's very confusing. First, there is no main line, and the positioning of the protagonist is not clear. There is no introduction to the protagonist's modern abilities, and the reader has no sense of identity. After staying in Weizi in Hongze Lake for so long, I didn't realize that modern people have not changed or protected themselves at all. It gave me the feeling that they were just here to be outsiders. He Tengjiao was not allowed to be the county magistrate, just to get a boss? You have to unite at every turn, don't fight with each other, join a group to deal with it, etc. I feel like your political literacy is 0? You don't have a main line yourself, and you still want others to follow you? Do you think you can't live without being a little brother? Second, there is no idea of ​​active development. In the troubled times of the late Ming Dynasty, there were grains from the canal and money and grains found from large households, but the number of people could not change? I really admire it. I can only say that maybe the author's setting is that the protagonist will not be in any danger.

Are you an old author? Otherwise, this bit of data could be held up by the editor on a small speaker.

Looking at the cover and name, they look like they were written by someone else 🙂

The author continues to be himself, and we readers should also be ourselves. The road is overturned, and each side goes his own way.

At first glance, the title and cover look so filthy and inhuman

"Slaves": Eunuchs in the Ming Dynasty called themselves "slaves". "Emperor": The Ming Dynasty rarely called the emperor this way, but it was commonly used in the Qing Dynasty. "Ai Qing": Before the Qing Dynasty, emperors rarely called officials this way. "Memorial": This only appeared in the Qing Dynasty. Although it is the same document as the memorial, the difference is huge. "Futai, Fantai, Niantai": These are the names of the Qing Dynasty. Those with "Tai" are all the names of the Qing Dynasty and were not used in the Ming Dynasty. "Master": In the Ming Dynasty, only top nobles and first- and second-rank officials were allowed. State and county officials were not called "Master". "Sir": In the Ming Dynasty, it was only used for first- and second-grade high-ranking officials, nobles, and elders of the father's generation. Prefecture and county officials below the third or fourth rank are not called adults. "Prince": Only in the Qing Dynasty did the person who addressed the prince as "Prince". "My King": This was also a self-proclaimed name only in the Qing Dynasty. "Bank Notes": Only available in the mid-Qing Dynasty. At the end of the Ming Dynasty, only money orders circulated among local acquaintances. "Greetings": Etiquette among officials and bannermen in the Qing Dynasty. This etiquette did not exist in the Ming Dynasty. "Eunuch": In the Ming Dynasty, only senior eunuchs had official positions, and ordinary eunuchs were called eunuchs. Only in the Qing Dynasty did all eunuchs be collectively called eunuchs. "Our family": Eunuchs in the Ming Dynasty called themselves "I" to their subordinates, not our family. "Military Gate": A title used in the Qing Dynasty to address generals such as admirals. In the Ming Dynasty, civil officials such as governors and governors were called governors. "Kneeling Ceremony": Ming Dynasty officials had to kneel when communicating to the emperor. But lower-level officials do not have to kneel to their superiors. {"NickName":"Supervision and Restriction","UserId":406440657}

Dream of Red Mansions is not a completely Qing Dynasty setting. At least Baoyu is not a braided person

Inhumans are still reading and writing about France right now.

Just looking at the cover, I have an ominous premonition, like someone who likes to feed readers the finale. Although the writing is okay, he always likes to disgust the brothers. It's hard to describe in one sentence.

Why do you feel like the author wrote about Xiao Pingtai and Hong Ka Zhang, who are so filthy and inhuman?

I read two chapters and don't know who the protagonist is.

This guy's book can be read in the early stage, but in the middle and later stages, he is suffering from literary youth disease.

There is so much nonsense, this is a novel, not documentary literature.

I love writing about cuckolds, is it true?

I have already written about the Ming Dynasty, the Li Dynasty, the Warring States Period, and the end of the Tokugawa Period. I thought it would be the turn of the Later Li Dynasty.

Looking at the cover and the name, my first impression was that it was a new book. But when I came in and saw that the author's name was different, I didn't know if it was a trumpet account😶

Can the author tell me whether the protagonist can lead a team to conquer the world by himself, or should he be a dog for others?

Just read Chapter 1. I thought the writing was a bit interesting at first, but when I got to the middle of the first chapter, I doubted the AI ​​assistance until I thought "it's not right." The truth is revealed. The writing style of only one chapter, and the style of writing before and after does not match, must be AI.

Are you really a fan of Red Mansion? Wouldn't the protagonist be working for someone else?

Why do you only update one chapter a day?

If you are still a feudal warlord, what's the point of time travel! !