The Undercover Agent of the Embroidered Uniform Guard

The writing is very good, but why do you like licking women so much? You saved so many second ladies, but they were ungrateful and insisted on slapping you twice. You were still angry, and then threatened your family to send her home with some bullshit fatwa. From this you can see how unreasonable and unreasonable she is, and you still have something to do. Wouldn't a normal person save you trouble by killing her? In the end, he actually agreed, and then went to Liu's house and was eaten to death by others. To live and die for the sake of comparison, to fight for the whole life?

The first 10 or so chapters were okay. The pig's trotters and soy sauce still had online IQs. The more they wrote, the more rubbish they became. The pig's trotters' IQ was not as good as that of pigs. I really couldn't stand it anymore...

The male protagonist did a lot of stupid things at the beginning, such as delivering relics and escorting Miss Liu Er home. These plots made many people abandon the book, and I also wanted to criticize it, but how many opportunities did it give the male protagonist as an introduction? Thinking about it, this is actually the plot that martial arts novels should have. This kind of plot can be found in many novels from the Jin Yong period. For example, if Xu Zhu didn't meddle in other people's affairs and disrupt the chess game, or save Tong Lao, then he might die as a young monk. Guo Jing dislikes the little beggar so he can't be the son-in-law of Peach Blossom Island, etc. Nowadays, successful martial arts novels are the kind of character plots about how the bad guys are trained. I can only say that times have changed.

After reading more than 200 chapters, I decided to abandon the book. I don't know if the author has a writing outline when writing. I feel that the main line is vague and I don't know what to express. Also, for example, when talking about the Demon Sect before, at first it was said that it was founded by the Eagle King, and later it was said that it has been passed down for hundreds of years like the Yinyue Sect, but you can't remember anything you wrote? Then there is the nonsense, trying to make up the word count, and the dialogue between the characters who are not important in getting married can be written in at least five or six chapters. To be honest, the key lies in the poor conception of the plot, which is very unsmooth, making it look more and more boring.

Big brother, there are twelve books. The ones I have finished have a lot of words. If you can persevere, you are a hero. You are a role model for our generation.

I've written 13 books and I'm still at level 1… Brother, it's really important to persevere! !

An old author who has written thirteen books and is definitely the starting point. The author has not become a god? It's understandable, but why is he only at the first level... He can't be like this if he works part-time, right?

Looks good but not hot. The male protagonist has a somewhat silly personality and is rather honest and straightforward, but he is very alert in major matters and can judge the situation clearly. Comments say that the male protagonist is stupid, but there are many opportunities for stupid people to be stupid, and he has the shadow of the martial arts male protagonist of the last century. For example, Guo Jing is said to be a great hero who served the country and the people, a great hero of his generation, and a representative of martial arts. However, if such a person were to be the male protagonist in modern novels, not only would he not be popular in the comments, he would also be criticized as a dog. The results are not good but it is a good martial arts novel, but times have changed

I saw in Chapter 26 that the protagonist chooses to be a dog licker and has a disgusting temper. He doesn't know how to kill people and silence them? Return the Jianghu fatwa!

The logic is flawed, Jin Yiwei wants to use him to intervene in the world, and the Black and White want to control the court through him. This design is great, but the premise is that Jin Yiwei knows that he is the disciple of the black and white bosses, and the black and white bosses don't know that Jin Yiwei knows this. In the end, he said in front of many people in the world that Xiaoyaozi is his second master? Then didn't the news spread? Even if Jin Yiwei didn't know that he was Xiaoyaozi's disciple before, he must know it now... Also, in the part about rescuing Miss Liu's family, she was saved by the protagonist and threatened the protagonist to either follow her back to the Liu family or issue a fatwa, so she wasn't afraid that the protagonist would backhand her with a sword? The IQ of this supporting character is worrying. And the protagonist really left with her? Is this considered immature or not decisive in killing? ... In the beginning when the protagonist confessed to the boss of Jinyiwei, I thought it was fairy grass.