Oath of Destiny

It's really the best Western fantasy I've seen in recent times, but the second-level official at the beginning was too dramatic. 233 Supports the author. I just hope that Merlin doesn't play reincarnation and ends up like a smelly old ghost. Merlin is cynical (looking down on all living things).

Why has the author's new book been taken off the shelves?

First of all, the writing of this book is very sophisticated and powerful. It has a full sense of picture when you read it carefully. It has a tight layout and detailed conception. The arrangement of the first twenty-five chapters does a good job of breaking up the world view into the plot. But I'm sorry that I can only stick to Chapter 25. Let's talk about the shortcomings. As a novel, this book is successful, because I looked through the table of contents. This book generally talks about the events experienced by the two protagonists to show the whole world, and it is very close to the label of fantasy history. However, the starting point is an Internet website. It is really a pity for this book to be an Internet article. First of all, the introduction of the characters at the beginning is sparse. There is no problem in starting the first chapter with a strange and major case, but too much ink was spent on this minister. If I hadn't looked at the protagonists Siegfried and Merlin before clicking in, I almost thought that this minister was the protagonist. This involves the second problem, the sense of rhythm. The sparse introduction of the characters at the beginning disrupted the rhythm of the protagonist solving the case later. It can be said that I didn't feel much satisfaction when I read the twenty-fifth chapter. The third question is character. The character creation of the villain Maisar is very successful, but what about the others? ? ? The character development of Merlin and Siegfried was completely overshadowed by Maisar, but Maisar's image was still very successful. The fourth problem is that there is no sense of expectation. At the beginning, Merlin is at full level and can cast forbidden spells. There is no expectation of upgrading. Due to the failure of the protagonist creation at the beginning, we don't know what Merlin Siegfried's purpose is or what we will do after solving the case, so we completely lose the sense of expectation. To summarize, I think this book should be considered a relatively niche type of reading. The storyline is still very exciting, with dark and bright lines intertwined, and the plot advancement is very natural. However, you can't make money writing this kind of book. Internet articles ultimately rely on emotions to make money. The above are some of my personal opinions. If the author or others feel wrong, please correct me.

When I first started watching it, the two protagonists felt a bit like Siegfried Gilfias and Reinhard Mugel from Legend of the Galactic Heroes~~ One is hard-working and sincere, and the other is smart and offending.

When I think that everything will be gone in five years, the prospect of this finale... Is all despair. All the methods known to everyone, including Ouroboros, are to end the whole world. The underworld is just a supporting facility in the main world, so there is no need to count on Merlin, the so-called ultimate weapon, and he cannot defeat the blood elves. This kind of thing can reach the so-called world level after only sacrificing 100,000 people, let alone take a picture of the ending and engrave it on the tombstone. The author used the three pillar gods as the boss, which is too super model. It would be better to just use a simpler dependent as the boss. The ending can make people think better. Using the outer god is super model.

The author should be a woman, right? You can feel it from the description. It is so delicate that male characters can fit into the template. The story gradually unfolds and is still very fascinating!

It's so awesome... Both the writing and the plot are so exciting to me... Merlin is so awesome... It's like dancing on my xp...😭Merlin, please take me away, Merlin! ! ! !

I really like this style of novel. It's so rare to see a novel that suits my taste. I hope the author will continue to work hard and present the story of that world.

Why is such a good book so little popular? !

Congratulations to the author for completing the book, send flowers and like it! 👍👍 Looking forward to a more exciting next story. ✊🎁

Ah, the author's book is still very good, but I feel like many people can't stand it.

There is no report of the heroine coming! ! !

In the Western Fantasy version, there are two peerless heroes, Xiao Yuer and Merlin, Siegfried is as perfect as a flower.

Can anyone tell me what this book is about? I've read dozens of chapters and I can't figure it out.

Happy crawling, I have successfully found two popular books in the past two days.

Hey, the author started writing this book when he was 18?

I feel that this is a really good novel. Both the conception and writing style and the plot setting are very immersive. It is one of the few masterpieces in Western fantasy novels. Unfortunately, the results are not very good. I hope the author will work hard.

The writing is great and the sense of immersion is good. . . It's just that not many people read it... Maybe novels written in the Western fantasy style are still not very understandable? Like me. . I still don't understand where the main character comes from. . What are you here for? . . .

If there is no heroine, please come here and wait and see for support.

What is Merlin's position among the wood elves? If the Mage Tower really kills him, will the wood elves take revenge?

The day changes to the week, the week changes to the month, the month changes to the year... I can't imagine this going on.

It's hard to imagine that this book was written by the author when he was eighteen years old. It's really wonderful.

The book is a good book, but the language is too wordy.

Is the author a bit boring? I love it.

I only regret that I discovered this book too late!

? ? ? How could I be raised to death after half a year? It's a bit too much ( Anyway, congratulations on the completion Following a full subscription

Why does this book have so many words, but the monthly subscription is zero?