One Piece: The Marines' Overlord Fist

Zefa does not have overlord domineering, and in the entire navy, only Garp has overlord domineering.

This is not Roger. Roger's smile when he died. Author, you don't understand it at all.

It would be better not to write the paragraph similar to the preface, because the first impression feels like a fairy tale, so it would be better to remove it

The protagonist's name is Jiang Feng! ! After saving Roger, he could bring people back to life as soon as he had the ability! ! Damn it, there's really a reason why I didn't get good grades in books.

The author of this book is a pseudo-pirate fan, and he has not studied the original work well. Judging from the writing, I feel like I used to write fantasy novels, and reading the whole book gives me the feeling of rushing into a fantasy novel.

The downfall is the use of the sword. Shouldn't a person whose physical fitness is better than Garp's and who also has space ability be like Whitebeard and break the space with one punch? In the end, he was playing with the swordsmanship of two knives.

Let's talk about some connections between this book and the original work first. To put it bluntly, it doesn't have the flavor of the original work. I don't know much about One Piece. I'm basically at the level of a passerby. I probably think that the white bandit is the only one in the world. The most ridiculous part of the book is that Akainu is a person with weak physical skills. In fact, Akainu's physical skills surpassed Oden's, and he was able to hit his head with a counterattack. He got up quickly after being hit by the Rip Island attack, and his recovery surpassed Garp. During the war, he was more seriously injured than Garp, but he took off the bandage earlier. Speed, Akainu also quickly pursued Jinbei after being blocked. This speed was also extremely fast. Being attacked by Foil and Marco, he successfully dodged, similar to Katakuri's precognition. Basically Akainu is an all-around player. If you know more about it, you will know that the prototype of Akainu is Oda's favorite idol, and Oda will only like this character. The strength cannot be weakened. The second reason is that the author lacks self-awareness. All other labels are good, but hot-blooded and calm are completely inappropriate. The reason is as follows. When the protagonist meets Akainu, he talks and acts like a junior high school boy. I won't go into details, but I've criticized him enough. There is no calmness at all, only dullness. Not much to say, I'm tired, this book is too pulpy, I suggest you finish it quickly and write a new one.

I vomited after reading a few chapters. What is this writing about? Why don't you change your name after being reborn? You still use the one from your previous life. It's a rubbish book.

His space ability has been turned into rubbish. Devil fruits are only developed after the brain becomes bigger. As an earthling, you still have no brain power. 🐔

Those who say Garp has a domineering look, I beg you to stop showing off and look at the life card, please? The entire navy has the look of overlord during the Warring States Period