Heavenly Dominance Plan

The overall setting feels pretty good, and so can the characters... But it's just a bit tiring to watch. I have to write down all the trivial things clearly. It's a bit of a running story, and I feel tired watching it. Some things are actually self-explanatory. You don't have to use such an exaggerated way to show how awesome the heroine is. This will make her feel childish. Sometimes the intangible is better than the tangible. The emotions of the characters are too exaggerated. They always express their admiration, gratitude, and awe for the heroine. They are all like drama queens, with a lot of inner drama, and they are all caused by the heroine unintentionally doing something that people misunderstood. It is a combination of circumstances, and there is no sense of accomplishment brought by the heroine's own character, personality, IQ, etc. I feel that the emotional intelligence of the heroine in the early stage was too low (I didn't see it in the later stage, so I won't comment). It was written as a cold person who always unconsciously repays unnecessary things, which is inexplicable.

The protagonist has a problem with his thinking, and he likes this rule of law for a while. After a while, he wanted to kill those law enforcers who governed the country according to law. The protagonist likes the rules of this dynasty's French dynasty. Sometimes I want to break this rule. Contradicting each other, you can break the rules as long as you are good to the protagonist.

After reading the whole book, it is still very good. However, when Da Luo established his own business in the later period, the pitfalls were not filled in very well, and the explanation of the fight against the devil was not very clear. I felt that the writing was a bit hasty, and the story of the heroine's life experience was also a bit messy. The writing is generally very good, the fighting scenes are well drawn, the protagonist has a distinct personality, and the supporting characters are also very delicately portrayed, especially the characters such as Lu Lian and Tang Cheng. The writing of Novice Village in the early stage is more delicate. Although the process is slow, it does not make people feel dragged out. The background of the heroine is difficult to figure out and can't stop. There is also progress in innovation, and the martial arts in it The system is very well written, and the realm is not static. The limitation is the ancient Nascent Soul Transformation into God, and the angle of the heroine's body is not very big, which is relatively new. Different from other immortality books, the heroine's way is very clever, the way of creation, the way of the world, and the Daluo Empire's human way. In general, it is definitely not a loss to start reading the immortality text.

I don't object to male protagonists or not, but I am very disgusted by members of the cult without male protagonists who think they are correct even though they are obviously wrong. Now, if I write a story about cultivating immortality, does it have to be without a male protagonist? I just want to ask if in order to cater to that group of people, I wrote a book without a male protagonist or a so-called pseudo-male protagonist. If the subscription results are improved, it will make more money than if it has a male protagonist? 🙂

... The plot is good, but a lot of nonsense. It was annoying to watch in the early stages.

The pace is too slow, and it only took more than ten days to read more than 100 chapters... There are too many explanations, and it is easy to get distracted while reading, and the explanation content feels unnecessary. It feels superfluous to talk about details, but not enough to talk about water. In short, the reading is very sluggish.

Adopting... Come on. Expect……

The timeline is so messed up. It's only been half a month since chapter 130, and only two months after more than 300 chapters. The heroine was just over 6 years old, then under 6 years old, and then under 5 years old again. She is getting younger and younger as she lives. At first, the heroine planned to take any test, but failed to achieve any test and entered a new plot. The heroine took the martial arts test and did not upgrade because of the reward for being first, and then because she could not get promoted? The exam was taken three months later, and another month later? ? ? Even if you don't want the heroine to grow up and remain a little girl, there's no need to be so far-fetched.

The writing is too detailed, too detailed, and only a few days have passed since many chapters, and I really can't keep up after hundreds of chapters.

It's so annoying that others always don't know her true strength, and then she becomes a pig teammate. Shouldn't we understand each other's abilities when we form a team together? Even if we can't tell some trump cards, teammates who are doing tasks together must have an idea of ​​the general strength of others, right? Just rely on brainstorming to cooperate? Not knowing the combat effectiveness of teammates leads to wrong judgments and wrong decisions. The battlefield changes rapidly. If the delay causes serious consequences, everyone else will be killed.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh not. Kavin is stuck in a wonderful place, i think i need to start saving articles

The writing is really good, but it's also really boring. There are too many embellished words, which makes it easy for people to get confused and lose track of what is written.

(｡ò ∀ ó｡) I got stuck here, and I really want to dig through the big draft box! ! ! ! (I saved more than a hundred chapters and then finished reading_(:з∠)_) I want to see Xixi beat them up, and I want to squeeze Xixi's tender, smooth and fleshy face every day! ! ! ! ! And Xixi's soft hair! ! ! ! Want to touch! ✪ω✪

Why does it feel like Yue Xi is getting more and more alive, especially the recent scene of snatching meat, which is simply too childish, just like the Yue Xi in the beginning. Unlike the Yue Xi who was in Yunzhou before. I still like Yue Xi who is brave and decisive. Also, the meat-grabbing scene is too embarrassing, like the silly son of a landlord. I know Yue Xi is the favorite of the group, this book is written like this, but can you let Yue Xi really grow up for a time? She has always been a loli, and when she becomes stronger, she can't just recognize her father! How many relatives have you recognized? And why do you no longer care about your former relatives when you become stronger? Madam Yue and Dad He haven't appeared for a long time! Since you want to write about family love, then don't write so utilitarian! Either don't write, or write well. Don't be like this!

I would like to make a small suggestion, can you try to reduce this kind of over-imaginative and self-defeating plot? It's weird and frustrating to watch too much. It's like pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It feels quite interesting once or twice. If you do this every time, you will always make others think that you are not good enough. It will be very annoying if you feel that you have to explain all the time. It's like you are a very capable person who has made a lot of achievements, but when you apply for a job, all the work units think you are not good enough. They don't even give you a chance to introduce yourself, so they kick you away. It's really annoying to see this happen too often. Then every time I waste time writing about things caused by these imaginations, it will also cause the plot to progress very slowly, and the enthusiasm for watching the two sides fight is not as high as it was at the beginning. There are also those other people who make up their own minds due to various differences in understanding or misunderstandings caused by speaking skills. Some feel that it is not very necessary and has little effect on promoting the plot. And after watching too much, it does not feel interesting or touching. As for Xiao Xi's original character design, I think it's enough for everyone to know, and there is no need to reinforce her image of being bad at communication through this kind of brainstorming plot several times. It would feel better if she deleted it a little. Reduce the psychological activities a little, like today, just mention it once or summarize in one sentence why that teammate always protects Xiaoxi and how he does it, so that readers know. This way, more plots can be written, and it looks more enjoyable. Repeated mentioning can indeed easily affect the reading experience.

I just saw that no one seems to have rated the web version. If you log in with a computer, click on I want to rate in the upper right corner. Currently, there are less than 10 people who have rated it.... As a CP-free novel, this novel has both a refreshing and refreshing feeling. I am looking forward to it. At least I can tell that the author is a mother. I hope more people will know this article. I only found out about Orz because of Amway.

When will the heroine have a brain? If you want to exchange for food, just ask. It is obvious that learning martial arts is more profitable, but in the end, I figured out how to do embroidery in order to exchange for food, so I stayed in the small village. Otherwise, wouldn't I have gone to the town long ago?

It's so shocking. The setting and characters are pretty good, but there are too many unnecessary parts in the article, and I'm afraid others won't read it.

The heroine has been using force to bully other ordinary children. She often steals other people's food and beats them. When talking about it, she said that the heroine is still young and not sensible. If you are not sensible, you can learn from it. However, you can't see that the heroine or the heroine has any sense of wrongness. She is completely like a naughty child and an indulgent naughty child. Stop it. Instead of bullying the weak, she was written as a "villain" and was slapped in the face. It was really funny. What's even more funny is that after the incident happened, no "adult" came out to say that it was wrong for the heroine to steal other people's things. And the heroine's attitude after realizing the "mistake" was that she only needs to not be discovered when she bullies others in the future? ? ? Isn't it like an adult saying after a naughty child breaks something, "He is still young and immature, so don't worry about the child" 🙂

The writing is really good. This kind of book that is purely upgraded and does not have a low-smart female character is really great.

The purpose of writing this text is to see the world created by the author DaDa. What we are looking at is DaDa's world. As long as DaDa writes happily, we will grow up together with DaDa and Xiao Xi!

Do you have any recommendations for online works that compare with IQ?

Where is the best place to start? I really don't want to throw away my brain. It's too hard to accept it.

I have bought more than 20 pictures, and after reading them all in one sitting, I still can't hold them back. Come on, real person!

The author especially likes to use incomprehensible words and typos. Just like the instinct in another book, there are so many that it makes people go numb! Use another word or don't use it at all, it would affect the perception too much.

Dear author, I hope you can be more concise and concise when writing. It is really uncomfortable to read. Can you not use a lot of words to modify the things you have mentioned in one sentence (a bit suspicious of hydrology) In fact, the subject matter of the novel is quite good. I was also attracted by the title to read it, but when I clicked on it, I felt... There are too many unnecessary things. Psychological activities cannot always be used as a means to promote the plot of the story. Other descriptions must also be specific, and people Character image, description of the environment, etc. In fact, there are some subtle points, such as the unclear training system In this world of the heroine, there are people who cultivate literature, martial arts, and immortality, but I didn't expect that there are also people who cultivate the gods. The chapters about the heroine obtaining the Water God's Law are a bit baffling. First of all, the characters. I originally thought that those characters involved in resources would be emphasized and there would be foreshadowing. However, the heroine was hiding clothes and eating chicken in that town. Meat, back in the river, let's not talk about how she held her breath for such a long time, and then suddenly turned to the third master, said a lot of inexplicable words, and then suddenly turned to a small boat on the water to dock with a person, and then suddenly a war broke out, and then I found out that the people on the boat were where the resources were. What a fool, who knows, I thought they were arresting the heroine, but the heroine was engaged in an ideological struggle in the river for nearly half a chapter, and finally chose Choosing a shot Then there is the character design of the heroine. I don't think it is necessary to keep emphasizing that women's eyes are ancient and immovable. I really want to complain about other ways of describing people. There is no need to hang them on this tree This article has been completed. Although my discussion has no effect, it is really my true feelings. I really think this subject matter is good 😭😭😭

The story is okay, but it's too long-winded and makes people tired after reading it! !

I gradually understood why I had to write around "eating", because only this instinctive attribute will not cause riots in the sea of ​​consciousness, and at the same time accumulate energy to repair the sea of ​​consciousness. On the surface, it seems that the protagonist is a foodie and is not doing her job properly. In fact, she has a firm grasp of the current problems and dilemmas of survival and is solving them every moment 🙂

Just, it looks good! Sometimes I feel confused, because in the middle period, the heroine clearly had a star sea virtual world, and also talked about her own star path, but later on, the heroine became the Lord of Time? The heroine must be very fickle! But maybe it's because the heroine didn't know it at the beginning. And it has nothing to do with the title of the book! After all, it was originally mentioned in the later stage that the heroine would be able to fuse/refine the way of heaven, but in fact there was none.

Ah~~ nice update~ I love it so much✪ω✪