The Chronicle of Yuan Neng in the Future

The heroine's upgrade time was not arranged in the early stage. Originally, she only had two levels. Later, I upgraded to a level in one day. Emmmm, this is too exaggerated. It feels like there is something wrong with the previous level setting. I reached Level 9 in less than a month. A bit exaggerated.

I am also a female protagonist. Some novels are labeled as strong female characters. When I first started reading, it was indeed a strong female character who refuses to admit defeat and loves to deceive others. But as soon as the male protagonist came out, my style changed instantly. Either the female protagonist was not strong enough and was hunted down, or she was a female protagonist. The main character is not strong enough to protect, etc., And then there are various ways for the male main character to increase his presence. In short, the male main character will always have a higher level of cultivation than the female main character. Every time I see this kind of article, I want to lock the male protagonist in a dark room and let the female main character improve her cultivation level quickly.

I like this kind of heroine who is self-reliant, grows up step by step, doesn't have many cheats, doesn't rely on men, and becomes a little strong, without those things that are too romantic, sweet, indecisive, and intrigue.

I read a novel yesterday. The female protagonist is a goddess-like figure, aloof and indifferent to the pursuit of several outstanding male supporting characters. After more than two hundred chapters... The twist is that an ordinary man will fall in love with her! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The reason is that he won't get into trouble and his bed skills are good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! What a super invincible critical hit! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

After reading more than 30 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. We agreed that there will be no male protagonist? Did you promise there would be no emotional entanglements? I wanted to read it without censorship. I decided to read this book just because the author swore he had no emotional entanglements. But I felt cheated. First let's talk about Ren hope and the masked man. Forget about the masked man. According to the comments, he is a servant. He seems to have no emotional entanglement with the heroine? Not sure. What the hell is that Ren hope? The younger brother Lin Mu appears later, and he seems to be interested in the heroine as well. His father also made an appointment with the heroine's father? Although I said it depends on the heroine's intention, I still felt very uncomfortable watching it. There is also Huo Shifeng, who also has an inexplicable liking for the heroine. Okay, I know maybe none of these are male protagonists, maybe there is no male protagonist like the author said, but! Is it true that any man who appears must be interested in the heroine? Can't we just be good friends? Can't it just be a normal friendship? Can't it just be an acquaintance? And why do the people around the heroine keep making fun of the heroine's love relationship? When I see the heroine and a guy together, I think there is something going on between them. As for the character of the heroine, I don't feel cute at all, I just feel so stupid and bad-mouthed! I am really annoyed by the fact that you are so stupid. You are putting off doing things that can be done with just one sentence, and you are too lazy to say them. I think you are stupid and can't talk about it! There are others, such as that Ma Rongrong who is rude and talks nonsense, which is not pleasing to the eye. The heroine's age does not match her heart. Moreover, sometimes it is said that she is in the second grade of junior high school, sometimes she is talking about Pu Gao, sometimes she is said to be thirteen or fourteen years old, and sometimes she is said to be three months away from turning 16. (This may be because I didn't watch it carefully. Anyway, that's what I watched. It keeps changing.) There are other plots that make people want to complain about it, but these are still tolerable and acceptable, and I can hold it in without vomiting. No more talking, I gave up the book anyway. (PS: If you don't like the above personal venting of emotions, you can ignore it.)

I found that the heroine and the people around her in this book like to make up their minds. They don't explain anything clearly. They always take it for granted. They don't say anything in front of their family members. They just think in self-righteous ways. Everyone watching is anxious for them. Can't they speak up if they have something to say? Not autistic

I really hope to see a story with a real female protagonist, rather than a female protagonist wearing a male mask. When the female protagonist repeatedly uses a male image to solve problems, I know that I may be disappointed again, because deep down the author also agrees that the female protagonist cannot compete with men even if she is written to be invincible. This is not in line with the original intention of writing about strong women.

I've seen this before. The character of the protagonist is hard to describe. He looks like he's not smart.

See Chapter 28. Various book lists say that it looks good in the later stages. But I can't hold on. I only see one: the future heroine who jumps around and speaks very little and is instinctive. . . . . 😂Isn't it embarrassing! ! ! Isn't this embarrassing?

To be honest, this book has always been on the bookshelf. I can only read it when it is free. I can't read it at other times! Although the storyline is good, the writing is awkward, the heroine is very dull but not cute, there are many but not delicate psychological descriptions, it is constantly upgraded, the interaction with the family is zero, the heroine has a low IQ and EQ, and is full of flaws. In fact, why doesn't the author write a male video? If you write a female video, I won't be able to see it, so I won't complain about you.

I can't hold on anymore, the heroine's character feels a bit silly

Am I really watching the heroine? It feels like the main character has a male body almost throughout.

How can I put it, the subject matter is still very attractive, but the writing style often makes me want to give up on the article, not knowing whether it will get better later. It looks particularly awkward and awkward to watch.

Why does it make sense to write the heroine's character like that? It looks awkward.

Didn't you say there is no male protagonist? After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel annoyed that there is always a man jumping around next to the protagonist. Maybe it's because I have preconceived notions that I can't accept it without a male protagonist!

By the way, the heroine's lack of common sense is too serious... After reading more than a hundred chapters, didn't anyone explain it to her?

After reading more than 20 chapters, the character of the heroine is really hard to describe. She is too idiotic. After reading other comments, I plan to try again from chapter 30.

I can't help but make a few comments about it. There are too many descriptions, and the really tense battle scenes are briefly mentioned one after another. There is always a feeling that you have already eaten the fruit and met each other, just show me this... The feeling of falling off the chain

Does it look good later? But after reading the previous ones, I really can't hold on anymore, I can't accept it😱

I bought a few chapters and read them in the middle, and I found that I had the problem of randomly segmenting sentences again. Why do I need three commas to connect things that can be connected in one sentence? . I would rather read the diary-oriented writing style above. The novel is for me to read. . You have to at least consider whether the reader will understand the meaning. The author's writing style needs to be improved

There are some minor issues with this book. The first 30 or so chapters are a bit bad, but the writing gets better and better later on. It's not bad. There is no male protagonist in the book but there is ambiguity. It's still readable. However, the writing in the back is okay and I'm looking forward to new chapters.

It's so uncomfortable to bring in the main character in this book

Good looking

I would like to ask the author, does this book have a lily theme? I think this book is very interesting. If Lily is there, it might subvert my three views. I'm afraid I won't be able to read it, so I want to ask the author about it.

The author suddenly remembered the reason why I abandoned the book before. The medicine should be mixed with water. Can the medicine be used even if it is mixed with water? That means it has been scrapped, not diluted. The medicine can only be used if it is diluted with specific symptoms. Even in reality, traditional Chinese medicine is diluted with saline water. Medical saline can not be used with ordinary water or salt water. I hope the author is a little more rigorous. Everything else is good. I still like it because there is no male protagonist. Thank you for your hard work, but I can't stand the medicine mixed with water. If you really can't use water, it will definitely be useless.

I changed two or three images, hiding this thing and hiding it, and the dog I wrote was so bad.

It seems too tiring to break sentences. . . After how many chapters will the sentence fragmentation return to normal?

To the uncle, the heroine's siblings are his nieces and nephews, not nephews and nieces. His brother's children are his nephews and nieces. The uncle's son is the nephew of the hostess. This is a bit convoluted, but it is actually very simple. Determine the title of the elder, and the title of the junior is also determined. Uncle and aunt are cousins, which is the name of maternal relatives in ancient Chinese, so the junior corresponds to the nephew of the maternal family, and aunt is the title of the cousin, so the corresponding is nephew. The author should pay attention to

Hee hee, it is linked with the little girl Yue Xi from the author's other work "The Plan for Dominance of Heaven", which is quite good.

Is the extra episode of "Lost in the Road" not exciting? ? ? ? Can I write it in full? ?