The Iron-Blooded General in the War Against Japan

After reading dozens of chapters, I was persuaded to quit. Although there were many problems from the beginning, including various irrationalities, typos, etc., Many people complained about it, but I still continued reading. But after reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't bear it anymore. I went to the county town to get medicine for a few wounded soldiers. I think this is possible. However, the author forcibly dehumanized the soldiers. They originally went there secretly against orders. There were about thirty people in total, and about twenty died. In the end, a few wounded were saved. The author may have wanted to make the protagonist grow and let the protagonist experience failure, but in this case, it was really too poisonous to forcefully depress the intelligence and deliberately describe it. As an old bookworm, I actually have pretty good resistance to poison, but I still can't resist the forced and deliberate poison. Originally, the anti-war novels were all about "refreshing". Even if you experience failure, it should be a reasonable failure if the protagonist operates normally and is not mentally retarded. All the deliberate and forceful ways of writing are too poisonous.

I have read Chapters 7 and 8, and they keep repeating and emphasizing that when I was a conscript for two years, I learned a lot of killing skills. There is a young man in my company who retired as a conscript. Why didn't he learn a lot of killing skills? ! ! !

The previous part is really well written, and it is not easy for readers to follow the author's ideas, and it is relatively readable. However, I want to say that the repeated looping routines in the middle gradually made readers disgusted. With so many resources, so many troops, and more than 1,000 chapters, it is still messing around in the original territory. Is it worthy of a time traveler? We have negotiated with the enemy, you hit me, I hit you, you let me develop a bit, and I wait for you to mobilize your troops. If someone assassinates me, you just assassinate me. It's boring to keep doing these routines.

After reading more than 50 chapters, the plot does gradually get better, but there are more and more word usage, typos and logical errors...

I also think your second picture is wrong. You should have learned it from, for example, some killer organizations. You must have at least joined a killer organization, otherwise you would not have learned the killing techniques. To put it bluntly, the military technology is just a three-legged cat. You go find a regular killer department. He will teach military service members like you in the army to behave well. Then do you know what will happen to people like you who have not received formal military training? At most, they teach you to obey orders in two years. For example, when there is a big crisis in the motherland, they give you a gun so that you can go to war.

This book is awesome! ! ! 🤭🤭🤭🤭

Brother, although your writing is good, there are several shortcomings that I pointed out, and I hope you can adopt them. , aren't there a few real Japanese among the spies lurking in the first team? Is it possible that every time you ambush the enemy, there is no spy among them? You are talking about the Japanese and puppet troops in the team. That and absenteeism, right? I remember one of them said this. The couple's reinforcements from Lanyang County. Then can you guarantee that none of them are spies? Won't they expose your team? Although you are writing a novel, you still have to rely on history in many situations. To write. Because you are not making up history. But I think the book you wrote is pretty good, because at least it's not like the protagonist in the TV series I saw yelling, and then the enemies opened the city gates. In fact, you can also adopt it. For example, it is the same as in Liangjian, where the base areas are taken away by the enemy. Then put yourself to death and live. For example, let's say you recruit an invading army. Or for example, if you encounter a big battlefield, you can take back a bunch of VIPs. Otherwise, it would feel like you had a smooth journey and didn't encounter much crisis of destruction. It doesn't feel very real, because no matter which base area we were in, we all had the experience of being taken over by the Japanese. Not to mention Yan'an, Yan'an seemed to have been taken over once by the Kuomintang.

Updates are too slow, I've been chasing the book for a long time!

I sent a telegram and it was interrupted several times. Did you know that? Generally speaking, a telegram must be sent twice, and if no confirmation reply is received from the other party, it must be sent twice more. Like the original spy. Generally speaking, information is sent through probation personnel channels.

And if your thunder cannon hits a telegraph machine and everyone is dead, the telegraph treasure will still go out of order. Aren't you farting? The electronic technology back then could be imagined using a pig's butt. It exploded this time.

The old book has been written and played, and this new book should be updated a few times every day. The book is good! Pin it to the top!

These days people who don't know a thing about history write historical novels, people who don't know a thing about military knowledge write military novels, and there are still people who read them with relish. Don't blame them for the fact that the quality is getting worse and worse. It's you who have fattened them up.

The writing is okay, and I will work hard to update it to bring a new vision to the audience.

This book is rubbish. The superior in charge of the Eighth Route Army claimed to be in a lowly position. He couldn't walk when he looked at women. He was like a bull in heat and forced emotional drama. I read more than ten chapters in the first part and gave up decisively in the end. I guess the author is a junior high school student.

It's so poisonous, and they teach people how to fish and make traps. At that time, 9.9 Out of 10 people in the Red Army were idiots, right? Are you telling me that none of them know how to fish? No one knows how to make a trap?

I'd rather Pig's Knuckle was awesome before crossing over and then continue to be awesome again. . . Don't be ordinary before time travel and then come here to show off, it will be embarrassing as hell.

What I wrote before was fine, but after I went to Chongqing to study rocket launchers and penicillin, I seriously blew my cover. To be honest, with China's laboratory conditions, it is impossible to develop penicillin. Moreover, the penicillin developed did not have animal testing. It was directly injected into the wounded soldiers in the clinic, and then it was able to cure the disease. Holy shit, my God. I almost burst out laughing.

Have you ever written a novel about the Kuomintang and the Party's war of resistance? Please recommend

To be honest, I no longer like to read anti-war novels in which you kill enemies on the battlefield after time travel. No matter how powerful a person is, he will not be of much use on the battlefield. Even if you can kill 10 Japanese on average a day, 3,650 in a year, and 36,500 in 10 years, it will not affect the overall situation of the entire Anti-Japanese War. At that time, China had no shortage of brave warriors or excellent commanders, but what it lacked was the military-industrial system. The greatest role of the time-travelers was their unique vision and ability to know the direction of development. Once China can establish a basic industrial system and produce qualified guns and ammunition on a large scale, it will be enough to drive Japan out of China. Under the banner of the fascist united front, it is entirely possible to obtain some basic industries from the Soviet Union and the United States.

Laughing to death, the little devil also calls the puppet army, the puppet army, why don't you kill them 😄, when I saw this sentence, I immediately thought of the puppet Manchukuo in the TV series who took out a puppet Manchukuo seal, and they also knew that they were fake.

After reading this book, I felt like I was watching an anti-Japanese drama

A man who had been a conscript for two years wanted to escape simply because he had no food to eat. It's bullshit to take good care of your body and then come back. Malnutrition was common during the Republic of China, and fishing villages also did not have enough to eat. How could they maintain their health? A soldier who has served for two years has no revolutionary consciousness at all. Such a person is just a small citizen, not a soldier. The author probably has never been a soldier.

A 10-year-old bookworm died after testing poison on his own body. It was really poisonous, so poisonous that it blinded the eyes. During the Long March, the Red Army's internal cooking squad even fought for power and profit for the position of deputy squad leader. The key is that the protagonist is still thinking about pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. I really like it

I am also an old book fan. In fact, before 2008, I especially liked reading anti-Japanese novels. Later anti-Japanese novels were no longer interesting. If I can't write a few chapters, I just look for an organization. I remember the anti-Japanese novel I wrote in the past. I didn't find any organization. Later, it was all about looking for organizations, or looking for organizations. It's not interesting to watch at all. As long as they are anti-Japanese novels.

I looked at the table of contents. Chapter 1,000 is still a garrison leader? Lin Biao became the commander of the army at the age of 19. Is this still called time travel? My stomach hurts from watching it!

Alas, the author has written three books. To summarize this book: First, he is the leader in more than 300 chapters, and after nearly a thousand chapters, he is still the leader, just like the iron-blooded wise general; second, it is not a name, he is always a witty protagonist (whether it is Li Hao or not) and a supporting character with weak questions and objections, facing the villain who is a little smart and stupid. The deputy captain or chief of staff was crushed; third, the protagonist's character's ability or memory suddenly improved a lot; fourth, the villain basically has no name, the sense of substitution is too weak, and it is easy for executives to fatigue; fifth, the sense of rhythm is not good, there are no transitions or flat chapters, and it keeps beating; sixth, the heroine will not say it, she is suspected to be seven or eight years old

I was poisoned when I saw that I had left the army to build a pharmaceutical factory in Chongqing. This is a military novel, not an urban novel or a spy war novel. It's a pity that those who subscribed have subscribed to so many chapters. After seeing Yiban being poisoned, there is no one left

I found that whenever the protagonist proposes a plan, his peers and subordinates will immediately oppose it. There are so many troops and he has never been promoted, not to mention that he has eliminated so many enemies. He has enough seniority to be an old Red Army soldier, has enough military exploits, and has a large territory. After making so many contributions, he still has a regimental position at the end, which does not match the title of the book.

If a company only has 10 to 20 kilograms of fish, can one person have one bite?

Divine Drama, Thunder Drama. The protagonist is 13 years old and already has no idea what the world is. A 13-year-old child catches 50 kilograms of fish and 50 kilograms of prey for the whole group every day. So many troops pass by and sweep the supplies. Are these fish and prey refreshed every day? He went to the battlefield and brought back dozens or hundreds of kilograms of weapons and ammunition, and he came back alive like a superman.