Bright Sword: Serving as Kong Jie’s Guard

Kong Jie has four advantages; such a renowned general will not be defeated in the face of any difficulty. Kong Jie's first strength is his strong will; he is neither arrogant in victory nor discouraged in defeat. The Independent Regiment was ambushed by Yamamoto Ichiki's special forces due to unavoidable factors: even if the regimental headquarters, which had few troops, was attacked in the…

A good start, but hopefully they won't overhype it and end up wiping out a whole Japanese battalion with just one Type 38 rifle. Remember, even in the Battle of Pingxingguan, the 115th Division, with over a thousand Red Army veterans killed or wounded in three regiments, couldn't wipe out a single Japanese field division battalion.

They're treating special forces like gods again. I think soldiers from wartime are far more capable than so-called special forces; after all, they fought their way through bloodshed.

I originally collected these materials because I planned to write a novel called "Bright Sword." The protagonist I envisioned was a returned overseas student who had just been recruited to Black Cloud Stronghold by the second-in-command. However, I was only allowed to write up to the regimental level, and I couldn't include the civil war. Even novels are subject to these restrictions.

Once is enough to infiltrate enemy territory; the Japanese aren't stupid. If the protagonist continues with this level of overconfidence, he'll suffer the consequences.

What was the point of training so-called special forces in that era? No equipment, no logistical support, no information advantage, no fire support, poor mobility, and barely enough to eat, let alone nutrition. If you trained at half the intensity of modern special forces for a month, out of a hundred people, maybe three or five would survive; the rest would be crippled, if not killed.

The more it's written, the more outrageous it gets. Putting everything else aside, how could you possibly hide such a massive military achievement? Were the Kuomintang secret police all dead? They moved such a huge military factory from Taiyuan; such a great achievement, and they just suppressed it? And they only gave him a meaningless battalion-level unit? What audacity!

Stop writing. Just leave it as a bad ending. Forget the entire Eighth Route Army; you killed more Japanese soldiers than anyone else on the entire Chinese battlefield. And this is only a brigade-level officer? How are the Generalissimo, the Central Committee, and Chiang Kai-shek supposed to feel?

Xiuqin actually died, and in a rather tragic way, from a poison gas attack. At least in the original novel, her death was dramatic and memorable. This? I've always felt that Xiuqin was a perfect match for Li Yunlong, even better than Tian Yu later on. I don't deny that Li Yunlong and Tian Yu loved each other, but their values ​​were different.

The start was good; please maintain this level of quality. Please keep your writing relevant to the times and avoid overly dramatic or drastic changes. If you're not confident in your emotional expression, don't write about it or gloss over it. Also, the updates are too few each time; I hope you can add more. Thank you!