Grocery Store from Another Continent

The different world not only has cat restaurants and izakayas, but now there are also grocery stores... It's not that it's bad to follow the trend, but the author needs to understand what the subject is. What impressed you most about the first two? Figure? Plot? None of it~it's the plates of food~The products in your article should not only amaze the aliens in the article, but also the readers, so that there will be no situation fatigue. Therefore, for common lighters, flashlights, thirteen incense, etc., Just a few words of the product name cannot support your hundreds of thousands of words of plot ~ but the science, culture, art, etc. Contained in the product itself that the public does not know or have not paid attention to are the highlights. To put it simply, for example, Thirteen Fragrances, from Shen Nong Baicao to medicines and seasonings to taste ratios, races, cultures, human brain dopamine, etc., All have names. If you dig into it, it is much better than the same "Wow~" from otherworldly people.

The theme of your book, author, is a grocery store, not a snack shop. If you read too much, you will find it annoying.

It feels a bit like a restaurant in another world

It feels a bit like a late night canteen, but! Author, are you sure you're not off topic? You named it a grocery store, not a snack shop

After the major changes, I was actually hungry😰

I prefer to rewrite the previous texts, which are like novels, and the new ones are like animated texts, which is a headache.

I discovered this book by accident and it was indeed a breath of fresh air. Although this style of writing does not seem to be very popular for Qidian, I still hope that the author can stick to it and support you.

Many authors know too little about the European Middle Ages and are limited by their own experience, knowledge and imagination. I can't imagine the treatment that the aristocratic class in a country full of swords and magic can enjoy, but I think a bowl of instant noodles can win people's hearts. The most basic principle is a simple grilled steak without any sauce, just the most basic spices and salt and some berries. The taste is not better than instant noodles? If the top exploiter of feudal civilization is moved by instant noodles, it can only be said that there is a lack of supplies. Guilds, chambers of commerce, auctions, aristocratic salons, these things based on a certain social foundation will not exist. Enjoyment is linked to the strength and age of civilization, otherwise the setting will collapse. The richly dressed nobles entertained the guests with rare fruits and wine, and then each of them nibbled on a piece of raw meat. They were talking about potions that enhance strength, powerful secrets, and expensive magic equipment. Are you amazed after eating a bowl of instant noodles? It is as ridiculous as a farmer fantasizing about an emperor cultivating the land with a golden hoe.

Without the first chapter, the beginning is incomprehensible

So poisonous! ! ! It has never been so poisonous before! ! !

This is the first time I have seen a book with such a low sense of protagonist, but it somehow fits my taste.

I don't understand . Do you think you are writing a light novel? This is the starting point, not the place for light novels, ah understand

In the setting of the restaurant in another world, although there are some changes in race and style, the reality is downplayed, but because there is no sense of picture, the overall text is actually a bit thin, and there does not necessarily have to be a main line that runs through it, but if it is very scattered, the existence of the protagonist will be diluted and it can be said that it is almost gone.

The items in the protagonist's shop are all treasures to the other world, but no one is interested in making money. The moral quality of the other world is so high? When the lizard man sells flashlights, the protagonist knows that his goods are being resold by others. He reminds himself to be careful not to make the same mistake again, and then turns around and sells a bunch of lighters to other merchants. The protagonist is really bad at doing business! I can't complain anymore

I feel like this after reading this novel. It's very healing. I really like this kind of fairy tale-like story.

Regarding the author vote, I'll give it to you next time.

This idea of ​​exchanging materials from another world means that without immunity, it is really a world protector. So where are the faces of the characters in your book? Are they all followers of the Faceless God here?

The author's character description needs to be richer...

The writing style feels so feminine. Is the author a woman?

The name of this chapter really resembles the canteen in another world.

In the first few chapters, they were all about selling food, the ones sold next door 😅

After reading the first few chapters, you can see that the grocery store is all about black forest cakes, and the dialogues of the characters are actually in a Japanese style tone. Bad review!

The sense of déjà vu is so strong at the beginning, it reminds me of the izakaya in another world that I am chasing_(:з∠)_

Compared with the revised article, I prefer the original version

Again, there is no main line or even a branch line. What's the point of having so many characters appear? Indeed, everyone has his cute spots. But, it's too repetitive. The contents of all chapters are nothing more than people from other worlds marveling at modern food, utensils, and wine. . . . . . Then what? There are no other extensions at all. Besides, what's the use of a small store only opening in the early morning? Study that Japanese drama? It was a tavern and restaurant, so there was naturally a lot to talk about. You said, if you go to a supermarket or a small store, would you talk to the clerk about 10 yuan? Also, why doesn't the protagonist leave the shop? It's been hundreds or thousands of years since the discovery of another world, but there's nothing to be gained from it? I'm confused as to why the author didn't expand on it. Is there magic in other worlds? What is the scenery like in another world? Is there a tree taller than the sky in another world? Are there any delicious fruits in other worlds? Will the sky in another world be bluer? Are there any plants and animals in other worlds that can improve the desert? Why can't I see any benefit of being in another world? Except gold and silver?

Personally I think it's quite interesting