War Mage

I have been battling wits and courage with this legend from another world for half a month. Is it interesting? The plot can be clearly explained in 3 chapters, but it has to be delayed. Just like an old woman's foot wrap—smelly and long.

When I first read it, the story was okay, but the explanations in parentheses should be as minimal as possible, and should be integrated into the narrative of the text, otherwise it would be too blunt (this is just a personal opinion, not a request)

I think this book is quite good now. I just read ten pages, but I found that there are too many brackets, a lot of explanations, and sometimes the explanations are even longer than the text. What is this for? It is to read the plot of the novel, not to read the author's comments in vernacular. I would like to ask if there have been any changes in the later period, and where did the changes begin? I can't stand the explanations in the brackets. I hope someone can tell me something

Some students say that my plot is too slow. In fact, it contains a lot of content, and many background issues are interspersed with explanations. Let me talk about it again. You can read a pinned comment. The author usually does not talk about useless things. Also, after the end of this alien world, due to the substantial strengthening of the system, some high-level contacts can be made.

What a terrible book, I don't understand the writing

There are so few new books on the planeswalker genre these days that it's rare to see a giant panda. 🤝

The subject matter of this book is still very good, but when it is time to upgrade and explode, it is mentioned in one stroke. When it is time to describe the development of power that makes people excited, it fails to clearly explain how to change the map. When it is time to break out into a war and achieve a crushing game, it is suppressed again. In the final climax of the counterattack, it is Spring and Autumn writing style again. The highlight of the data flow is hidden. Now that I have read dozens of chapters, it is almost impossible to continue like this.

The author's brackets are really disgusting. You add a () every few sentences. Author, you don't want me to be involved in the story, right? Those introductions are slowly introduced as the story develops, and they are not meant to be explained in parentheses from time to time! After reading books for so many years, this is the first time I've seen someone like you

It's too hard to update, so let's wait for half a month.

It's disgusting that the main character often has accidents

After thinking about it, I decided to give it away on a special day. For subscriptions or something, I could only use gift coins. 🤭As for when is this special day? What do you think?

Some details are not well written

Happy birthday🎁

There are less than 5,000 people, and the popularity ranking is so high.

The writing is not good, and it seems a bit confusing.

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